AKDHA OS:BACHELORETTE PARTY updated (14/6/2015)

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"Just text me Ruku,if u find something fishy.""Yeah,babes.Don't worry,now let me play my cards."texted Rukaiyya."Ok,then all the best,yaar."replied Jodha."Yaar,do u think that boys will arrange bachelor party,even after we said no."asked Salima."On whom u are showing trust Sallu,they are boys after all."said Moti."Aur nahi toh kya,after all it's Jalal khan's party,they won't leave any stone unturned."said Jodha crossing her arms."But guys,what will they do in bachelor's party,I mean we never saw what they do?"said Salima.Moti sighs and said"Sallu grow up,u r becoming mom in few months and you are saying that u don't have any idea about bachelor's party."."I just know that ,they will drink that's it."answered Salima.Jodha smiles at her sweet friend and says"Sallu,they just don't drink baby,they do many more things."."Many things like what?"asked Salima raising her eyebrows."Like having fun watching pole dance"answered Moti."Even lap dance"said Jodha with a pout."That means they will be having fun with other women"asked Salima.Jodha and Moti nods their heads and sit beside her."That means even Abdul enjoyed same way in his bachelor's party,right?"asked Salima."Don't blame Abdul,in logon ki bachelor party ka sara credit mere would be ko jata hai."pouted Jodha."U mean Jalal"said Salima."Yeah,whom do u think will get these ideas?"said Moti teasing Jodha."Come on guys,I've to be careful with Jalal.U know na kitna bada flirt hai."said Jodha.Both Salima and Moti starts to tease her.On other side,Rukaiyya and Mirza were sleeping peacefully in their roon,correction pretending to sleep.Suddenly Mirza opened his eyes and turned to check on Rukaiyya.Satisified,with his checking he slowly pushed the duvet aside.After sometime he came out of the washroom all ready to go.He opened the door slowly and turned to see Rukaiyya to make sure that she is asleep and went out with a sigh of relief and gush of excitement.Rukaiyya wakes up with a click of the door and sits straight on bed.She wasn't asleep at all,she was only pretending to be.She was actually keeping eye on him.Girls had noticed that from last few days,boys were having some secret talks and whenever anyone used to be around they just used to split and get themselves busy,pretending that everything is normal.Jodha got suspected with their behaviour and asked to keep an eye on them.On Jodha's request Rukaiyya kept an eye on them and she got successful.They were indeed a planning on Jalal's bachelor party.When Mirza went to washroom his mobile light flashed.She checked it&it was a message from Jalal asking about his arrival to the party.She thought to follow Mirza&catch them red handed,she gets off bed &changes&texts to Jodha.Back at Jodha's house,girls are having fun time pulling each other's legs.Suddenly,Jodha gets a text.Moti,reads the text&says."Guys,Ruku ka msg hai,she texted that they were having party today itself not tmrw.""I know,after all he is flirt khan."said Jodha."But we don't know where they are going to party."said Salima."Don't worry,Ruku said she was following Mirza."said Moti.They soon changed&were waiting for Rukaiyya's text.On other side,Rukaiyya was following Mirza's car.She was shocked to a girl stepping inside his car."Mirza,I m gonna kill u."said Rukaiyya.Soon,they reached the club.Rukaiyya texted club's name.Soon after reading text,the girls sped off.Inside club,Mirza found Jalal standing near bar.He makes his way towards Jalal&saw Jalal,When his phone rang up.Jalal is waiting for the person to pick up call"Hello,hello Mirza,where are u?"."Peeche dekh,buddy."came the reply&Jalal turns back&see Mirza grinning."Hey man,I thought u willnot make up."Jalal said hugging him&looks for someone."They are on the way buddy,but tell me what will u do when Jodha comes to know about this"asked Mirza with glint of mischief in his voice.Jalal smirks&answers"So what,along with Jo even Ruku will also know."Mirza glares at him."Yaar,chill Mirza.I think right now they are sleeping.Agar pakad bi gaye na sab saath mein hi phasenge na."said Jalal."phase toh tum chuke ho Jalal"echoed someone voice.Jalal turns&screams"Abdul,Maan"."Yaar Jalal,itna toh banta hai,after all u are the one who organized our bachelor's party,toh yeh ab humari bari."said Maan hugging Jalal."But plan,to mast hai Jalal.Girls must be thinking that we are sleeping now."said Abdul. "That's why I planned to have party today not tmrw"said Jalal grinning to his frnds.Soon the lights went off&a spotlight fell on a girl standing with her back towards them&she started to dance on Yaar na miley. All the boys look towards the girl&then towards each other&screams"Let's hit the floor"&joins the floor.Outside Rukaiyya was getting restless,waiting for the girls.In no time the girls reach the club."Guys,what took you so long to come?"asked Rukiayya."Yaar,we got stuck in traffic."answered Jodha."Guys,come fast .I think the party has started."said Rukaiyya dragging the girls in to club.(SCROLL DOWN)
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Girls enters the club hiding their faces.They were outside thinking how to go in,then they saw group of girls going in&gets mixed with them.Their jaws dropped to ground seeing their husbands dancing shamelessely with the dancers.I can't believe Abdul,can lie to me"said Salima with tears(due to her pregnancy hormones."Ek baar mere haath pad jaye,I will just kill him.said Rukaiyya glaring at Mirza."orelse what,ghar mein biwi aur yaha baharwali"said Moti,seeing Maan.On other side,Jodha's expressions are filled with pure anger seeing Jalal dancing with lead dancer.The song comes to end,boys turn&see the girls glaring them.They look towards each other&find Jalal missing.They makes a crying face&screams"MAMMA".In hallway,Jo goes in fit of anger&jealousy,when suddenly someone pulls hershe gasps&findsJalal.She pushes him&turns to go,but again he pulls her&traps her against wall"Listen Jo,it's just for fun."Jodha gives a fake smile&says"It's ok,Jaan.Enjoy ur party.&kisses him and leaves.Jalal was stunned with her cool&thinks"Kuch toh pak raha hai iss ke devil mind mein."All the boys leave to Jalal's house&start's to think what to do.On other side,girls were burning in jealousy.All of sudden,Jo says"Guys,kal mera bachelorette party hai."What?"all the 3 of them say in unison."Yeah,tmrw we r going to have fun,rather say it Revenge.said Jo giving a smirk.The girls got her point&say"party time."Next day,all the boys except Jalal came to Jodha's house to pacify their wives.To their surprise,all of them behaved very lovingly."Yaar,Jalal's doubt is true.kuch toh pak raha hai."said Mirza.&without thinking they go to Jalal's house."Yaar buddy,u r right,they r planning something,or else why would they behave all lovey dovey"said Maan"What shall we do now?asked Abdul."Let me call,Sukanya di&ask what r they planning up to"said Jalal dialing to Sukanya."Hello,Jalal."came the reply."Hey di,actually I called u to ask,what is Jodha doing'"said Jalal."U did'nt talk with her"questioned Sukanya."Woh,actually her phone was switched off,that's why."answered Jalal"Oh,they went to club,for Jodha's bachelorette party." "What,bachelorette party?shouted Jalal."Yeah,u don't know."asked Sukanya."No Suku di,but can u say where they went?asked Jalal."Yeah,they went to the club where u guys goes often."said Sukanya."OK,di .I got an imp work.Will talkto u later&thnks for the information."said Jalal."It's ok Jalal."replied sukanya.He cuts the call&turns to see guys waiting for him to speak."They went to celebrate Jo's bachelorette party guys."said Jalal."What r u waiting for,then come we will go there."said Maan dragging the boys.Soon they reached the club.Mirza talks to the manager&gets bartender's dress.Soon they disguise themselves.Once entering in Mirza's got shock,seeing Rukaiyya dancing with a guy,his eyes popped out seeing her smacking on the guy's butt.Seeing him,all the guys laughed.Maan chocked when he saw Moti,was doing a belly dance.Abdul was searching for Salima,he didn't believe his eyes,when he saw his sweet Wife,cheering no no screaming standing on the table.All the while Jalal was laughing seeing his frnds,but his smile faded when he heard Moti announcing"Now it's time for the bride's performance."His became wide seeing her standing there in a black colour halter neck thigh length dress.The lights went off &spotlight fell on Jo&she started to sway her hips,to the song...Honthon pe beimaaniyan,(Jo turns back,Jk's eye's pop out,while the girls r cheering her&guys r laughing seeing Jalal)karle karle ; thodi nadaaniyan..(She slowly goes towards the bar&pulls Jalal's tie,with that he goes with her on floor)Honthon pe manmaanhyaan.Karle karle,(Jo keeps his hands on her waist&dances seductively,poor soul was totally shocked seeing her avatar)thodi nadaaniyan. Mujhe aadhi raat ko sataane lage(even he starts to dance with Jo) ,Tu aaja paas,ye bulaane lage,Tujhe chhoona chaahe.Mere ye ,mere ye mere.(Jo pulls him towards her&sings) Pink lips,pink lips,pink lips,pink lips,pink lips,pink lips. .The song comes to an end,but suddenly Jo removes the false beard from Jalal,all of them gasps seeing him.Jo comes close to Jalal&say"Do u still think that bimbo dance better than me."No,Jaan."he said huskily.Jo leans closer&gives a passionate kiss.He was totally dazed by the kiss.He comes back to his sense,when he heard her saying"YOU R SOLELY MINE"&again kiss him.She breaks the kiss&saw him smirking.This time he leans closer&says"I loved u r revenge jaan,hope I would get these punishments in future too."She winks at him."Jalal humara kya hoga."said the guys."Turn back guys"said Jodha.Soon after they turned back,their lips were sealed by their respective wives.Jodha turns back,&again Jalal gives her a deep kiss...*************** "Jalal khan,kya apko mohtarma Jodha se nikah qubool hai.?asked Maulvi."QUBOOL HAI".mohtarma Jodha kya apko Jalal khan se nikah qubool hai?asked maulvi"QUBOOL HAI".(hope u guys like it.ready for u jootas)
Edited by dharaangel - 10 years ago
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plz update akdha ss love u jo part 12 also n eagrly waiting for ur both os n ss part 12 also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update 😛
Loved it 😊
Edited by jodhaandakbar - 10 years ago
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fantastic os
i love it!!!!!
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hey hi were iz d update plz update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update...revenge 😆
I liked it...thanks for the pm
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Awesome funny and cute os
loved it
and plz update ur stories too.😛
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Nice tit for tat 😆😳

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