16~NOT just a passionate affair~ 57 (2 parts) 18 oct-To new beginnings - Page 116

Originally posted by: suguJA

I just wanted to convey that NJAPA is VOLCANO OF EMOTIONS !!!

In which I m able to SENSE lot of emotions that has been bottled up with everyone, not only with NJAPA CHARACTERS BUT TO ALL THE ONES WHO READ THIS STORY !!!

🤗 Thanks so so so much dear and sorry for the late reply... I was really busy these last few days... and have been unable to do anything much around the forum... I'll be back from Tuesday...

JUST LIKE VOLCANO ERUPTS with sudden change in the land region , like wise JO's COMA has evoked VOLCANO OF EMOTIONS BOTH IN JALAL'S N SINGHS FAMILY , ALONG WITH US !!!

Thanks da 😳
THANKS FOR PENNING DOWN THIS EMOTIONS SO BEAUTIFULLY DI !!!
I WOULD like to list some of it in ma POV ...
1) GLOOM SURROUNDED : I could SENSE how SINGHS would have felt seeing their favourite LIFELESS , in that stage Vishal was the one who was first to greet jalal as he could relate HOW MUCH THIS BOYFRIEND'S STATE is in parallel to their state ... Then followed Mr.Singh who was gratified enough to jalal as he has saved his daughter's dignity n LIFE !!!

Exactly... I think they all could somewhere see and understand Jalal's haal - and how it was parallel to theirs - only, Vishal was the first to take the step!
2) DESPERATION OF TWOSOME : THIS STUBBORN BOYFRIEND who was so desperate to see his jo atleast for minutes , didn't lose his wisdom in that desperate state too ... He wished for a chance that he can speak to her and retrieve her from this long sleep !!!
Now its the desperate MOTHER who knows really well of her ZIDDHI DAUGHTER shows her agony , wat if HER BOYFRIEND'S VOICE can bring some life into her , so that her LAADLI ll call her MAMMA AGAIN 👏 , this shows how the Singhs were in the last levels of desperation to see some life back into their laadli ...
Yes they were.. 😭

3) A STARKING CONTRAST BETWEEN REALITY N PAST : UNLIKE JALAL , who clearly knows his Jo fully couldn't cope with the fact that his once vibrant GF would reduce to this level of pawn under the CONFINES OF DESTINY ... A parallel btw past n present CLEARLY INDICATES HIM that THIS WAS HIS FINAL STEP TO CROSS / FINAL SPELL OF PATIENCE TO MASTER ...
But poor one couldn't SENSE that this wasn't a final step but It's FIRST STEP TO THEIR NEW BEGINNINGS !!!

Exactly,... or that even this final step was one that'd take so long to conquer!

4) A SEED OF HOPE BEING SOWN : YET and a BIG YET , JALAL BEING JALAL , started his journey to master this virtue with doing wise research n preparing himself to run this RACE ... Initially with prayers of all he started running his RACE with intense research n patience , then by cheering himself even though she showed no signs of life , accepting that ATLEAST GOD HAS GIVEN ME STHG TO WORK ON ... he could again SENSE he had to be strong n reinstated with faith tht they have HAPPY MOMENTS YET TO LIVE in their LIFE !!!
JALAL starts with reading her favorite novels that she could see images of them n return to normal state ... But this confidence in him is peeled with days passing !!!!
Yes.. you're right dear.. first with research, then with grit, then with hope and cheer.. he goes on and on👏
5) WITH DAYS PASSING , REALISATION OCCURS : Though his hope was peeled layer by layer with passing days , this STUBBORN BOYFRIEND doesn't leave his effort 👏 , at a moment he realizes the truth that THIS IS HEALING PROCESS AND NOT A MAGIC !!!! He again tries reminding her their memories with SMSes ... Trying his luck with another step of revival of his Jo , but it doesn't work again so WONDERS how its meant to proceed further !!!
I like how you made that statement 'hope was peeled layer by layer' Awww... it must have been so discouraging for him na.. this 'not knowing'

6) TEN DAYS POST , A GLIMPSE OF HAPPINESS : WHEN this adamant Boyfriend gets to know that his girl showed some sign of life , he rushed to celebrate Alas ! His hope was again crushed but still stood STRONG FOR HIS GIRL to get her out of this state !!! 👏 " STHG IS BETTER THAN NOTHING " , Again he tried becoming STRONGER as he remembered both his research and short of time to make his GIRL FINE ... SO ULTIMATELY REMEMBERED HER FAVOURITE-EST VIDEO N PLAYED IT , NOT ONCE BUT INNUMEROUS TIMES !!!
Actually 17 days post operation... (10 days of trying) first week they couldn't even meet na...

And yes, he played the video clip over and over.. 😭

7) FINALLY HIS BARRIER BROKE DOWN : Seeing his GIRL's no state of improvement , this BOYFRIEND finally brokedown with tears which he was holding for a long time ... With this tears wen he has lost all his hope on everything even HIMSELF, HE FELT HIS LIFE DARK AND EMPTY ... 😭

8) LAST STRAY OF HOPE : then came a light in name of bade bhaiya , who ensured his spirits differentiating A RACE N A MARATHON which obviously brought a brighter image of life in jalal , as to how STRONG MEN as to be for their BELOVED and lead their life too along with taking care of their BELOVED !!! OFCOURSE HE WAS A TORCHBEARER IN JALAL'S LIFE when it was in the time of blurring ...
Beautifully said Sugu... and what Bade bhaiyya said was the most important statement.. we have to take care of ourselves if we have to be able to take care of our beloved... you are right - sometimes even the 'torch bearers' need someone to pour the fuel in their torch and keep them going.. this is what bade bhaiyya did! 😊

9) A VIVID APPROACH TO HIS MARATHON : Now after 30 days post the op , he has collectively managed his life with its appointments , physio's , ammi n his OWN along with HIS GIRL , PROVING HIM A PERFECT STRONG MEN 👏 👏
HIS SPEECH with physio itself proved that he VALUES BOTH AS LUCKY watever downs they face in life no matter wat it is !!!
EXACTLY!😳

10) ECSTASY IN COMPLETING THE MARATHON : NOW HAPPENED THE EXPECTED IN MOST UNEXPECTED WAY !!! YES , JO HIS JO gained her consciousness , telling him the most beautiful n heartfelt words that he died to hear from her for past one month ... THAT SHE WANTED TO CELEBRATE HER 63RD BIRTHDAY TOO WITH HIM !!! Wat a POIGNANT N MEMORABLE RESTART FOR THEIR EPIC LOVE STORY/ JOURNEY AHEAD !!!. 👏 👏
yayyy.. *dancing* I hope you felt very happy when you read this bit..😳
Phew !!! I hope I have written atleast half of wat I had in mind ... I know di I am not the one to write something long and that too serious one , but ever since I read this chap NJAPA I was on rollercoaster ride of emotions combined with my real life incidents n I felt dumb on Sunday ... So couldn't unres on Sun and doing it now !!!
I would love to hear ur views lashy di ... And Wishing u a happy diwali week too 😊 😊
I loved reading it.. already read it twice and now reading again was refreshing!🤗

P.S I loved divi's wonderful take 10 , which I know is always rare 😆 , but lashy di my heartfelt thanks for giving this wonderful ff n I love u loads DI 😳 😳

P.P.S I myself didn't think that I too would be able to give take ten 😆 😆 , but divi I know couldn't match u in giving takes 👏

Awww loved it... it was so beautiful sweetheart 🤗