Betrayal chappy 11 updated on page 21, 6/3/2016 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Superb update Acchu 😳
Jalal wanted her back in his life...wen he heard about the babies sound he was overwhelmed by his feelings of being father of two beautiful kids... But how can he ask her are they mine?
Can't he see the resemblance of his in kids... Poor fellow now he has to face her wrath... I think Jo will lie him now that they aren't his blood... Taking interesting turn dear... Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Awesome story acchu!!
Just loved it
waiting for next update!!
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
awesome update
thanks for pm me
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Superb update acchu
Continue soon
Thansk for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
wow rajat saw the twins...pari shocked by rajat question...continue soon acchu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
chapter 10

"Are they mine?", He asked, How
dare he ask that? When he never
treated me like his wife, I have been
just a name sake wife, just a
housekeeper, an unwanted wife.

"Yes... n...no I mean sperm donors
are not called the father of the
child, and your are only a sperm
donor to my children, they are only
mine", I answered, making my voice
loud and clear to him, that he
doesn't have any rights on my
children, they are only mine, I will
not allow him to take them away
from me, they are my life...

His eye widened in shock, moreover
hurt evident in his eye , maybe he
wasn't expecting this, I am feeling
bad now, I love him but.. I can't
stand his cheating anymore, I can't
... "please, I am sorry... I can't live
without you and my children now,
then I was young only 23 I was
stupid, I don't know how I managed
that time but now I feel disgust
thinking how can I do that, give me
any punishment, the most painful
punishment.. but don't push me
away, I..I love you..give me one
chance, one last chance, I will make
it up to you, I will prove myself to
you", he pleaded begging , the
mighty RT (Rajat Tokas) is begging..
"love, did you say love..", I laughed
humorlessly .. "if you ever loved me,
you would not have cheated on me
on our wedding day ,in the
beginning I used to think that you
were forced for this marriage, that
you will love me one or the other
day, I used to think you may change
today, I used to wait, thinking that
today you will come home early ,but
no you never changed you continued
to cheated on me, you made me feel
unworthy, unwanted ..Why RT? why?
what was my mistake", I whispered/
yelled the last part "please.. leave..
I don't want to see your face..
never..", I almost pushed him and
banged the door on this face, seeing
him tears make me want to run to
him and hug him tightly saying
everything will be alright, tearing
running freely from my eye, I want
him to be happy that's why I left
him..

"I will never give up till you forgive
me, till you give me one chance to
make it up to you, now I have found
you and our children I will not go
back, I will make everything right,
even if it meant destroying myself, I
will make it up to you, I love
you..and our children", I heard his
voice, determined voice and his
footsteps walking away from the
door, a chill went down my spine
hearing his determined voice, I know
how much of stubborn he is...

The next day I woke up tired and
with a huge headache, I have severe
body pain I noticed I was in the
living room on couch, then I
remembered last night ... tears
threatened to make their way, I
wiped them furiously I am not
weak...

I went to check on my babies, they
were sleeping peacefully hugging
each other, actually more like kunj
holding his sister protectively and
kushi sleeping with a smile, her leg
and hand on kunj's tummy, smile
formed their way on my lips, seeing
them like that, how much I love my
kids, they are the only ones who can
make me smile and forget all my
worries.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Superb update
Hope Pari forgives him soon
Happy new year
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
superb chappi
hope pari forgive rajat soon
eager to see how rajat will pacify pari
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
awsum

poor pari & rt
why the hell did rt do that if he really loved her

update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb..
Bt want jo not forgive ja easily..
He should work hard to get apoplogy from her..

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