Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: GERUA
superb update

thank u dear 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
Akka hello bangaram 😊🤗
Ur update always gives me a kind of peace and happiness😃 Aww how sweet of u ra , im really happy to hear this from u 😳
Loved this one too❤️ Thanks ra 😃
One song for Jalal's situation "Gaallo thelinattunde,gunde pelinattunde..🤣" full bottle ethi dinchakunda taaginattunde 😆 ,very apt song 😉
He knows how to pacify his gabbar and why not he knows her inside out😉 yup he does know her very well
SuRza's mission is half accomplished🥳yayyy 🥳
Saree part☺️..Jo took the help of google thalli😆 em chestam cheppu 😆
Jalal's POV's were cute😳and Jallu is jealous of Rahim😆 hope u found this part cute too 😳
Their dance was cherry on the cake hmm glad u liiked the dance dear
Hosh bichara had to return leaving Mirza🤣poor him kada ,it might have been very difficult for the poor soul 😆
Thnx for the pm and update soon😊sure bangarm 😊

thanks a lot for ur lovely comment dear

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan
Kya baat kya baat kya baat 😉 tareef in mithun da style , thank u deepa 😛

Awesummm 👏 >>>>> 😳😳

Just love it... glad u liked it dear

Ja confess his love infront of mirza n mirza is happy that his mission half completed.. he is super duper happy yaar ,after all uske mehnat rang jo layi 😉

Ja way to manofy his gabbar is so cute 😳 .. ,it wasnt a tff task for him dear ,after all he know her very well right 😉
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Nd the saree part was 😳 .. >>>>>☺️☺️

Ja hv hard time to control himself his beautiful jo 😉 .. cant blame him for that right 😉

Ja getting jealous from rahim 😆 seeing him dancing with his jo. over possessive jalal

Nd last part of their dance was sso romantic 😳 . heheheh ,thanks re

Bt jo feeling weird n nervous with his changed behaviour n romantic stares... .. he will definetly freak her with his crazy weird antics 😆

Hope jo also realised her feelings soon... hope the same 😉

Eager to read nxt part soon..

thanks a lot for ur lovely comment dear 😛

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sorathsheikh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Sisssy sorry sorry sorry 😭😭

Maine kal pm nhi dekhi thi 😲😭😭

Abhi dekhi

Res kal unress kardungi 😭😭

Abhi net slow ha

kal read krungi

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GurKaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Wow!! amazing chapter dear. Jalal is so in love with Jo. So cute ha. Waiting for Them to confess their feelings so eagerly. Pls update soon n thnx for the PM.

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crystalwings

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

amazing update😊

loved the dream sequence, her turmoil of feelings for Surya and finding comfort in Jalal's arms ...😊

waiting for Jo to realize her true feelings for Jalal 😊

Thanks for the PM😊

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123sita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#417

love your story !! I think its amazing, I read all chapters 1 to 16 in one night and I thought it was awesome. Chapters 17 and 18 were outstanding and now we are all just eagerly waiting for Jodha to soon realize her feeling. Can't wait for chapter 19 !! Just curious but how long will we have to wait for Jodha to realize her feelings towards Jalal ?

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Mavaddat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

hy di
again late comment sorry han
well u know at starting I was hell afraid about jodha's dream, she run in mid jungle behind Surya then eventually he was disappeared . Then JODHA went on cliff she was not paying attention where she is, so much drown in her world but then two hands rescued her from falling and she hugged him that was none other than JALAL . Firstly I thought it was all read but it was dream of JODHA 😆
and JALAL teasing session to JODHA firstly for her Hindi n then after he came from bathroom only in towel wrapped around his waist and JODHA was drooling over him whereas he was teasing her . But the condition of JALAL was same when he saw jodha adorning herself after bath 😉 naughty akdha 😳
I love brothers convoy too, o my god hosh heart broken so sad of him . but who was the person after whom seeing JALAL gets panicked. Please reveal soon and yeah who hold hosh .
update soon thanks for pm

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: divyaJA
Aww soo beautiful update..
jaal control nhi kr pa raha h apne emotionsa ko hehe..

thank u so much divya 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: swriter
awesome , wonderful chapter di...👏 thank u jaanu 😊
poor jalal can not do the control on his emotions.😳hehehe
i hope mirja will do something to realizing jodha about her feeling otherwise jalal will got made surely😆 ...and i think jodha drunk alcohol instead juice or water... whattt 😲 drunken jodha 😆
if it is true then we have to ready for fresh and cute moment of joja 🤣hope i could show something like that par u know jo is pregnant and drinking in pregnancy state is not good
plz plz plz di update soon next chapter and 111 likes maira nema kaha di mujhe bhool gayi😡 tumhara bhi hai yaar

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