11~NOT just a passionate affair~ 52 (2 PT) 8 SEP-2nd quarter - Page 110

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

party is too big a word for the dinner outing we went..😆 but yeah.. it was definitely enjoyable..😉
Update is ready.. will post in the morning.. 😉

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Morning? In which time zone?😆

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

US Central 😆

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Hello sweetheart... how are you? Are things at home still busy as ever? 🤗
Sorry for the very late comment🥱...Hope it is not unneeded now🥱...
How can you say that dear.. 🤗
My last comment was I think in page 20s and now it is 125+😲...What have you all discussed so much😲...Is it only guru, chelas, banjaras creating ruckus with some genuine comments or something more too that I missed😲...I am not going to read so many pages😡...Short cut mein bolo if there was something important that I missed😭

I think it was all about the stalker but it's been deciphered now.. 😆

Coming to the chapter...I am dedicating this chapter to the FLUSH😳

The FLUSH! 😆

When I started reading I was a bit confused...Kya chal raha hai kind...But then as the story progressed I understood kuch bada kaand hua hai ...then Vishal bhaiyya's name came up and I was like what has he done now😕...
Notty ladka 😈
Phir Mummy ka melodrama of gold bangles and Bhagwant over-reaction se bahar nikalne ka baad pata chala what happened😡 ...
😆 Jalal must be thinking what a nautanki family... but, I can imagine that half the families in India must react like this only
even in between all this big drama, Bhagwant was taunting my Jo😡...Uff yeh mummy and bade bhaiyya se mein pareshaan ho gayi hu😭😡...
While I am totally on Jo's and Ja's side.. what Bade bhaiyya said also makes sense... (till he didn't acknowledge Jalal's help) if Jodha had been caught, it would have been so embarassing na...
But then when I read and got to know that Vishal was also in the same hotel, it struck me there and then that Jalal will turn out to be the hero😉😳...After all, he has to create an impression on Singh household na Lashy (this is to the CV I am saying and not Jalal)😆...This was the perfect time for that chauka from Jalal's side😳
Yes... it was an unexpected mauka.. par usme chauka tho definitely maaraa Jalal ne...

Moving further, good to know that Renu helped...After all Jalal ne bheja tha usse...She had to go and help😳...
Yes.. 😊 actually, jab mushkil ki waqt aayega tho practical people like Renu are really helpful..
It was good to read Jodha's haalat ...trying to think about Vishal and Jalal, who was also stuck there and about whom she had no info about...till Vishal made it to the door...the semi-muted talks between brother and sister was delightful ...Jodha would not only have been a proud girl but would also have heaved a sigh of relief to know that HER MAN is safe😳...and then when Vishal made the khulasa with a hint of sarcasm I was smiling there😉...I could visualize Mummy and bade bhaiyya's face😆...Woh ladka played a sixer off the boundary my dearies...you better acknowledge😡...
yahaan tumhaari review mein commentary dikh rahaa hai mujhe 😆
I loved when Jodha intervened by supporting Jalal😉 and thankfully papa acknowledged and told Bhagwant to return the money😛...
Nahi re.. she didn't intervene.. she didn't say anything. she was 'hoping' he would say it.. but papa intervened😳
By the way Vishal wants a reward😆...I want to know what😉...
😆 treat

I want to give one hug to bhabhi for giving Jodha her mobile and with a warning to recharge it😆...a good scene created Lashy👏 (bhabhi is one character who was not vocally supporting Jodha but was also not against her like the rest)...after Vishal, she is another character in Jodha's house that you can count on😛
Yup... it's better that she stayed quiet cos bade bhaiyya is so strong in his views na... now that things are calming down.. hopefully, she'll now be totall on ja-jo's side

Second part --- Started with Jalal trying to deduce about stalker by thinking about Jodha's reaction in the corridor scene and the way she ran during the blackforest cake scene...Teda Jalal was right on spot with Maan as the could-be stalker...Jalal take this 👏
Awww 😳

Very important scenes then enfold...Finally Jodha smsed😳...Something I was waiting for😳😳...His direct, to the point question of whether he is speaking to his Jo or Jodha resulted in a wide smile on my face😃...Bechara wanted to know this so badly and he is not able to carry his convo properly...This time he took no chance and jumped at the most relevant question, though he knew the answer😳...
YES... bas bahut lukka chuppi ho gayaa... no risk now.. 😆
And Jo's reply was mashallah😳...
She's also become tedhi ye sab maamle mein... 😆
His Jo is / was / will always be waving there my Jalal😳...Their flirty talk was so beautifully written Lashy😳...Boyfriend, fake anger, his admission of his guesswork about stalker, Jo appreciating Jallu's guesswork, her telling him about Maan and Payal was concise, interesting and loveable...
Yes... it had that urgency in it (cos Jalal is worried kabhi bhi koi kebab mein haddi aa jaayegaa) at the same time, he couldn't stop getting drawn to woh 'pehla pehla pyaar' feelings... for Jo it was just love love love all the way since she tho knows everything na... 😆
I loved Jalal's urgency to speak😆...I was so happy to read that😆...bechara, tadap raha tha😆...I would next love his excitement to meet...Lashy you better make that meeting in the next chappie...I cant wait any longer now😳😡

😆 chalo ab tho next chapter pad bhi liya...

Again mummy is a light sleeper😡...Please give her sleeping pills whenever you want to talk Jodha😡😡😡 ...
Tum tho apni plans mein mummy ko shaayaad oopar hi bhej dogi ek din😆
bechari had to go to the toilet to speak😆...And Jalal started with Jo...I love you so much...you know😳...What more is needed after that for Jo...her reactions were so realistic...After all the things she did alone for Jalal's safety & for their future in the last 2/3 months...These words were as sweet as honey to her ears and her heart😳😳...His appreciation for her love was simple, sweet and that directly felt her heart😳...
And you saw how she said 'I'll do it all over again if I had to'😳
But then mummy😡😡...She is such a big kabab mein haddi😡...Please Lashy I am telling you this for the 4th time I think...Send her to tirth yatra with bade bhaiyya...I am ready to book her tickets😡😡😡...
🤣
Wow what an embarrassment for Jo to flush the toilet and Jalal hearing that😆...What all she does and what all he does for ---- each other ONLY😳😆...Last chapter it was Jalal getting embarrassed in that blackforest cake matter and today she in tollet at 2 am flushing😆...I can visualize Jalal being totally relieved, sleeping peacefully with a broad smile and after a laugh over that toilet flush...I want Jalal to remind Jodha about flush when they meet😉

Awww chooo cute na these two... 😳

STALKER: Jalal seems a bit unconvinced regarding Maan and Payal as stalkers😕...After having read so many chapters I feel this stalker knows Jodha before her entry in college...That means either Maan or professor...This stalker also hates Jalal😕...Why so much??? Is there some personal issue there besides Jodha???...Is this stalker insecure of Jalal's popularity among girls, because he often says that Jalal is a womanizer???...Payal I think is unknowingly helping stalker and she is actually clueless...Don't know why but I feel it is Maan and you are deliberately trying to confuse us by showing Jalal in a confused state...Though I am again not sure...Will wait and see...
Hope you got your answers now dear...😉

Look at the length of this comment...Wrote so much, but as I felt and it is totally unstructured...

NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON 😳...NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON 😳...NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON 😳...
LOVED IT.. and miss you so much!

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thanks Lash.. but it was on 12th of September 😆
Are you updating chap 53 now?

Originally posted by: sana1996

but it is difficult when comes 1+4889+454566547788=??? HAHAHA 😆 🤣

Originally posted by: al_pal

lashy hum se kya kya karva rahi hai -detective work and now u girls are doing math ,Sara doing PhDs on population 😆

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Lashy 🤗 ... left you a message with a pic on WA ... check it .. n tell me how is it ... waiting for ur say on that pic 🤗 ... btw missed u & my students & my banjaras ... so much ... btw yeaahhh ... waiting for the update ...

Originally posted by: al_pal

and we don't make it easy for u

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

same here lashy 😭 ...no value for second hand furnitures ... had to literally run every where to find somebody ... couldnt find anybody & finally had to move the sofa to my friends place as she owns a 3 BHK flat ...

free mein bhi dete hai toh koi leta nahi hai 😆