AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 6-chap 24(24 Aug) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Meri pyaari pyaari PP dear 😳
what a chapter 👏
even without Jalal
I like it 😛
2 d core of my heart 🤗
(rhyming scheme aa b cc 😆) Waah Taj 🤣
jokes apart now come 2 d point, babu moshai what a magnificent description of penthouse and its belongings Marvellous ⭐️ so lavish, extremely royal, splendid delineation of each and everything d detailing was so picturesque, so minutely as if d entire scene is flaoting before my eyes as if am transported 2 some unknown castle situated on sea shore in some remote island of a dreamland jaise ki childhood mein fairytale mein padte the vaise hee dear Jalal exclusively selected dis castle 4 his Queen 😳 aisa pyaar karne wala shareef pati sabko mile Jai ho baba Jallu ki 🤣 u know PP tu mujhe kaise jaan jaati hai I always wanna have a house with sea facing 😳 I adore cream colour a lot as it symbolizes serenity and calmness in nature 😛 d best part now is dat d place is Mumbai 😃 koi nahi rehata vaha, kabhi gayi nahi vaha but dunno why i admire and in love with it tune jo bhi description diya hai sab mere taste ka hi hai dear 😳 btw yeh 2 sitting arrangements kyu hain 😆main samajh gayi ek entrance ke near as enter karte hee hamala kar de woh Dracula 😆 and other near bed uske description ki jarurat nahi hai yaha sab 18+ hee hain 😉😆 dear penthouse mein All out nahi hai kya jo jodha ko mosquito se bacchane ke liye bed par bhi curtains hain 😉ya phir koi aur baat hai samjha na am very innocent 😭😆 aaj nahi chodungi tujhe meri BB 😆 bahot dino ke baad haath aayi hai 😆poor Zakira usse koi appreciation nahi mila
I couldn't stop laughing and enjoying myself dat poor soul took so much toil and trouble 2 have a simple bath but as a woman i feel proud at every step she didn't let herself defeated and choose d simplest one maintaing her self respect lovely 👏
sahi pehchana uss batamiz dil uss ishq kamine ko jodha ne dat he wouldn't leave her so easily 😆 chote sarkar se bachana mushkil hee nahi namumkin hai begum sahiba 😉mujhe yaad hai in chappy 15 uss sirfeere ka comment "... I have no faith on Jalal, when it comes 2 Jodha."
Finally d exile of Maa beta is over I loved their reunion part ❤️ dear bus ab JaJo ka milan part baaki hai 😳 tu sab jaanti hai dear how prolong waiting frustrate and almost break u all 😭 so week mein ek baar toh thread par sirf Hi hee post kar diya kar 😡 dat would be enough 2 help ur loyal readers 2 keep alive 😃 jab teri pm ya teri koi news milti hai toh main bhi aisa hi feel karti hu dear ki meri sis samne aa jaye and i also wanna shower all my sisterly affection on her 🤗 "...as if after spending a fortnight of draught somebody just arrived at d sight of water. aur uska ignorance eats up my soul like Jodha
"The pain she endured 4 last couple days was something she didn't want 2 revisit in her life. If God would have appeared 2 her now and asked 4 her one wish...she would invariably have asked 4 her son's company...all her life...what else she could have asked 4."
aur woh Jallu ka dialogue yes sweetheart and jo hukum begum sahiba toh... ☺️rocking... 😎 bigde hue papa ne Rico ko bhi bigad hee diya but accha hai 😆 mujhe toh uss din ka intazaar jai jab mamma bhi bigad jayegi in dono papa beta ke chakkar mein 🤣 waise begum sahiba ne bigadna shuru kar diya hai aakhir wife jo hai jalal ki 😎 "With this Jodha gave her a closure look. Indiacting...dat's all I have got 4 you. It didn't take much 4 Zakira 2 understand what she meant...Zakira next time u r going 2 call me Begum Sahiba... I am surely going 2 kill you. Am I clear?"
I love Ammijaan a lot dear 😳 ek maa hone se phele ek aurat ka role and she proved out a very generous, benevolent human being, a set example 4 all
⭐️ I highly appreciate her dear very good portrayal PP 👏 and d answer from a mother showing her concern 4 his ladla is very touchy yaar dil bhaar gaya mera 😭😭... "but I really didn't have d option 2 not go by his words. I couldn't say no 2 him 4 d sake of my son's safety." well dear u lighten up my mood in next lines,"Ohh...Jalal pareshan toh nahi kar raha? Not Yet, Good If he tries 2 intimidate you...give me a call then and there. I'll handle d rest." Ammijaan lady Singham se kam nahi hain 😆 but unhe aane mein one month lag jayega aur tab tak how can she trusts jallu's no name 2 my desire 😉 aur Rico ki prediction toh jodha ne kar di hai papa ke nakshe kadam par chalega woh 😉 "aapka pota hai...dulhaniya khud dhundke layega...or may be...shayad uthake laye..."😆 PP NNTMD ka sequel soch rahi hai kya meri side se green signal hai tujhe 😃
OMG next part scary hone wala hai dear 😭 accha hua tune precap bata diya apna heart rock solid bana lungi tab tak 😭
At d end Jodha ko toh yahi suggest karungi ki
"Zindagi pyaar ka geet hai / isse har dil ko gana padega / Zindagi gam ka sagar bhi hai / Hanske uspaar jana padega" so b strong dear 👍🏼
Jallu ke liye ek episode ki yeh lines yaad aa rahi hain "Kaise hamne din hain kaate / kaise kaati raat / kinse rishte naate choote / kinka choota saath / kisse hamne baazi jeeti / kisse khai maat / lekin sab kuch paa kar bhi hain mere khaali haath..."
Aur apni sis ke liye JA ki lines 😳
Khaboo mein ho tum
dono jaha ho tum
pyaar tera jeevan mera
jab se paya saath ye tera
rab bhi ho gaya mera...




Edited by FAIRYLOVEDESIRE - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
PP🤗 you back from exile??😆 How are you?

Very small chapter😭😭 But Cute one... loved it. Please update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
u know dear aaj 2 times comment post karte time net ne dhoka de diya aur pura comment dhul gaya 😭 otherwise around 4 pm tak post ho jata 😭 pata nahi aur kya kya likha tha maine ab yaad nahi but yeh vala thoda chota reh gaya na 😆 dear I heartily congrats u and extends my wishes 4 ur new journey on " Let Me Be Ur Hero" 😃 maine comment post kar diya hai dear 😉 well i can't tell u my babu moshai how happy am yaar 😛 not only because am gonna have ur one more FF but 4 ur zeal and endeavours 2 keep up alive d writer in u, d way u r paying back in d form of giving respect 2 ur skill 👏 aise hee ishawaar ke iss uphaar ko sambhal kar rakhana dear khone mat dena 😳 tune ek baar mere prank ke reply mein kaha tha always keep it up, bade naseeb se milti hai, bus tere liye bhi yehi repeat karungi ki don't dare 2 disrespect it even in dreams, bade naseeb se milti hai 😛 aur mujh jaisi ladki bhi bade naseeb se milti hai 😉 tu nahi jaanti kitani demand rehati hai meri har jagah but meri sui toh tujh par hee atak jaati hai 😆 mujhe sambhal kar rakhana ek baar agar kho diya dubara haath na aayegi yeh ladki 😆 hassi aayi na meri babu moshai ko 😳 aise hee khush raha kar dear always aur rest bhi kar liya kar my cutty pie yeh bhi naseeb se milti hai 😊 jab mauka mile tab chauka laga diya kar😉 aur yeh tere new thread and new FF ke liye 🤗




Edited by FAIRYLOVEDESIRE - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: mushat


diii first khulasha karo desire ka next update kab aayega??
18+ chahiiye mujhe..samjhe na aap ..


kam se kam ek month baad aayega 😭 pp aka bb ka record yehi kehata hai 😭 aur shaant reh 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Congratzz on ur new thread di 👏👏
I Missed jalal 😔 😔Bt Still it was a fabulous chapter di 👏👍🏼
i loved jo's expression whn he said Yes Swt hrt 🤣🤣 bt must appreciate his guts even after knowing abt her he is saying so ..at end whn he said jo hukum begum sahiba 🤣
nd the convo between jo nd jalal's mom was also nice😊 bt she doesnt believe her son 😭😭 tht makes me sad i wish jo nd she gets our swt jalal soon nd update the next chappy soon di plzz 😭😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Ooo superb update d bond between mother nd son nd mother-in-law nd her daughter is awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Nice update👏
Loved the emotional mother who met her son Rico after many days of separation.
Thanks for the pm and update next one asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
congrats on ur new thread
great update
missed jalal
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Happy for new thread
congo buddy
very nice update
so nice words used
Jodha n her mother inlaw cell talk was too good
jalal is blushing at jodha
now what next
all r in Mumbai
waiting for next update
thanks for pm
hope u will give us soon ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Congo pp for new thread dear
Finally u updated , thanks re
Finally jo reached Mumbai .
How I wish jalal also stayed with jo
Jo and her laadla Rico loved the duo bonding.they missed each other so badly.
Wow jalal called jo " sweetheart" making jo ready to kill hahaha.
Loved HB concern for jo .
Update soon dear
Thanks for pm.
Edited by avika444 - 10 years ago

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