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@Mavi_16_2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss
lv v vvv u diii jaldi jaldi karo mere stommach mein baterfly goom rahi h ...u know apnibstory se jaida apkibstory acchi lagti n ya apne like hit nii kia

oh sorry baby will hit like after posting my story
N thank u dear but I don't like mine I Luke others story like yours avi di janki n many others

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

Happy bday deepu .

Ur bday gift . Short update of this story . Enjoy reading dear.

Chapter 3 part 2

credit: SHAGUN

After reading her diary, he look at his wife's lifeless body n took her hand in his while with the other one he was caressing her hairs.

Get Up yr I know u r angry with me, but not for dakr of me but for our kid our son .

No response from the body . His time passed like this it has been 24 hrs passed . Still 16 HTS remained but till now he talked her a lot .about their past, their love they do in past

He cried also.

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He thought to spend some time with saleem also . So he went to home, but before that he buy chocolates n toys for his son

After entering home, he saw his child sitting on couch alone .

He went to him

Saleem: whele ij mom?

JALAL: she z resting, she z doctor na! So after doing her job she z resting in hospital only.

When will she come?

She will come soon! Saying this he picked saleem up n lead him to his room . There he give him chocolates n toys .

Saleem get excited seeing toys n chocos

He jumped in excitement .

JALAL loved this scene :-). How much he missed him in these 2 days after knowing that he z his son . His blood

He spent time with saleem .

He himself don't know when he sleep with his son.

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Morning in hospital

No progress with JODHA .

Dr behal personally treating her. He did private visit to her to check her but what he get was failure n no hope of recovery.

JALAL also tensed to see no change in her.

Time flew in a flick of seconds.

Now its almost 42 hrs over but she didn't get conscious.

After checking her doctor declared due to physical n mental torture she has slipped in comma .

Jalal's world shattetd.

He ask doctor when will she came out from coma

But doctor didn't said a word he only ask JALAL to have faith on god

Precap: same as teaser

Sorry for short update

I have typed two tomes n it got deleted . Now I typed it from mobile

So sorry once again.

Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#403

Hey very short update big one soon make it fast pm me don't be late

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#404

Itni piddi update .. But nice ... Update soon

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Nice teaser dear ...
Continue soon n thanks for pm 😊

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Oye update kr rhi aj kya ... Kya bat 😆😆😆

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#407

tab se updating h..
update kab milega

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#408

Itna chotu saa update!!!!! Not fair Mavi !!!!! 😔

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: Mavaddat
updating chapter for deepu her bday gift
happy bday deepa 😉 may god bless u dear

thank mavi 😃 😳
Luv u dear 🤗

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yashika.angel

@yashika.angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#410

Nice update..
But itna chotu sa update...

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