Jalal's Diary.... Entry 8 updated....(16/3/15) - Page 11

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ENTRY 6
I jumped down the cliff to see that, the gangaur festival is in full swing. I was taking a round of the market place of the city, when my eyes caught a man sharpening swords.. My eyes!! Allah!! They always search either for good quality swords or for good looking women!! I have a strange passion of collection both of them.. I keep the best of swords in my armoury and the best of good looking women in my harem!! My harem already possesses around 5000 beautiful ladies!! By the way, when that man saw me looking towards the knives, he mocked and asked me whether I had come there only to see or to buy some things as well!! He asked me to try his knives, informing me that they are of the best quality .. I took his knife and tested it's sharpness and then took out my knife and sharpened it.. Then I went towards a bundle of sugarcane and tried that knife. The man came and said that nothing happened. But when I touched that bundle, it fell down!!
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The look on the man's face was worth seeing! He was so much shocked! I chose to leave him and left from there satisfied with myself!
But the man called me and asked me about my identity! I replied that I'm Jalal, Shahenshah of Hindustan. He laughed a lot hearing that and at last said that he's Raja Bharmal then! I asked him why can't I be Jalal. He said that Jalal will never come to Amer alone! I said in his ears that it's impossible to cut Jalal's head, so he shouldn't say that the knives he's selling is capable of cutting Jalal's head! Saying this I left him over there. I heard him bidding me bye and mockingly called me as Jalal. I was feeling like laughing out loud when he tried to mock me! I wished to see his reaction after knowing my real identity! I can bet that it'll be worth watching!
In Amer, I was feeling like a different individual. My motive behind the visit was to see the city once before conquering it but it seemed I've some other tasks there as well!!

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It was when I was roaming through the market when the announcement of the visit of the royal ladies was made. The first palanquine was of Maharani Mainavati, next one was of Rajkumari Sukanya and then the third one was of Rajkumari Jodha!When I heard that name, I remembered the soldier praising her beauty! The desire to see her made me follow her palaki! I was sure looking like a mad lover, chasing his love. But what an irony it was! I didn't own a heart. I just wanted to see this beauty and compare her with the beauties present in my harem in Agra!
Through the palaki I got a small glimpse of her face and that was enough to mesmerize me! Such a beauty! Why was it hidden from my sight for so many days! This beauty deserved to be a showpiece in Agra! She deserved to make my harem glow more! It was as if I was all lost in her!!



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I followed the princess's palaki till it reached the river's bank where the puja was supposed to be performed.. When she got down from the palaki, I couldn't remove my eyes from her angelic face.. My eyes were stuck there.. My hungry eyes couldn't get enough of her face! Then there I saw Raja Suryabhaan, the supposed to be bridegroom of the beauty in front of me.. He also followed her in the ghat! When he tried to reach the ghat, soldiers stopped him asking his identity and then recognising him they left him and allowed him to go to the puja place! I took the opportunity and entered behind him saying that I'm with him! How could I miss the chance to see the Angel once again!
There I saw the puja start and Rani gave some instructions to the princesses. First some one else kit the diya and then it was turn of Jodha to pray. I saw her get down and sit in the bank and pray! Through the water I saw her close her eyes.


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She looked so divine! The water seemed to enhance her beauty much more! After praying for sometime with closed eyes, she opened them and looked at me though the water! The moment she looked at me, it was as if time stopped for me! I saw her turn backwards once, may be to see me! A storm blew just then, accompanied with a heavy rain.. I couldn't see her properly anymore because of the heavy splashes of rain on my face..


My eyes searched for her, for the beauty once again, but I couldn't see her anymore..
Then after the rain and storm became a little slow I saw Rani Mainavati taking all the princesses with her.. I saw her going away but didn't take the risk of following her!
I had started my own game, the game to own her anyhow and place her in my harem! I wouldn't let such a beauty in waste! Should I do that?

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While she was going away, I saw her left anklet leave her ankle and it fell down on the river bank.. But it seemed that she didn't notice it falling down and neither did her companions... They all left the bank without the anklet!!
After they went away, I went towards the place where the anklet fell and picked it up! I couldn't let the rising water level wash it away! I took the anklet and left the place...
I found a desolate place away from the market place and the river bank and thought of spending the night there.
Jodha roamed around in front of my eyes! I buried the anklet in the sand there!


My passion of owning the princess was so high that I even started day dreaming! I saw taking her away with me on my horse! The feel of her so close to me, though in my dreams, increased my desire for her! Now my mission is to own her anyhow!!!
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