FF Qubool Hai Chapter 20 updated 16/04/16

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Hi I am New here.i have been watching the serial since 2013...and was a silent reader of the forum...So today thought of writing an FF based on modern day Jodha and Jalal...I m providing the prologue here...Please do comment and let me know whether i should continue the story or not...

PROLOGUE & CHARATER SKETCH

Jalal is a 28 year old businessman who is handling his ancestral property and helping his father (Humayun) in their family business. He was a geek and main hobbies are watching news especially business news, playing football, jetskiing and travelling. Also he has a library of his own where he doesn't allow anyone else to enter. His family consists of his father and mother (Hamida).Business-IT sector. Name-Mughal Industries.

Jodha is a 24 year old advocate. She studied corporate law and is too good in her profession even though it has been just a year for her in this profession. Her family Consists of her father(Bharmal) and mother(Mainavati). She is a trained Bharatanatyam dancer, painter and loves interior designing. Family Business-Owners of 2 famous restaurants in India and Dubai and also owns a channel. But she is currently working in Mughal industries as their legal advisor.

They live in Mumbai. They belong to very rich family and are quite famous. And when the parents started thinking about settling their children that's where the story begins. Mr. Rasheed Khan is Jalal's uncle and it's through him that Humayun came to know about Jodha and her family as he is the very person under whom Jodha is currently working.

Chapter 1- Pg 1

Chapter 2-Pg 2

Chapter 3-Pg 4

Chapter 4-Pg 7(Teaser)

Chapter 4-Pg 8

Chapter 5-Pg 11(Teaser)

Chapter 5-Pg 13

Chapter 6 -Pg 15(Teaser)

Chapter 6 -Pg 17

Chapter 7 -Pg 19

Chapter 8-Pg 23 (Teaser)

Chapter 8-Pg 26

Chapter 9-Pg 29 (Teaser)

Chapter 9-Pg 32

Chapter 10-Pg 35

Chapter 11- 39

Chapter 12- 42

Chapter 13- 55

Chapter 14- 58

Chapter 15- 61

Chapter 16- 70 (Teaser)

Chapter 16- 77

Chapter 17- 81

Chapter 18- 85 (Teaser)

Chapter 18- 90

Chapter 19- 106

Chapter 20 -113

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for the new story dr..continue soon..nice prologue and charactor sketch dr...
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congo for your new story.. continue soon and pm me😊
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Congo on the new story dear!
interesting cs! Do continue soon!
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Congo on the new story
nice story
continue soon
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congrats fr a new ff...lovely prologue do continue soon...
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Chapter 1

Mughal Mansion

Humayuna nd Hamida were sitting in their bedroom and talking about Jalal.

Humayun: Dont u think its time for Jalal to settle down in his life. I mean to have a family. To be loved by someone else apart from us and his other relatives.
Hamida : What to do ur son is a workaholic and is passionately in love with his work. I don't know whether he ll be having enough time to spend his valuable time with a girl.

Humayun : HAHA...jokes apart...well do u have any idea regarding his love life..i mean is he single or dating someone...coz i have no clue about it and moreover he is close to you so may be in casual talks he might have mentioned something like that...

Hamida: Fortunately or unfortunately he is single...and as far as i know him he barely looks at any girl and even if he is attracted to someone he never bothers to know her...so i think we have to initiate a talk with him to know about what kind of a girl he wants so that we can start our work on matrimony sites and meet brokers coz i don't think our son is gonna have a love marriage.

Humayun : Let me talk to Rasheed once..Both uncle-nephew duo understands each other and shares a lot of their feelings so...let's do that first.

Royal Mansion(Jodha's house)

Mainavati : Listen...Even Sukanya(Jodha's cousin of the same age) is getting married within a month. Dont you think its time for us to find a suitable guy for Jodha...becoz few days back i tried talking to Jodha to know whether she already has someone in her life or not and she clearly said that she doesn't love anyone and has no time to involve herself in such stupidity...i really don't know whats going on in her mind. At times she behaves as if she hates men.

Bharmal : Arre...you should be happy that she has given us a chance to select someone for her..and you should have consulted me before asking such stupid questions to her. You very well know na ki she loves her work and for the past 1 month she was busy with the impending case of Mughal industry so may be out of stress she might have replied to u...so don't take too much of tension...i ll talk to her...

In the Office

A tall man in his late twenties was brisk walking in his cabin and was very much stressed and it was very clear from his face.He was The Jalal Khan one the youngest and good looking businessman. He did his BBA and MBA from Manchester Business School and was the batch topper. He thinks, eats and drinks business. He was pacing to and fro. Suddenly a man in his late fifties entered the cabin.

Jalal : Uncle...How are u?Did you youself attend the case? Whats the result did we win the case?

Rasheed : Jalal...let me breath for a sec...and don't be stressed i have sent my junior and she ll handle it.Just received a call from her and sounds like there is some positive news for us but she didn't mention anything clearly...just wait for an hour she ll be here...And yeah i m fine see i m standing in front of u...ekdum hatta khatta...

Jalal : But uncle don't you think u have done a mistake by sending ur junior to attend a case so important.

Rasheed : Jalal don't underestimate my junior...she is a really good advocate and gives a tough competition to my other juniors...she can even beat you in arguments...so better be careful while talking about her...

Jalal : Looks like someone is really interested in boasting a girl?Ok anyway uncle i m already late for a meeting so if u get any information regarding the case just text me...ok bye uncle...

Jalal was leaving the office and was busy talking to his PA Abdul when he slightly bumps a person...without turning to see the person he says sorry and hears the same sentence from the other side and leaves the office...

Hope u like it...plz do comment

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congratulations
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Congratulations dear
Nice start
Continue soon
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Suppa update! Cntinue sn n pm me

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