Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123)

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NONIE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#981

Fantastic chapter Avika

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Shyamaladevi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#982

I read the story today in one go.it is awesome. When are you going to update? Waiting dear.

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madhurima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#983

Update sooon dear

Waiting...😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: ishagupta
When will u update di?

Aww so sweet of u ishu ...thanks a lot for waiting dear

Actually im going out of town for few days ...so wont be able to update this story...but before leaving i want to complete my TS dear ...i will finish that first then i will update this when i come back ...sorry jaan ...but i promise to update as soon as possible 😊 hope u understand 😳

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#985

Hello diii .. 😎
Yar ajkal bhot ghmne lg gye ho ap ...
Hmmm

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#986

Awhhh!!! That was completely mesmerizing!!*love*
This story created a different magic!!
Jalaal... Jalaal... Jalaal!!! He is just so perfect
And my goddess.. Jodha!! Gosh!!
Avika... U wrote it so beautifully love...
The only thing which is making me go mad is that ... I finished all the eight chapters in a go and now I'm left with nothing to read further
*crying*
Please update soon... Coz I can't wait to see their meet after this open heart ceremony*haha*
Love nd so much love
Shivangi

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#987

Amazing update avika akka...

jalal was lost thinking how could beeing with jodha calm his mind haha abdul catched his right nd asked right question to jalal ...

otherside jodha to is confused what is happening with and what is she feeling towards jalal haha cute na...

i felt bad for noor akka poor soul this maham is too much she is scaring hell out of little noor nd playing double game... good that hamida came on right time nd treated noor i hope her truth come out soon...

wow college scene was super jodha was to run away for jalal nd jalal want to talk to her haha fun... good word surya... ahh... but moti is going behind a wrong person to be hubby for her sweet Sil haha... wow joja understand each other very well... great...

here come emotional part of this update nd d story till nw...joja past painful life...

what jodha told about sharing happiness nd pain is 100% right...

i like d way jalal opened himself nd told jodha about his painful part the way he is craving for love first he didn't get it from his father then his mother was his world then he lost his nd then he could nt get it from his mother as his sister became his world nd nw he lost her too... poor soul but he took up everything to negative side at least he had someone wh loved him...

then jodha painful past d way she lost her parents on her birthday nd wh they lost their everything... but she took positive side by loving her brother more nd being a pillar of support for him ...

d way she maid jalal understand by giving her own example nd the thing he is nt seeing was so lovely... she just told him what was d difference they were seeing things nd left for him to take his decitation on own ... that was amazing...

yes jalal took right choice to go talk to his mother...

wow akka i like this in u that u will nt leave anyone feel sad nd wow salima is alive that was a twist is that girl jodha bring she soon to sense akka ...

as always sorry for late comment...

thanks for pm...

nd waiting for next update...