Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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pranjal.22

@pranjal.22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Loved the update
happy to see that jodha had some rules too
continue soon
and thanks for pm

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Hmmm so ye he aapka dhamke dar twist...

Hmmm mujhe pata tha ki aap koi na koi bahana dhund logi jodha ko unki hi iss harkat se bahar lane ke liye... vaise hamare jodha bhi itni bevakuf nahi he...😉😉 thanks for update Di...

mujhe kya kehna chahiye??? Mujhe samajh me hi nai aa raha he... itni amazing chapter ko ham bhala kya comment de sakte he??? Aur sab log sab comments de chuke he...😊😊 mujhe dene ke liye much bhi nahi choda he...😕😕

super chapter Di and it's a different concept... I love to read it more update next chapter soon...

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sho123

@sho123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#533

superb chappi payal
thank god jodha and Roby didn't ahem ahem
jodha is quite unpredictable in this story
jodha and jalal again face to face
jalal simply can't hold on himself after seeing Jo
thanks for pm
continue soon

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#534

like jo samy friendship. beside the boldness she is very frank and openly told him she has some rule and she ditch roby😉 your twist gave shocked to samy 😳 you saw many shade of jo. jalal attracted towards her waiting to know more abt their meeting😉

Thanks for pm

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#535

awesome update

another coincidental meeting😉

lagta hai god kuch jyada hi meherbaan hai jalal par😆

sam is trying to give a piece of advice to jodha😊

but our jodha never listen to others...loved this jodha😃

update soon

thnks fr pm

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#536

Thankyou so much guys for commenting on this chapter but I am seriously thinking to discontinue this story now as there are not much readers of this story.

I don't know whether I pmed to selected people who liked that note that's why I got only 54 likes on last chapter or people are not at all interested to read this story.

so I am not going to update this story now.. It's better to finish my other stories first because I will be very busy in this sem as it's a last sem of my mtech.

and to those who want me to continue this ss, I am extremely sorry guys and thanks for supporting.

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#537

Payal its your choice and people will respect that as do for others. Less response to your other story is true and you count on it is fine but in my opinion when you start the different story and its SS so less chappy if you wish you can complete it after study and other story. I can wait for long.

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: melovesja
Payal its your choice and people will respect that as do for others. Less response to your other story is true and you count on it is fine but in my opinion when you start the different story and its SS if you wish you can complete it after study and other story. I can wait for long.

Thanks dear.. I want to write this story and I will but here people are not finding it interesting.. so i am thinking to post this story on other site where people like to read such stories.

I am also thinking to continue this story later or after completing temptation series and lover ofcourse if people want me to.😊 but i sincerely doubt 😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: melovesja
Payal its your choice and people will respect that as do for others. Less response to your other story is true and you count on it is fine but in my opinion when you start the different story and its SS so less chappy if you wish you can complete it after study and other story. I can wait for long.

I don't know about chapters dear but it will take 20 chapters atleast to complete this story!!