Tere Bina Kya Vajod Mera updated chappy 5 part 2 on pg 34 on 30/06/15 - Page 9

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

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Chapter- 2

Salim goes from DWK towards his room and Jalal is busy searching for his Jodha. He goes and checks for her in her room, but she is not present there. He is getting restless with every minute. He says - Jodha Begum ap kahan hai? At last after some time of finding Jodha, Jalal goes to Angori Bagh and at last he sees' her. He sees' his Jodha sitting on a couch in Angori Bagh and he notices that she is thinking about something. Jalal goes and approaches Jodha, but she does not notice him as she was lost In Akdhaland. She is busy thinking about the incident that had recently occurred in DWK and she is blushing. Jalal stands in front of her, but she pays no heed as she is too much lost. Jalal- Mmm... Jodha does not hear it, but Jalal notices Jodha blushing so he decides to do his favourite business. Jalal favourite business is teasing Jodha which he enjoys like anything. He says - Jodha Begum... Jodha hears it this time and thinks that she is dreaming and says to herself loudly- Lo ab tum din mai bhi Shehanshah ke sapne dekhne lagi Jodha ki ab tumhe unki awaj sune lagi hai jabki voh yahan par nahi hai. After saying this she hits her head lightly with her hand and says- Tum bhi na Jodha. Jalal who is very much present there smiles at her childish antics after all this is what he sees only in her and not in any of his Begum's. Her childlike innocence which forces him to smile and makes him love her more, more than ever. He again speaks - Jodha... Jodha says aloud to herself- Jao Jodha jakar Shehanshah se milo varna tum unke bare mai soch soch kar pagal ho jaogi. Vaise abhi kon sa kam pagal ho? Jalal is busy enjoying her talks and waits for her to realize that he is actually present there. She gets up and sees Jalal, but again she thinks she is day dreaming - Lo phir se Jodha bas bahut hua din mai sapne dekhna band karo. Ab toh had hi hogaye ab tumhe Shehanshah dikh bhi rahe hai. Jodha ab chalo dekhna tum aram se Shehanshah ke ar par nikal jayogi kyonki voh yahan par nahi. She walks straight towards Jalal, but bashes with him, she takes two steps back and walks again and she again bashes with Jalal. Jodha says - Aab kya hua? Kya hum kisi se takra gaye? Hai! Kanah kahin hum pagal toh nahi hogaye. She said all of this with her eyes downcast. Jalal who is trying is level best to control his laughter fails to do so and bursts in a fit of laughter. Jodha raises her eyes to see how come she can hear Shehanshah's laughter when he is not present here and she sees Jalal, but still she does not believe her eyes, because her eyes had been continuously deceiving her since the morning. So, she pokes her finger on Jalal's ribs to check whether he is really there or not. Jodha says - Ungli toh par nahi gaye matlab Shehanshah yahan par hai. Haan Shehanshah yahin par hai. Theek hai. Suddenly she realizes what she has recently said. She says - Kya Sehanshah yahan par hai ? . She says all of this with a cute shocked expression and Jalal is like - Aww... Jodha tries to act normal and says -Shehanshah ap yahan par kya kar rahe? Aur ap kab aye yahan par? She says all of this in one go and in one breath and after saying this she takes a deep breath. Jalal says - Aram se Jodha Begum. Hum toh yahan par tabse hai jabse ap apne mai hi bol ja rahi. Jodha gives a questioning expression that what are you doing here. Jalal smiles seeing her. Jodha asks Jalal that- Kya apne hume sach mai bulya tha? Aur humari sari bate apne sun li? Jalal nods indicating a yes. Jodha checks turn crimson red, she tries her level best to control herself from blushing, but she failed to do so. So she decides to leave, but Jalal notices that. As soon as she turns to leave Jalal holds Jodha's wrist and pulls her toward himself. Jodha bangs with a thud crashing on Jalal. They both were so close to each other that their bodies were touching each other and feeling each other's body warmth. They both could fell each other's proximity. They both feel each other's breath and their heart beats match like never before and go in a rhythm like a pleasant music which is soothing to ears. Both were staring at each other and Jalal decides to break the silence Jalal .Jalal says - Kahan par ja rahi hai humari jan , hume chod kar? Abhi toh humare bare mai soch rahi thi . Aab kahan chal di humari jan? Jodha blushingly says- Shehanshah ap bhi na. Jalal says- Vaise toh aj humari ghar wali ghanno choko lag rahi se(I have no clue about this accent so I'm sorry if there is any mistake). This made Jodha blush even harder because she loved Jalal speaking in a Rajasthani accent as he sounded so cute. They both were so close that everybodys attention is on them. They both unwillingly had become the center of attention. Jalal's one hand is on Jodha's waist and the other on Jodha's collarbone Jodha's hands were encircled around Jalal's neck, both were unaware about their awkward condition and position.

BGM

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga Hoon...

Main Mera Dil Aur Tum Ho Yahaan...
Fir Kyun Ho Palkein Jhukaye Waha...
Tum Saahasee Pehle Dekha Nahin...
Tum Isse Pehle The Jane Kahaan...

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada.
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga...

Rehte Ho Aake Jo Tum Paas Mere.
Tham Jaaye Pal Ye Vahi Bas Main Ye Sochu...

[Female:] Sochu Main Tham Jaaye Pal Yeh Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum... [x2]

Chalti Hai Saansein Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada Dil Theherne Laga Hai...

Tanhaiyo mein tujhe dhoonde mera dil.
Har pal ye tujhko hi soche bhala kyun.

[Female: x2]
Tanhai mein dhoonde tujhe dil,
Har pal tujhko soche.

Milne lage dil, pehle se zyada. Pehle se zyada ishq hone laga.

Salim who is passing through Angori Bagh as he is going to the practice area notices something awkward and over hears the maids talking how cute Shehanshah and MUZ are looking. Salim thinks what know. He sees everybodys eyes are seeing at one direction. So he decides to see what's so interesting. So, he follows everybodys eye path and sees' Akdha. He is shocked to see his parents so close and that too for the first time in his lifetime. He is like what the...? Are they out of their mind? Can't they see that others are staring at them? But whatever they look so cute. He remembers Farhan saying - Ishq na koi sharm karta hai na haya. Mohabbat andhi hoti hai bikul hi andhi hoti. He says to himself - Shyad sach mai mohabbat andhi hoti hai. Jalal and Jodha again were staring at each other. Jodha notices few soldiers and few maids staring at them and that is when she notices their awkward condition. Jalal also notices their awkward position, he is slightly embarrassed, but he is not ready to leave Jodha. Jodha says- Shehanshah hume chodiye na dekho na sab ghor rahe hain. Jalal says- Ghor rahe hain toh ghorne do na Jodha begum. Hum toh apko nahi chodenge. Jodha says blushingly- Shehanshah... Jalal speaks cutting Jodha - Hum apko ek hi shart par chodenge . Jodha exicted- Kya shart hai Shehanshah khaiye na? Jalal says- Apko hume naam se bolna padega. Jodha - nahi Shehanshah hum nahi bol sakte . Jalal- theek hai jaise apki marji . Hum toh aise hi rahenge. Jalal knew Jodha would never take his name so he kept this condition in front of Jodha to tease her. Jodha also knew what is Jalal is up to. Jodha thinks- Hai! Kanah ab hum kaha fas gaye? Ab hum kya kare? Jalal smiles at Jodha's helplessness. Jodha always wished to call Jalal by his name, but Rajput women were not allowed to take their husbands name, but today she was determined to get free from Jalal's clutches and she wanted to see Jalal's expression when she calls him by his name. Jalal says- Jodha Begum humne apko apke shohar ka naam lene ko keher rahe hai. Kisi aur ka naam toh lene ko toh nahi keh rahe na hum Jodha Begum? Jodha says- Jalal hume chodiye na. Jalal is surprised he had never expected that Jodha would call him by his name. He felt like his name is the most sweetest name he has ever heard. He felt like he is on the seventh sky, his happiness knew no bounds. Jodha had to agree how cute he looked; she just wanted to capture his expression. His grip loosened on Jodha's waist and Jodha takes advantage of this situation and runs of, but Jalal is so lost that he does not notice that Jodha is gone from his grip. Jodha is bit away from Jalal and she says- Kahan kho gaye ho Jalal? Pakd sakte ho toh pakdo Jalal. Hearing his name again from Jodha's mouth made him come out of dreamland. He runs behind her.

Promo- abhi romance baki hai mere yar

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Oh.. nice chappy.. romantic jajo... kash jo serial mein bi jalal ko naam se pukare..
I always wished that u done it dear in ur ss thnx.. more romance in nxt chappy too.. pm yaar kya hua?

last part is lovey... super-duper u[update dear..continue soon & do pm

Originally posted by: renuganesh

Oh.. nice chappy.. romantic jajo... kash jo serial mein bi jalal ko naam se pukare..
I always wished that u done it dear in ur ss thnx.. more romance in nxt chappy too.. pm yaar kya hua?

thanks 4 d cmnt 😊

Originally posted by: cuty1997

Awesome update Ana 👏

i also blushing when reading story.☺️

finally jodha speck jalal name how cute😳

thanks to pm me.😊

waiting to next update 😉

update soon😛

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