Akdha ff-Straight From The Heart updated chapter 3 on page 25

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hola Guys Me and Avika akka are starting a new ff on our beloved akdha.We both going to write dis story together.Hope u guys will like our story so plz encourage us with ur likes and comments.Criticism also accepted😛

PROLOGUE:

Jalal's POV:

"I loved her immensly,I sacrificed my love for her,I even got married for her happiness.But today I lost my wife, My child lost her mother.She have to pay for this.I dont now still I love her or not after all wat happened.But I cannot forgive her"

I know ,u guys will be confused with this prologue or short idea of the story,Let me clarify something that this story have many phases U will understand when u read the chapters.One more thing we are planning to narrate this story by Jalal,s POV.

CHARACTER SCETCH:

Jalaluddin Mohammed:

Our hero of the story. He is the most handsome,dashing vry lovely guy.Each abd every girl hav crush on him.He loves Jodha immensly he is even ready to sacrifice everything for her.He was kind at heart but short tempered.He also cares abt his wife but doesn't loves her.

Jodha Singh Rajput:

Jalal's one and only love.Jodha was very beautiful,kind,bubbly girl.She loved surya but had a break up with him.After her break up she felt a great attraction towards Jalal but still tries to understand her feelings for him.She is also little short tempered.

Surya Khurana:

Boy friend /Husband of Jodha. He is also vry handsome guy.He too loves Jodha but circumstances and situation leads to misunderstanding between them,eventually they broke up.

Rukkaiya Sultan:

Girl friend/Wife of Jalal. A vry beautiful lovely girl.She was a good friend of Jodha.She loves Jalal a lot.she cares abt Jodha and Jalal a lot.

So howz the CS guys.Tell us shall we continue this one?

Jutas and tamatars also welcomed😉

PS:-We will update once in a week guys.Update will be posted from this account meeramiss18 and pm's will be sent by avika444.

Regards,

Avika akka and her bangaram Meeru🤗

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@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

$$INDEX$$

Chapter 1 below

Chapter 2 page 18

Chapter 3 page 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4453647/akdha-ff-straight-from-the-heart-updated-chapter-3-on-page-25

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys posting the first chapter of our ff.Hope u enjoy this update 😛

CHAPTER 1:

Hello folks Myself Jalaluddin mohammad ,the most hot and happening dude of my college Girls go gaga around me .As u know the basic needs of a common man r ROTI(food),KAPADA(clothing)and MAKAAN(shelter) but today's generation has their own set of preferences and so our basic needs changed from ROTI, KAPADA and MAKAAN to PAISA(money), NAUKRI(job) and CHOKRI(girl or girlfriend). Money and job r not a big deal for me ,coming from a wealthy family I never had to worry about that. We run our own family business and after my MBA I will join my family business . now coming to the last one , being a popular guy of my college do u think that I won't have a girlfriend naah . I do have one she is very sweet and lovely girl . RUKKAIYA SULTAN a perfect marriage material woman.I don't actually love her u know ,becoz I don't believe in that but woh kehte hai na u should love and marry the person who loves u the most. Life was going perfectly on tracks untill I met her JODHA SINGH RAJPUT

I'm Jodha Singh rajput . There is nothing to say much about me , I'm simple girl and live my life too in a simple way. . Everyyhing is set in my life ,after my MBA I will marry Surya khurana, my childhood friend cum boyfriend . I loved my life the way it was going until I met him JALALUDDIN MOHAMMAD

St.XAVIER COLLEGE

A black SUV entered the college campus in full speed and came to halt reaching the parking lot .A handsome man came out of the car .stylishly tucking his goggles inside his pocket ,the charming gentleman entered the college with a huge smile as he saw his best friend ABDUL waiting for him impatiently.
Abdul- Ur late today also bhai, would u care to explain the reason for being late? tapping his finger on the wrist watch he was wearing Abdul asked jalal the reason for coming late.
Jalal- sorry yaar u know the traffic right , now pls don't get angry and lets go to the class . we r already getting late.
Abdul- haan ok
They started heading towards their classroom but stopped in middle when they heard a sweet voice calling them from behind.
Hello guys ,could u pls tell me the way to 2nd yr MBA class ??
Jalal and Abdul turn their head to face the owner of the sweet voice.
World stopped for jalal when he saw the most beautiful girl in front of him, her coal eyed doe shaped eyes, waist length hair highly kissable lips made him lost his senses ,he was lost in his own dream world but was immediately snapped out from his reverie when he heard the soft voice again in his ears.
Hello can u guys pls show me the way to 2nd yr MBA class ,it would a great help to me, exclaimed jodha
Haan hmm hmm jalal fumbled for words
Abdul- yes of course, we too r going that side only , u can join us if u want
Jodha -thank u so much guys ,may I know ur name pls
I'm Abdul and he is JALALUDDIN MOHAMMAD .
Jo - nice meeting u guys
With a small formal introduction ,the trio headed towards the class descending downstairs when Jo stumbled on her feet.
Anticipating a fall she closed her eyes tightly but slowly open her eyes when instead of falling on floor she was caught by a pair of strong muscular hands.
Jalal caught jodha by her waist and pulled her close to his heart ,their eyes met each other with a perfect eyelock 😉

Time stood still for both of thm .Their beautiful eyelock was broken by the voice of Abdul"Jodha r o ok?".The concerned buddy questioned her.He also added"Thank God Jalal u saved her"

Thn both straightened themselves both were slightly embarassed thn the trio headed to the class room in complete silence.

Precap:Intro of Ruks and Surya😛

So That's it guys.Plz hit likes and cmnts That will encourage us to write more😛

Criticism also accepted

Regards,

Avika and Meera😛

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Ananya

@zuytre

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats for the new ff

Superb prologue,update soon

Thanks for pm

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats Avikaa and Meeru for new FF🥳

Nice prologue.. Bit confusing too.

Is Ruqaiya dead..interesting to read story narrated by Jalal POV.

Looking forward to read further.

Continue soon dearies.

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AngelDara

@AngelDara

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrats for the new ff

interesting prologue

nice character sketch

waiting for the update

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting and cofusing 😆
How is Jo related to Ruks' death??!! 😲 😕
Congrats Avika Akka and Meera 👏
Continue soon and thnx for the pm Avika Akka 😃

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 10 years ago

congratulation meera n avikka dear fr nw ff 🥳
intersting prologue but little confusing also
nice chrctr sketch
eagrly waiting fr frst chap
updt soon n thanks fr pm 🤗