sorry guys for late update and first chapter is in hindi only before i told me going to write it in english..the thing is that my some friend wants me
to write in hindi as well
as i told you iam lil busy i cant write in hindi or english both at the same time soo i ask help from my one friend she agree to help me so i decide me write in hindi version i ask her to write in eng
but unfortunately that friend now didnt replying soo decide let first chapter in hindi only later we will
decide what to do
guys plz sugest me what u want me to write in hindi or english becoz i cant write in both lanugae at the same time
if some one help me i wll love to write in both language
Before I thought in first chapter me going to reveal what exactly happened in that
celebration night where jalal lost his 4 most important person in his life
but now iam thinking to keep that as suspense
lets make u guys lil more wait for that
with every passing chapter we going to
reveal what happened that night..who is behind that ..how jodha lost her memory
in this way u guys gonna enjoy more😃
Chapter 1 :
3 saal baad kismat phir se badal ne ke liye taiyar thaa kisi ko nahi pata tha ab kis ke zindagi mein kya hone wala hai aage
Jodha jaha 3 saal baad apni purane zindagi se bekhabar apni naaye zindagi mein apni
naaye parivaar ke saath khush thi jaha dusre taraf jalal ne ye aakhir maan hi
liya jodha ab nahi rahe jodha ke jaane ke baad . jaise jalal insan se haivan ban gaya thaa
phele se zyada nirdayata (heartlless) ban gaya thaa
uss haadse ke baad jodha ne apni memory loss kar dete , wo ek durgapur naam ki gaon mein rah
rahe thi ek family ke saath , jodha bekhabar apni purani zindagi se apni
naaye parivar ke saath behad khush thi wo parivar jodha ko apni beti hi maan chuka thaa
even wo family ko bhi nahi pata thaa ke jodha ek rajkumari hai jis halat mein unko
jodha mile unko laga ye iss gaon ke ek mamuli ladki hoge
uss parivar ne jodha ko ye nahin pata ya ke jodha ke memory loss ho gaye hai kyun ke
jab unko jodha mile thee jodha pregnant thi aur jodha ke halat bohut kharab thi jodha ko
bacha ne ke liye uss ke baby ko jodha ke body se nikal na pada
hakima sahib ne mana kiya thaa jodha ko ye bata ne ke liye uss ke memory loss ho gaye hai kyun ke jodha ke halat bohut kharab thi agar jodha ko pata chal tha uss ke memory loss huwe hai tho wo apni dimag mein zyada zor dalte jo jodha ke liye bilkul sai nahi tha
uss se jodha ke jaan bhi jaa sakte thee ya phir wo dimagi mareez (sick) hote tho uss parivar ne jodha ko kuch nahi bataya
phir uss parivar ne jodha ko naya naam diya lakshmi kyun ke unko jodha ke naam nahi pata tha
uss parivar ke liye jodha ek lakshmi hi sabit huwe jodha ke baad uss parivar ke maano
saare khushiya hi wapas agaye thee
Lakshmi (Jodha ) To maa sa (radha ) :
maa sa mein vidyalay (school) jaa rahe hoon aaj bohut kaam hai iss liye jaldi jaa rahe hoo
Maa sa (radha ) : kuch kaa ke jaao maare laado
Lakshmi (jodha ) : nahi maa saa warna vilam (late) ho jayega mein vidyalay mein kuch kaa looge
Laksh (lakshmi elder brother ) : maa sa jaane doo waise bhi kaa kaa ke
lakshmi moti ho gaye hai ek din nahi kayege kuch nahi hoga
hhh😆
laksh aur lakshmi hmaesha tom aur jerry ke tara fight karte thee par at same time ek dusre ke liye
jaan bhi de sakte thee wo jitna fight karte thee udna hi ek dusre se prem karte thee woh😃
lakshmi (jodha ) To laksh (bother ): bhaisa mein jo ho
ache ho zara hud ko dekh ko sukhi lakdi lagte ho😆
bhaise mein tumein baad mein aagar dekh loge abhi mujhe dair ho rahe hai
acha maasa chalte hai
maa sa (radha) : diyan se jaana lakshmi
lakshmi (jodha ) : hai maa saa app fikar mat karo
lakshmi (jodha) jaise hi bahar aate hai wo dekhte hai uss ke best friend aradana ( jo bestie) uss ke intezar kar rahe hote hai
aradana : kaha reh gaye thee lakshmi (jodha) kab se kade hai mein yaha
tumein yaad hai na agar aaj hum vilam (late) gaye wo chudail hamare jaan le lege
lakshmi (jodha) : hai mere maa pata hai chalo jaldi ab
Agra : Mahal
Jalal sword fight practice kar raha hota hai , jo jalal apni sipahiyo ke jaan ke liye
apna jaan khatre mein dalta thaa aaj sirf ek sword fight ke practice mein wo apne
hi sipahiyo ke khoon baha raha thaa
Rukiya jalal ko dekh kar bohut upset thi aur soch rahe thee
jo jalal jag mein apni jaan khatre mein dal ke apne sipahiyo ke jaan bacha tha thaa
aur aaj ek mamuli sword practice ke liye apne hi sipahiyo ke jaan lee raha hai
kash jodha tum zinda hote mujhe tumse nafrat hai par mein jalal ko kabhi aise nahi dekhna chahte thee😭
Jodha,salima,abdul aur aami jaan ke baad jalal jaise haivan ban gaya tha na wo kisi ki sunta tha , na wo kisi se sai se baat karta tha
roz sharab ke nashe mein gum aur aurato se dur bhaag tha thaa
3 saal ho gaye hai jalal ko haram mein jaate huwe😭
rahim bhi bada ho gaya tha samjhedar hogaya tha pure mahal mein rahim hi thaa jo jalal ke kareeb thaa jalal sirf rahim ke hi sunta thaa
rahim jalal se milne aata hai
rahimto jalal : salam sheshansha
jalal to rahim : salam khane khana
rahim : sheshansha humein appse ek baat karne hai
jalal : hai bolo khane khana
rahim : sheshansha humein padna hai
jalal : khane khana humne kaha tha naa tum bahar nahi jaa sakte
uss haadse ke baad jalal rukiya.maham aur rahim ko mahal se bahar jaane nahi deta kyu ke
yahi log thee jo uss haadse mein bach gaye thee
aur jalal jodha ke baad thoda mentally sick b thaa
na kisi ko mahal se bahar jane deta na tha kisi
ko mahal ke andar ane deta tha without investigation
rahim : sheshansha hum bahar nahi jaa sakte par ustaadni (teacher ) yaha aa sakte hai na ?
jalal : teek hai hamein kuch waqt doo hum kisi ache ustaadni ko jan parak ne ke baad
mahal mein aane dege teek hai na
rahim : shukriya sheshansha😃
rahim excitement mein jalal ko hug kar lete hai
aur jalal ko wo baat ache nahi lagte kyu ke jodha ke jaane ke baad wo ek dam
kadus ban gaya thaa😡
rahim : maaf karna sheshansha wo khushi ke maare humne hug kar liya
jalal : koi baat nahi khane khana chalte hai kuch kaam hai
allah hafiz
aur jalal waha se chale jaata hai
Durgapur :
lakshmi (jodha) vidyala mein ek shikshak thi... pura durgapur mein
lakshmi hi ek aise shishak thi jo bohut shikShit thi
saare gaon wale lakshmi (jodha) ko apna guru maan the thee
chahe wo padaye hoon
ya phir chikitsa ke baare mein jankari
or
phir sword fight
jodha sab mein number 1 thee
saare gaon ke ladke lakshmi pe maarte thee
par wo kisi ko bhav nahi dete thee
radha ( jodha mother) as mother bohut proud thee lakshmi pe😃
Ab kaise wo doo dilwale milte hai wo sirf waqt batayega⭐️
guys so tell me how was first chapter ?
Edited by Susan.Dsouza - 9 years ago
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