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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sw123

awesome ff

continue soon

thanks😳😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: abhi786

First chapter is interesting.. So Jalaal didn't saw Jodha till now ? Just got married to her only to get property share ? Poor Jo waiting for him in the house while Jalaal is buzy in the work... Did Jalaal loves Ruku ? Waiting to the see first encounter between JJ

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Mrs.Tokas--

dosti nahi sis ka love we are sisters😳😳

oye onaisa she is my sis😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter-2
JALAL got out of the car and headed to his room but before entering inside he remove the phone card of cell on whose Ruks called him and throw it away after trashing it. He throws it very harshly on air and gave a sexy smile. This is it habit, he have thousand phone and numbers for every girlfriends and trash it after he get bored of them. Well Ruks was no different for him.

He opened the door with extra keys he have and entered the house. All lights were off indicating all servants went to their room which was build outside just opposite his house to sleep. Only an image of Dai Maa came to him.
The darkness makes him sexier than ever. He looked very teasingly, childishly and smiling all at same time to Dai Maa.
He removes his hat, coat and went through stairs after giving handing it to Dai Maa.
He was going upstairs where Dai Maa stopped him saying - "She was waiting for you."
JALAL gave a realising looks about someone must have waited to meet him tonight and knowing he is late he gave a winning and sexy smile to make someone wait.
JALAL gave a long breathe and went up without saying anything. Dai Maa looked at his sight until he was vanished unable to understand what this young guy wants.
JALAL went to his room and before opening it he gave some mischievous smile. The thought of someone in his room only for him gave him giggles to his spine. More than his wife he was carried away that his childhood friend waiting for him inside.
Very softly and harshly both at same time he opens a door to see his wife.
He checks out the room first which was as same as he left and said - "Perfect."
He looked at the bed to found leaning half the body on 2-3 pillows placed on corner of bed and sleeping on her hand. Her hairs and dupatta on face was covering a face. She was sleeping on her hand. Her sleeping position is enough to give pain to her muscles in morning. Her sleeping position was enough to say the wait she had gone through and a sudden sleep after that. He looked at her curved figure which cannot even judge because she was sleeping bended in some weird position. She was so much tangled in her heavy dress. Her lehenga almost tangled badly around her even exposing her legs.
JALAL looked at her position to sleep. He don't know what to think all his smile vanished in second thinking someone had waited very badly for him. He was thinking he lost or gains something. He went ahead near to bed and sat beside the little place left all thanks to sleeping beauty. He placed his hand on her hair and tried to remove it from her face which was tangled and pressed inside her face. After all attempt too he failed to straighten her hairs.
JALAL left with no choice but carried her in his arms and he went ahead to place it in nearby sofa.
After placing her there first he went to have shower and change his clothes. He did this process a bit hurry and after coming back he cleaned and tightened the bed sheet which was ruined because of sleeping beauty. He placed pillow properly to sleep. After this he went back to sofa and brought her in his arms and put her carefully on pillow. He did all this very carefully without disturbing her sleep. Also Jodha was too much tired to even come out of sleep after this all. All this JALAL even least bother to look at Jodha all he was concerned that he was not perfectly sleeping.
Now he took satisfactory breathe and turned back to move from room but just then he heard a noice of bangles. He turned around to see her moving body giving sound. He saw now her legs which was burden with heavy payal and lehenga moving up her waist which was little open as kurta was short. Her white lusty waist was perfect to be hold but poor it was burden with heavy jewels. He moved up and settled on her curved perfectly toned br**st. He took long breathe and sat down on bed looking and admiring her figure which is burdened with heavy thing. He moved up to see her face and his lusty desire shows to peek. It is not like he never saw a beautiful girl before but the fact she was different but again it was covered with heavy jewels and make up. He thought to himself as to how this girl must be sleeping this way.
He admired her perfectly and properly from top to bottom and mostly at end he leaned down on her and took his lips near to her lips with inches of space between them and started giving right or wrong but warm vibes. He blows air on her lips. Jodha's eyes blinks while sleeping only showing her reaction to his act in sleeping only. Very carefully JALAL got up and went out of room.
He searched for Dai Maa and found her sitting in hall. He comes downstairs in anger.
He stood next to her and said - "How could you Dai Maa? Is this a way a girl should be taken care of."
Dai Maa stood up in shock looking at JALAL.
JALAL continued - "Did you ever went inside to see how she was sleeping. What is all that? Is this a dress one wear for sleep and that heavy jewels and makeup? It is so much of burden for one to sleep for. No perfect at all."
Dai Maa said nothing and faced her head down.
JALAL asked - "Did she ate something."
Dai Maa remained silent.
JALAL continued in much anger - "Wow now don't say me she ate nothing."
Dai Maa answered looking at him- "We asked her but she denied."
JALAL said very angrily- "Atleast you should have gave a milk to her. How can she sleep in hunger? You not took good care of her in my absence."
Dai Maa said in little raising tone- "It should be you Jalal who needs to take care of her and not me."
JALAL looked here and there in embarrassment and turned around ordering her to leave him alone.
Dai Maa asked - "Jalal would you like to have something."
JALAL said rising his voice little more - "Leave."
Dai Maa went on her cottage which was build opposite to this mansion.
Now Jalal went up stairs to his room checking his wife.
He went near her and sat on emptied side of bed. He picked her and lifts her wife body sticking it to his body and leaning her face on his shoulder. Her wife was now getting disturbed by his continuous approach. Seeing her moving JALAL pampered her back and make her sleep again by giving him warm vibes.
She was feeling awesome restful by his warm, she unknowingly placed her arms around him. She knew somewhere something going on around her but she was too sleepy and too peaceful in his arms to even try to open her eyes and find out what carrying on. JALAL removed all heavy jewels from Jodha somehow very softly and pampering her in middles to not make her wake. He pampered her back from top to bottom passing it like a scrolling, touching her back. His touch was giving her positive vibes making her sink more in his arms. He holds her tightly and looked at side where her face was leaning on her face. He sees her bare neck. Now he blows her hair giving her warm. He gave smile seeing Jodha move. He now takes her hand to remove her necklace. After that he loosened her hair removing all clips from it. Then gave some distance between their bodies and removed her dupatta throwing it on one corner. He again tightened and decreased each distance between their bodies. He took his hand inside her hair and travelled to dori and loosened the dori of her kurta to make kurti loosen up bit. He removed her earning and all jewels placed on her head. She moved with continuous touch. JALAL pampered her like he is scrolling her back and pampered her like a mothers pampers a child. He loved her back and pampered to make sure she went to deep sleep again. Then he travels his hand on her waist and removed jewels that were around her waist. His finger was travelling her waist like a magic to remove the jewel. He pampered and tightly hugged her for last time before detaching her from him. He looks her lusty and his breathe was coming and going fastly. He tangled her perfectly around his body and placed her softly down.
He admired her to move and not to make her wake he pampered her cheeks and gives her warmness. He was all above her where she was dependent totally on her. He knows all perfectly how to handle girls but handling her today was bit difficult but not impossible. He even can move out sleeping himself but all this burden of Jodha to not let her sleep properly was torturing him. So he wants to make sure everything comfortable and perfect for her. He holds her hand and removed her bangles from hand without making any noise then went down to her legs and remove payal softly without making noise. She was free from jewellery and now his hand travelled around her waist moves to side button of lehenga. His touch on her bare waist makes her move and get disturbed. JALAL removed his hand in scare but soon she stopped moving. Now without touching her bare waist he removed her button and unzipped her lehenga. This makes her comfortable but her eyes were moving to open now. JALAL now bend down as he knows how to make girls move to his fingers. He covered her eyes with his hand and gave her his body warm to sleep comfortably once again. She knew somewhere some course happening but too much tired to find out. She was still feeling comfortable and curled her in his arms. He bends down more to her body. He placed her one hand to her waist and other was kept free to move around as per his convenience. He took his face near to her face and admired her. Her beauty was lusty but still not affecting him much to cross a limit. He softly pampered handkerchief around her face to lighten heavy makeup. She was getting very disturbed but still his warm vibes makes her go deep again in sleep. With each lightening makeup he admired her beauty. Now it was her lips which were heavily covered with lipstick. He was very close to her and their lips were almost touching same passing air. He started approaching lips from his handkerchief to free them from lipstick but he stopped himself thinking it may disturb her very badly.


(Note: Part Written in Red can be bit hot.)


But somewhat it is too heavy so he went close where their lips were almost touching each other. He removed his tongues and started tasting her lipstick to remove it. He was doing it very softly which will not disturb her and also gives her warmness to sleep. He dried her upper lips with his wet touches of lips. He was licking her lips gently. After he finished with her upper lips he preceded same with her lower lips. With each course of contact he was pampering her hair by his fingers which were totally tangled inside her. She was getting disturbed but also spelled by his vibes. He licked his lips gently and lustily.

He finished tasting her lipstick softly and controlled to breathe heavy but still the air that was coming out from his lungs was touching her bare skin. He was very close to her and now seeing her white beauty admiring it giving lusty looks. His body warm was passing each lusty and soothing vibes to Jodha to make her sleep more comfortably. She was tangled totally on him. Very softly and gently he comes out of her and detached slowly from her without making her wake. She moved a lot not feeling someone around her. Seeing her move he slept besides her making her feel I am there. Then after making sure she went deep in sleep he straighten up seeing her little comfortable and free to sleep. He puts blanket on her and saw her from top to bottom. He saw how softly she wrapped herself in blanket. She placed her jewels and dupatta on one sofa and closed the window stopping the rain drops to come inside.
He turned around and gave a sexy smile to throws his effect on her body. He now knows he not lost but won the game he silently playing inside. That girl was become his lust but not that lust effect to make him cross his barrier. He looked at her obsessed while she was sleeping peacefully. He was seeing she had proved to be his winning lottery for will. He looked at her like she is a baby sheep he likes to play with and pampers her.
He looked her one last time before leaving and said - "Perfect."
Saying this he went away in other room to sleep.


Precap : Jodha's increasing love for jalal😳😳


So tell me howz it.. it was small but so sensual na ☺️

Edited by Mallika-E-Tokas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
hope you like this one chappy waiting for your comments😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
hyeeeiooo
awesome blossom chapter👍🏼 but less hot SR🤣
plz remove that warning note 🤣
but u wrote tooo good
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
very nice FF ... but jalal's behavior is very annoying ... continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Nice.. I thought jalal will ignore her... But he didn't. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-

hyeeeiooo

awesome blossom chapter👍🏼 but less hot SR🤣
plz remove that warning note 🤣
but u wrote tooo good
update soon

less hot sr shalu kuch to sharam kar 😆😆😆
and note i 'll not remove it 😆😆
this part is not for kids like us😉😉
thank you😳
ok😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-

hyeeeiooo

awesome blossom chapter👍🏼 but less hot SR🤣
plz remove that warning note 🤣
but u wrote tooo good
update soon

less hot SR shalu kuch to sharam kar😆😆
note i'll not remove that this part is not for kids like us😆😆
thanks😳
ok😃

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