Note- Hello everyone. A big sorry for my absence and delaying in updating. I had gone out of town to attend a function but unfortunately during that time I lost one of my closest relative. Even I fell ill and managed to break my leg. I couldn't even return home to celebrate EID UL AZHA for the first time in my life. Just came out of plaster 2 days ago. Still haven't recover fully. The past month was too dramatic for me. I hadn't logged in any kind of social network during that time. Just returned today morning actually according to the time yesterday! I tried to complete the chappies which I left incomplete.wrote some line but that was not good. My both stories r on important phase. In one jodhas love confession and in another one past revelation of jalals side. Thus decided to not take risk on that. So wrote something else to say a proper sorry. Maybe because of my emotional state of mind this emotional os came out from my mind.
Another thing I want to say I am overwhelmed by the response I got from the last chappies of my stories. Seeing the amount of likes and comments a genuine smile actually came on my face. Thanks all for these and also for waiting for the updates. I'll update the chappies in 2/3 days. Last but not the least.. I cant promise but will try to cover up the long gap.
Akdha os: Hope
Life is all about hope. Hope gives fuel to people to be alive, to want success and to gain confidence for that, to run behind ur dream to get it fulfilled.
With this very hope there stand a man in three piece suit named jalal mohammad in front of his love, his life jodha who is laying in the hospital bed. Looking so pale and fragile who used to be a radiant beauty with full of life. He used to bury his face on her beautiful long hair but now she is left with no hair in her head. It's very painful for him to see her like this. He tried every possible way to make her well. He admitted her in one of the worlds best hospital in London, provide her with every possible medical care and comfort, spent bundles and bundles of money, even threaten and yield at the doctors but yet she is suffering. Fighting between life and death. The demon like disease Cancer is sucking the life out of her.
Jalal looked at the award of businessmans of the year which is on his hand. The award which is actually deserves to be his lady loves. He made his business empire from scratch. Obviously with the emense support of jodha. In fact she was his backbone and is n will always be. His thought drifted back to his past.
5 years ago he was nothing but a poor orphan guy. He had fallen in love with jodha who belonged to a respective middle class family. Eventually his love made jodha fall for him. But when her family got to know about them they opposed and her father insulted jalal. Her father fixed her marriage with someone else to get rid of jalal. Finding no other way they left their house and city in middle of the night before marriage. Jalal wanted to marry her after becoming a successful man. She supported him in his decision and lived with him under one roof without marriage. They struggle together. Lived in a one room house. After so many effort with the help of one of friend they got a loan of medium amount. At the same time jodha got scholarship in an well known university of UK for law studies. She dreamt to be a lawyer from childhood. But she refused to go. Though jalal wanted to sent her using the money they got as loan but jodha didn't let jalal to do that. But jalal didn't let go of her dream. He admitted her in an well known university in Delli for her law studies. He himself took admission in a normal institute for further studies and started his business also. Jodha was not officially part of the business as jalal didn't want her studies to get disturb by work pressure but jodha actively help him in work. After facing a lot of hardship 3 years ago jalal got a big deal in Dubai and after that they didn't have to look back. Success came running in their way. Jalal build his business empire, became a successful billionaire businessman and jodha completed her law studies and became a corporate lawyer. Jodha was very thrilled hearing the possibilities of jalal getting the businessman of the year award in near future from a senior businessman in a party a year ago. Now he got that award but not in a state of mind to celebrate the biggest success of his career.
His thought broke hearing jodhas soft soothing voice. He smiled looking at her. No matter how she's looking currently but for jalal she is still very beautiful. He asked her how she's doing then show her the award. She's very happy seeing the award. She demanded to celebrate his success. Jalal tried to deny considering her health but at last gave into jodhas demand. After all jalal getting this award had been her one of most cherished dream since last year. After talking to the doctors he got permission to take her out for 2 hour but next day. He informed her about that.
Next day
Jalal was sitting outside of the hospital cabin while doctors were checking her. He took out a small velvet box from his pocket and opened it. It was a beautiful diamond ring which he bought 3 years ago from Dubai after bagging the first big deal. He smiled watching it.
In a nearby restaurant
They were sitting with some close friend who came to London to see her. She wore a cream color anarkali and wore her dupatta beautifully around her shoulder covering her head. She's looking weak but very beautiful also which amazed everyone. After finishing the lunch jalal got up from his seat, took jodha in the middle of the restaurant. He signaled the manager then got down on his knees. After a little emotional speech he proposed her holding the ring. She was overwhelmed with his gesture and said yes. As soon as she said yes they got showered by rose petals. Though she said yes for marriage but put the condition that they'll get married only after her treatment gets over and she recovers fully. Jalal agreed for that knowing how adamant she is.
They left for hospital holding hand in hand with the hope to get married soon. Though they still have a long way to go for that with uncertainty but they didn't loose hope. They never lost hope. After all they had come across this long path by floating on the boat of hope.
Jalal keep up the hope to see her as his bride one day. And her medical report, the advance medical technology and doctors assurance are adding fuel to his hope and his life as he learns from his life that "never loose hope and be positive".
The end
This was not like my usual stories. I didn't give a happy ending but didn't give a tragic ending either. I end this os with a positive note. Hope u all like this like my previous one shoots. Plz excuse me for writing mistakes and hit the like button if u liked this and let me know how it was through ur comments.
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