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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sonnet87

wow really, u know Kannada, it is nice to meet u too dear 🤗 I think u r from AP, right?

Yep... AP... Hyderabad...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: savindi.db

i think you are talking about a scene from who loves him more sweet heart


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sorry laksh dii
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u for the lovely comments dears.
Next update will be given by Payal.. hot hot sr update..
Thank u sooo much Payal for the hot update..
Thank u all.
Love u all...


CHAPTER 54:

Jodha happily eating pizza..
Jalal is in thinking..

Jodha: ok baby... I am done.. I will just go & do bath..

Jalal: oh yeah.. better do that.. u must be tired.. better do headbath.. u will be relaxed.. take time.. don't worry..in his mind he is doing dance.. I will clean now.. hurray.. thank god. U saved me today..

Jodha: what's cooking in ur brain Mr jalal?? Y u are so keen to send me for the bath.. with questioning look..

Jalal: no no baby.. not like that.. u go first..

Jodha :.ok.. thinks poor hubby.. I know what's cooking in ur brain.. u won't get the keys.. I locked it & I know I am taking it to washroom.. how will u open it... hahahah... Njoy ur searching...
Goes to bath..

Jalal goes to cupboard to open the room.. & but his bad luck he didn't find it. He searches every where in the home.. But didn't able to find it..
Thinks.. oh god.. did she open it?? But she is not angry at me.. or she didn't talked about it.. what do now??

Soon jodha came out.. asks jalal did he need anything??
Jalal:.nothing nothing..
Jodha says ok.. close the door..

Jalal tried to break it..But alas he didn't get successful..

Finally jodha all dressed up in saree( not so perfectly)... she is looking simple & sweet.. green & white combination perfectly suits for her..
Jodha: thinks.. not bad jalal. U have good taste..

Jalal tried a lot & finally settled on sofa..

Jalal: thinks.. jalal.. take lite.. u don't have another option.. common it's time to face angry jodha.. oh god.. kaha phas diya mujhe..

Jodha sees him.. feels shy to go infront of him..But she has to go..

Jodha: jalal jalal.. where are u.. I think u are searching for something.. did u got it..

Jalal: how she knows.? How can't she..after all I make that much noise.. & says. Ha Sonu... I got it..

Jodha slowly comes in front of him.. really show me then..

Jalal lifts his face & looks at her.. he was clean bowled..

Jalal: hayialla...

Jodha: I think u are searching for this shows keys to him..

Jalal just awestruck.. looking at her with his widen eyes..he forgot to speak for a moment..

Jodha: how is it hubby???

Jalal: beautiful..

Jodha: just beautiful?? With pout face..

Jalal:.no no.. I can't describe..

Jodha comes near him.. place her hands in his shoulders..

Jodha: I am waiting Chinnu...

Jalal: what??

Jodha: I am waiting...

Jalal: this time... jalal understood her. Really?? Do u like it??

Jodha: no.. I love it..

Jalal oh god.. really.. & hugs her tightly..& says... I was hell scared.. how u can be so cool..

Jodha: do u want answers or me??

Jalal: I want u baby.. just give me 10 minutes.. I will just fresh up & come.. plz.. sorry...

Jodha: no problem.. take time..

Jalal runs to washroom to fresh up.
Jodha opens their bedroom & lits the candles.. sits on the bed...

Jalal freshen up & came in towel to their room...
Jalal:I am done...
There he saw her wife sitting on the bed.. he was mesmerized by her view.. she is looking like an angel to him..

Jalal came near her...lifts her face..

Jodha: looks into his eyes... & slaps her forehead..oh god.. plz jalal.. wear dress..

Jalal: is it requires Sonu.. anyway we will remove it na... winks at her..

Jodha: then y u choosed Saree for me..?? I too can come in towel na..

Jalal: yep u can.. shall I help u??

Jodha: no need.. first time in Our home.. i want everything should be proper.. plz.. it should be in our memories till we die.. make it as beautiful as jalal..

Jalal: I love u.. I will for u.. plz don't talk about death..

Jodha: jalal one day we Will die.. But together.. we can't live without each other..

Jalal: yes.. but now don't talk about death plz.. & wait for me. I will be in 5 minutes..

Jodha: I am waiting. Come soon..

Jalal goes to other room.. wears his dress.. white shirt & blue jeans..

Came back to her..looks at her...

Jodha gets shy with his constant gaze..

Jodha: plz.. jalal.. don't look at me like that.. come here..

Jalal: comes & sits beside her.. sorry.. I don't have white pants sonu.. I don't have time to get it..

Jodha: that's ok.. But when u arranged all this??

Jalal: he took her hands into his hands.. I felt bad Sonu when u talked about wedding.. at that moment I thought this.. I called to karthik to make arrangements.. he is happy to do it.. for his Sister... he have our home spare keys na.. we talked through face time.. I explained my ideas to him to decorate.. with the help of flower decorator he did all this.. when u are sleeping I purchased the Saree for u.. in starting I thought to arrange it in kovalam but later decided to arrange here.. in our home sweet home..

Jodha: thanks jalal..

Jalal: for what..? For this?

Jodha:.no.. not for this..

Jalal:then for what/?

Jodha: for the mistake u did in my life.. no no it's not a mistake.. it's is the best thing that happened in my life.. today I am regretting jalal.. if I come back 3 years back.. u won't miss salim birth & everything.. I am so sorry.. I took that right from u.. plz forgive me jalal..

Jalal:.cups her face..plz.. Sonu don't say sorry.. I deserve it.. I deserve more punishment.. I destroyed u.. u are the one have golden heart gave a chance to me..
Plz.. I am so...

Jodha stops him further saying.. leave it jalal.. now make this day as beautiful for Me.. place her hands above his hands..

Jalal kisses her forehead.. I will for u anything..

They talked about for some more time...




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii


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sorry laksh dii

That's ok muski...
Don't be sorry...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unresed on page 35 😉
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Im first im first
But im sorry bangarm i cant commnet first
I still have to read previous chapters ra
Will read soon
Mostly toninght
Sorry bangaram
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Posted: 9 years ago
About the sr
Hehehe agar payal ne likha hai toh its gonna bhi super hot
I know that
But lakshmi's sr was hot too
I was literally speechless

Hats off to u girls
Will commnet soon
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Im first im first

But im sorry bangarm i cant commnet first
I still have to read previous chapters ra
Will read soon
Mostly toninght
Sorry bangaram


Congrats avi😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

About the sr

Hehehe agar patal ne likha hai toh its gonna bhi super hot
I know that
But lakshmi's sr was hot too
I was literally speechless

Hats off to u girls
Will commnet soon


First edit ur comment and correct my name avi😆
and yeah she writes mature content better then me😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

About the sr

Hehehe agar patal ne likha hai toh its gonna bhi super hot
I know that
But lakshmi's sr was hot too
I was literally speechless

Hats off to u girls
Will commnet soon

But not more than Payal avi...
She is too good at writing...

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