UNPREDICTABLE LUV #4 {closed} new link added - Page 90

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

hmmm...😆

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

prithibi🤗

Originally posted by: dharshu

Aisha!!! 🤗 what magic did u do on me!! maine toh kuch nhi kiya😆 I came here to comment!! But.. Started reading the story again n was smiling n laughing at their antics!! haaww...itz cheating, you delayed the comment😆 Super cute update!!! 🥳 jo's tantrums on dat wedding attire was cute!! 😆 and 3 kilos of make up!!! 🤣 uff.. This veer n his antics!! 😆 baby veer aka puppy veer is better than him!!! I loved jo-santram scene!! Aww.. Such a possessive n protective brother!! Cho chweet!! And how they stole jalal's shoe was 🤣 jalal khan is bargaining!! 🤣 and veer askin his car!! 🤣

hey but these things were cute naa??? i mean demanding a car, mai bhi aisa he kerti😆and here comes "The comedy of this update".. Maan.. Hands tied up.. N sitting inside d veil!! Hayo!!! 🤣 "you are entertaining everyone on our wedding night?" 🤣 and rishika's "she is so cute" was 😆 lolz!! thnk god you noticed that part😆again jo's tantrums.. Whre is my gift.. Find ur name in mehandi.. Etc., were too sweet!! Ofcoure this jo is damn cute!! And for this 'cuteness'.. She got her dose from jalal.. "celebrate your wedding night all by yourself"!! 🤣 lolz!! yaar sab iss scene ke piche he pad gye😆
And my favourite part was.. Jo's explanation of rishika's ques 'why u love jalal'.. It was amazing.. Emotional!! I loved each n every word of dat part!! And the sentence.. "Never ask this question again because then i hav to explqin to u why i live" was out of the world!! ❤️ you know!! it was the toughest part😆
Continue soon aisha!! And.. So sorry for late comment!! Do forgive me haan!! 🤗 again sry>????😡

Originally posted by: swetiii

plz pm me...wating 4 update

chapter 22 - Teaser

#1

No matter if we get caught in the rain
I know our love won't wash away
Storm or hurricane*
our love will find a way
I wanna see the sunset in your eyes
Lying next to you every single night
Wanna be the reason that you smile
Baby go with me, it's ride on tide

"you sure?" asked jalal, while she further reached down , pressing her lips to his, taking his face in her hands. "shut up and let me seduce you" said jodha, holding him tight while jalal just smiled at her, his head descended towards her and she leaned upwards to meet his kiss, more passionate, her brain went into overdrive and short circuited, putting her hand to the back of his head, feeling his soft blond locks on the backs of her fingers.

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

It was raining outside, they looked at the window, watching the rain cascade down the glass ceiling ...that dark, beautifully mystical grey sky, the perfect accompaniment to the slow burn and glow of the fire in their bedroom, laying there beneath the covers of the sunken bed, a love pit, of blankets and furs...nothing can equal the simple, quite bliss of being together...moment by moment...in his arms, nothing else, nothing pulled her mind...nothing swaying her from being present in every moment...alive with him in his arms...completion.

#2

"heyaa!!! is that true??" a girl came screaming in khan mansion, forcing everyone to look at her.

"Natasha" said jalal as he hugged her up, all the members stood up and walked towards them.

"you bloody nonsense, you joined business, and haven't told me, you know when i got to know this i just came here from London and went to your apartment but... my bad luck you were not there, so i came here." said Natasha, again hugging him up and that was the time when jodha entered the dining room, watching her husband hugging someone, unknown to her.

"jalal..!!" called jodha from behind.

"jodha! come, she is natasha" said jalal holding her hand, while jodha was literally confused looking everyone so familiar with this girl.

"oh!! nutz she is jalal's begum and begum sahiba this is your husband's college friend and the girl whom jalal had the longest relation of 4 months" laughed veer to which jodha looked at jalal and then at others, all were really delighted to have her in mansion.

"oh my god!! you married, i mean!! really!! tum ne bataya bhi nhi" natasha whacked jalal's arm, while jodha was just feeling left out in this group.

#3

"i wanted to complete my internship" she said while walking towards him.

"but you said you don't wanna complete it" he said, resting his hands around her waist.

"i want to join your company"

"but i want you to join some other company, i don't want to mix my professional and personal matters." said jalal

"but..."

"try to understand it" he kissed her forehead and went outside.

"huh! i will join it...dirty dog!" muttered jodha in irritation.

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i hope you liked it.