FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 5 (Chap 27 page1 10/06/15) updated

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Fantastic Update Jahnavi... Loved the way you wrote it👏..

Like the gradual progress in Jodha Jalal relationship.❤️..

It has reached from idiot to my sweet idiot😳... awww soo sweet😳..

Love the late night chats...bantering.. batman n 25 years of age... enjoyed every bit of it😆..

Finally Jalal saw Jodha's idiot... Samyu..no more a suspect😃...

You r a very good story teller Jahnavi,,turned the serious interrogation into pretty interesting one😉

Eagerly waiting for Jalal to surprise Jodha in Delhi or at the airport😳 or in flight

Do update soon😳 thank you for the pm😊

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

congo for new thread di🥳🥳

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R. Styles.. :-P

@Zayn_1Dholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome chap!! I am nt finding any word to describe the story itz so amazing!

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R. Styles.. :-P

@Zayn_1Dholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Mixed of all things! Urgh! Y dis ramesh?? Yeh pakka kuch karega!! Urgh!

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Wow awesome update di... nd congratulations for new thread... waiting to knw what will happen next...

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

wonderful play of words...specially their phone talks...so cute...

so who can be the culprit and why he wants to kill entire family?

and by the way, both these Samyu and ACP r single right? r u planning to make them fall for eachother?

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ABIRAMASUNDARI

@KASUNDARI

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

as usual a nice chapter dear. Loved jajo phone talks and their nik names. Update asap.

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Rathi

@Thendral03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

I loved this Chapter

I loved the phone Conversations between them both 😃

Jo forget the festival being with him 😲

I loved her reply whn he said tht she was the obedient soft spoken modest lady i have ever seen 😆😆

SO it was isnt accident 😲 jo's life is danger bt who wants to kill her nd y😡😡

so she wants to knw jalal's birthday bt he didnt say her so sad

bt jalal isnt gng with jo to delhi😕😕 i thought he will go with her 😕😕

waiting for ur update

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

thanks for the pm
outstanding update

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madhutanu

@madhutanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Congrats on new thread... nice update dear...hope to find a culprit soon...y i feel syamu or ACP ki jodi pakki hai... .. oh now SMS to call)!!!! good going... next update soon dear