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Posted: 10 years ago
Who types so many lines after saying reserved😆
😛
Your updates do this to me

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Hey Jahnu My busy bee finally you updated

Woah! What kind of mixture of feeling you're giving us😲 Discovering culprit plus Discovering the Passion. 😆 But you excelled in penning that. I thoroughly enjoyed and loved every bit of it. So yesterday Saree Avatar and today homely avatar haa?😆 Poor Boss! True! It's really a tough job to pretend detached😉 Tell me Jahnu... How long he has to wait for seductress avatar?☺️ and Completing what left halfway.. Aww We're waiting wating!!
☺️☺️


I was rofl-ing when the tigress haunting and jodha's imagination for prithivi's inquiries🤣 OMG! "So... according to this officer, Mohan and I were partners in crime!!" 🤣🤣 Poor girl misinterpreted boss's cold behavior too😆 OMG! I thoroughly enjoyed that scene. And peddamma concerns on bad eyes and Jodha's mimic 🤣🤣 Well! Is that bad eye including boss's eyes too?😆

So finally all the plots leads too Samyukta???😲😲 OMG! What a twisted turn now! Jodha is sharing each and every details of her plans with Samyu right? Saamyu unknowingly helping the stalker or Is it just a dubious of Prithvi? Because there are lots of incidents Jodha shared with Samyu of her whereabouts and next day plans OMG! I'm more eager than before to read further... Please update soon Missy😡😡


Darling.. .. whenever u say you enjoyed reading a chapter, I proudly pat myself 😆... I too found it hilarious writing the line in blue.. 🤣..
@red.. had Peddamma known boss's eyes were also one set among them, she'll not let her daughter face him at all.. 😆.. discovering passion line.. .. I'm waiting for that day to make it happen betweeen them.. 😉😉.. love you dear for everything
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


hi Jhansi.. how r u doing.. did Mahesh ever come? you didn't update me after that?

hey akka
i am doing well
nd mahesh dont ask me
it is keeping on postpone nd in between audio launch was held so for now it is postponed
nd coming to story read it half their first date till she said her story
now feeling vry sleepy
so will read nd cmmnt tommorow
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: devikamahankal

Reserved

Welcome back jahnvi Di
We missed you a lot.
Thanks for the pm dear,
U know we even planned for stalker since
U were not showing up😉
It was the most unexpected update
Actually it has scattered my wits completely.
I generally read every update 3-4 times to absorb
Beauty of each line n emotion.
But this update, I guess minimum 5-6 times😆
It was a mind boggling update.
So so unexpected, yet making me so happy,
It was like a fast forward ,with jalal shedding
Off all his inhibitons.
Worth waiting chapter.👏



Thanks dear.. and I apologize for missing in action.. too many things on head..yeah I read the stalker thing.. 😆😆.. woah.. 5-6 times?? that sounds musical to me.. hope you liked the unexpected date.. 😉😉.. when boss sets into action he doesn't think of time and people.. no inhibitions.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jansijodha

hey akka
i am doing well
nd mahesh dont ask me
it is keeping on postpone nd in between audio launch was held so for now it is postponed
nd coming to story read it half their first date till she said her story
now feeling vry sleepy
so will read nd cmmnt tommorow



sure dear.. take ur own time.. GN.. and I wonder if Mahesh would ever come 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: devikamahankal

Who types so many lines after saying reserved😆

😛
Your updates do this to me



I'm blessed then 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: savindi.db

awesome chapter dr..tks for the pm..plz..Update Update Update Update Update soon...


Thanks Savindi.. updated and PM-ed next chap too 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laharipriya

akka i am angry with u for bing late and i will comment late also u have to wait for my comment akka just kidding i will comment omorrow akka today was some what busy akka and hope u enjoyed ur vacation akka.



Hi Priya.. you have all rights to be angry.. 😆.. how is life going??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mushat

i have missed chapter 22...read both chapters together.. amazing dii...hayeee jodha's concern for jalal ..dressed his wound. and became Lady acp for jalal.. went to investigate alone..and the convo...thank god Maine ek sath 2 chapters pada..now coming to chapter 23.thank you dii for updating..jalal has hurt her ..then her realization about her state.in this state too she is more concerned about jalal ..if he has seen her like this.. checking her back lol...hayeee she is panicked if Mohan workers engineers has seen her like this not handsome MD
Jalal ka bhi ek haal hai ..hayeee..the breakfast part was hilarious.. and how can I forget the phone call..when Jo is going to check her phone..and who is behind jo 's life and why???
update soon .thanks for the pm..


Hi Nishat.. glad u liked both the chapters.. all ur questions except who's behind Jo's life are answered in latest chap.. hope you'd like it.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Thanks for updating dear.Enjoyed the chapter thoroughly.
So ACP prithivi started his investigation, hope they catch the culprit soon before something worst happens. Pls jahnu I don't want PBD Jo to be another NJAPA Jo 🤔 .
Though tired and exhausted before heading towards her room Jo dragged her badepappa and narrated the entire happenings.Aww poor girl so much worried about her jalal.
Amidst all the chaos finally our to be love birds got time to reminisce the past events 😳 😳 .
Badepappa called jalal for thanking and also invited to join for breakfast .hmm excited.
Loved the way prithivi was teasing jalal addressing jo as tigress and then the phone call " idiot I will kill u if u ring again ".it was hilarious 🤣 .
Want to see Jo's expression after knowing on whom she shouted and hung up the phone.hahaha.
Always love mother and daughter convo.
Prameela ji doing nazar utaar and Jo advertising for the jaadu treatment amusing the unexpected guests. 😉
Finally she noticed them " she jumped off the counter too and in a flick of second moved out of sight" how disastrous"
I too feel the same dear , how every time she manage to get into such awkward situations 😆 .
The way u write these situations can't stop myself from blushing .lovely jahnu.
On dining table ACP started his interrogation in hope to find some clue which could give some lead for further investigation and here Jo thinks that they doubt her and mohan for being crimes partners . poor jo .
OK did she say" SIR". Err .
Amazing dear update ASAP.
Thanks for pm



Hi Mouli.. its Jodha's innate talent to fall into awkward situations.. 😆.. yes she said SIR.. she has to show off that she's angry na.. and don't worry nothing happens to Jodha.. Jalal is there.. all is well with her.. 😳

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