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Originally posted by: Mavaddat

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Awesome character sketch update soon... And do pm me

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Congo 4 the new story dear

its really interesting

Iam eagerly waiting to read dear

and I jus love ur stories dear

so no need of thnks

love u dear

thanks meera n luv u too

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

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thanks ana u also plz continue ol ur storirs pyaar na ho toh n ol plzz

PROLOGE


Group standing near canteen , gossiping about new comer . Who must be the new comer?? . And why he or she took so long to come at college after admission ?

Suddenly one girl came to there and said the new comer is a girl n she will come tomorrow itself . Then one of them has said "We heard she is damn beautiful so boys should be careful especially our HANDSOME HUNK JALAL " . Why should Jalal be careful ,he is so handsome n he already had a girlfriend like me said a Jeko girl who was getting Jealous by all this


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ST XAVIER COLLEGE

SCENE AT CANTEEN RECESS TYM

GROUP OF SEVEN STUDENTS STANDING NEAR COFFEE SHOP CHATTING N GOSSIPING WITH EACH OTHER ABOUT VARIOUS THING , BUT NOW A DAYS THERE Z ONE TOPIC OF NEW COMER WHICH CAN BE HEARD BY MOST OF THE STUDENTS OF THIS COLLEGE . "WHO Z THE NEE COMER N Y HE/SHE TOOK SO LONG TO COME IN COLLEGE" . N THIS GROUP IS ALSO DISCUSSING ABOUT NEW COMER

ONE BOY ASKED TO OTHER THAT DID U KNOW WHEN THIS NEW COMER IS COMING TO COLLEGE, OTHER BOY REPLIED NO IDEA BUT THIS NEW COMER MAKING ALL OF US VERY DESPERATE TO SEE HER OR HIM .

ONE GIRL REPLIED V HEARD THAT SHE Z A GIRL NOT ORDINARY BUT VERY RICH INTELLIGENT N BEAUTIFUL .

THEN OTHER GIRL INTERRUPTED SO WHAT IF SHE Z RICH BEAUTIFUL AND INTELLIGENT BUT "SHE CANT BEAT HER IN ANY OF THE THING " . RIGHT SALIMA 😉

YA MOTI NO ONE CAN BEAT HER IN ANY THING REPLIED SALIMA

3 BOYS WERE LISTENING THIS CONVO GETS DESPO TO KNOW ABOUT THE PERSON ABOUT WHOM THESE GIRLS ARE TALKING


ABDUL MAAN AND MIRZA ASKED IN UNISION TO WHOM U R TALKING ABOUT? TO WHICH THESE GIRLS PASSED THE SMIRK TO EACH OTHER SEEING THEIR FRIENDS DEASPIRATION N REPLIED THAT SHE IS THEIR CHILD HOOD FRIEND BUT DINT TELL HER NAME

BOYS GETS ANNOYED AFTER LISTENING THERE HALF ANSWER BUT DINT SAY ANYTHING COZ THEY KNOW IF THEY WILL ASK MORE THEN THESE LADIES WILL. SURELY KILL THEM. .

BUT MIRZA SAID IF THIS NEW GIRL WILL BE UR FRIEND THAN .

THAAN ASKED MAAN CREASING HIS ONE EYEBROW "JALAAL SHOULD BE CAREFUL COZ IF HE WILL SAW THAT GIRL WILL GONE CRAZY " . TO WHICH JALAL GAVE MAAN HIS SIGNATURE SMIRK N GIRL SITTING BESIDE JALAAL WHO DINT LISTEN THEIR TALKS PROPERLY JUST HEARD THAT "JALAL WILL GO CRAZY AFTER THAT GIRL IF HE WILL SEE HER " GETS JEALOUS AND REPLIED IN JEALOUS YET CALM TONE " Y WOULD JALAL BE CAREFUL OF THAT GIRL WHEN HE IS HAVING HIS GIRLFRIEND LIKE ME . JALAL ONLY LOVES ME OTHER THAN ME HE CANT LOVE ANYONE BECAUSE I M THE BEAUTIFUL GIRL OF THIS COLLEGE N HE Z THE HANDSOME GUY " . AFTER LISTENING HER RETORT MAAN KEPT SILENT COZ HE VERY WEL KNOW RUKS NATURE SHE Z PROUDY AND THINKS HERSELF SUPERIOR TO OTHERS. SO HE THINKS TO KEEP MUMMED ON THE OTHER SIDE JALAL MAKES IRRITATING FACE BY LISTENING RUKS ANSWER . THOU. HE LIKES RUKS BUT DOES NOT TAKE HER AS HIS GIRLFRIEND ITS RUKS ONLY WHO ALWAYS SAY OTHERS HERSELF JALAL'S GF. .


RECESS OVER.
ALL WENT TO THEIR RESPECTIVE CLASSES

IT WAS THERE. BUSINESS CLASS SO ALL WERE READY WITH THERE BOOKS ON TABLE , SUDDENLY ONE GIRL STOOD UP FROM HER SEAT AND SHOUTS " ANYONE ONE HEARD ABOUT NEW NEWS OF COLLEGE "TO WHICH ALL KEPT SILENT BUT SOME REPLIED YES SOME NO . THEN SHE CONTINUED OK LET ME INFORM U ALL THEN " THE NEW COMER OF OUR COLLEGE IS COMING TOMORROW" N SHE IS A GIRL . REST U ALL WILL COME TO KNOW TOMORROW .ALL STARTED GOSSIPING SALIMA N MOTI SAID WE WILL MEET HER MAAN MIRZA ABDUL ALSO REPLIED YES. JALAL SAID SOMETHING IS THERE IN THIS GIRL WHICH IS MAKING ALL OF US DESPERATE ABOUT HER TO WHICH MAAN MIRZA ABDUL MOTI AND SALIMA REPLIES YES
BUT RUKS BURNS WITH JEALOUSY SHE THOUGT IN HER MIND THAT "WHOEVER U R I WILL SEE U N WILL SHOW U YOUR RIGHT PLACE IN THIS COLLEGE N SOON U WILL ROAM AROUND ME LIKE A PUPPET N DO EVERYTHING ACCORDING TO ME , I WILL NEVER LET U SNATCH JALAL FROM ME . HE Z MINE N WILL BE MINE"


RUKS DON'T HAVE ANY IDEA WHAY SHE THINKING AND TO WHOM SHE IS THINKING . THE GIRL WHO Z VERY CLOSE TO HER HER BESTIE HER JODHA


PRECAP JO's entry n JA JO INTERVIEW

Awesome prologue dear continue soon

Awesome prologue continue soon eagerly waiting for first chapter

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Awesome prologue continue soon eagerly waiting for first chapter

chapter 1st will be posted on Sunday

Congo for new story dear😊