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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smile.sara

ch 4: Amber Royal Palace


In amber palace all royal family were resting in their quarters... Women still

wondering for evening visit of shaguni bai... No body is daring to say any

thing openly but every woman is updating her husband and near ones

about tht


raj mata purvaDevi, bharmal mother apoorva Devi, and bharmal first wife

padmavati were very worried ... Mainavati didn't know about this ... She

was resting in her room with her maids and midwife ... Now she has her full

term so these days a dai always remains with her to attend her immediately

in need


Rani apoorva Devi was praying to kanha...she was very pious lady, an

absolute believer of GOd ...


raj mata purva Devi was waiting for her son raja ratan Singh... He was still

sitting with his friends drinking and enjoying dance... He was raja of state

but no elder male wanted to be in his company nor he has idea of true

responsibilities of kingship... Karan Singh was step brother of ratan Singh

but her mother died in infantry... So purva Devi raised her ... he was not in

palace she didn't know where he was


Padmavati and bharmal were in their bedroom ..she was telling bharmal

about shaguni prophecy..


Bharmal didnt like ratan Singh at all...it is ratan Singh was not suitable for

throne... Other members of royal family also thought that suja mal is true

heir ...but bharmal believes in his heart that being third son of maharaj

prithvi raj in line it is his right after untimely death of his brothers he should

be king


Padmavati realized her husband was not listening her properly ... He was in

his own thoughts


"Aap mahri sun bhi rahwe ho kay nahi"


She asked little annoyingly


Bharmal came out from his thoughts.


"Hmm ...haan "


Then added crankily


" tha bhi kay shaguni bai ki baat le kar bhaith gae ho..."


"Phakandi kahi ki... "


He muttered..


"kOn PAKHANDI..."


Padmavati said loudly in disbelieve...


Bharmal looked at her on her raised voice


"Shaguni bai...aur kon..."


He replied surprisingly...


Padmavati sighed


"mae samjhi aap manne khewe ho pakhandi"



"Mainavati ka kia haal hae"


Bharmal asked after some whiles


Padmavati was disappointed bharmal was not interesting in shaguni

bahweshvani


" theek hae ... "


Then asked


"Aap nahi Gaye apni Lado Kay pass"


Bharmal was looking bored


" nahi gae ... Bohat ratri hogae thi... Ham us kay vishram Mae bhanda

nahi dalna chahte thae"


"Kal sawere ho aana... Ratri ko tau waise bhi is samay gharbvati istri

kay passs dai hi rehwe hae."


Bharmal didn't reply her ...he was about to sleep..


padmawati didn't care either... She was still thinking about shaguni bai

prophecy..."


At the moment maina Vati was only women pregnant in royal family...

And.!!!.and...!!! ..she doesn't want to think but ..!! if by any chance ... By

any chance bharmal will become king ...then she would be the pat rani ...


Mere thought of this making the feel of butterflies in her stomach

She was restless ... There is Another person who was also restless in

palace Raj mata purva Devi... She knew his son is young raja of amber...

He was healthy ...There is not any war right now...so ??...!!..!! She can't

say ... What happening to her...but some thing is really gonna happen ...

some thing is wrong for sure...


Both sisters in law... Dewrani jaithani... Padmavati and purva Devi was not

able to sleep... Both were tensed ... Both were Having cold sweat ...one

had in excitement and another had in fear... And their mother in

law...mother of their husbands were praying to kanha ... She lost husband

and a son in these past years ...now... It is turn of grandson may be...


nce one di!! nd this is y i hate politics!!
shaguni bai seriously rocks!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smile.sara

Ch 5


Blessings of Friendship




It was pre dawn ... Most of them were sleeping Men were in one tent...

And. Women were in another ... Two separate tents were for queens and

another were for roshan anga and amna bibi ...


Bega begum woke up. hamida was sleeping beside her ... Maham was

sleeping in corner of tent


She arose from bed ... Did tayammum

( wadu is necessary before offering prayer or reciting Quran ,,,, in which we wash face hands

and feets in particular order but If water is not not available can do tayammum ... In this we

Pat hands on near wall or clean thing and rub hand on face arms and recite dua for wuddu) ...


There was still some time in fajar .('morning prayers) So she start offering

tahajjud prayers...( this prayer not mandatory these are optional prayer ... Offers before

Fajar prayer ... )


In the mean time every one starting to wake up... They all offered prayers

...

Hamida was not feeling well ...maham brought a glass of water and asked

her to drink...


"Begum sahiba ...yah pani pee lai ... Kafilay Mae ab na kuch khana ko hae

na peen any ko dood..."


She told her sadly


Bega begum had dried dates and some dried figs with her ...


" hamida begum abhi aap yah lain ... Ham dekhte hae kuch aur ho

Sakai"


She asked hamida to eat

Hamida took these dried fruits from her hands ...


And start eating with water ... She was feeling dizziness ... Bega begum

came out from tent ..to know the situation ...


She went to her husband


Humayu was talking to jauhar ...


Jauhar greeted queen ... Men were looking so worried


She was about to ask is there no ration left even for hamida bano ??...


But stopped after seeing their worried faces ...


" kia hua!!??"


She asked worriedly


Humayu and jauher tried to compose them but it was late


" alia hazrat ham rasta bhatak chukey hain ... Raja maldev Kay rajayya

say rewa ka rukh kia tha ...magar ab khuda Janay kidhar Nikal aye hain"


Bega wAs also became so worried


"Ab is Registaan Mae ham Kaha jae ge HAZoor ... Yaha tau abaadi ka

door door tak nishan nahi"


Humayu didn't reply ... He didn't have any answer


"Tabhi ham kahae ration tau Bilkul khatam ho Gaya ... Raja maldev nae

Hamain Itna samaan tai dia tha kay rewa tak araam sae phauhanch jaye"


After hearing this humayu started


" Kai bano begum Kay lye bhi kuch nahi hae begum"


He asked worriedly Bega looked towards the place where maids should be

arranging some thing to eat


" maloom tau aisa hi hota hae ... abhi ham wohi pata krane jaa rahe thae"


" waise ham nae bano begum ko kuch chuaray (dry dates) aur sookhay

injeer (fig ) di hain ... Allah nae chaha tau kuch intezamm ho jae ga"


Humayu noded and smiled sadly to her ...bega turned and went to talk

maids and other people


" jauhar shamsu din wapas agaya?"


He asked to jauhar... Shamsu din went to look for some nearby

reservations ... Jahar was about to reply , when they heard of horse

hooves


Shamsu din came back ...disappointment was written all over his face ...


He greeted king ...


There was no use of to ask him any thing ...


Humayu looked up to sky ... His lips were chapped and throat was dry due

to thirst


He raised his hands for prayers ...his friends follow him



They all kept praying for some time


Caravan started their journey after having some sips of water and dried figs

and apricots..


Some on foots some on horses. queens, roshan anga , maham anga,

amna and kids were sharing three camels... , humayu and his friends were

on horses .. They were about 20 people but all were deadly quit... They

didn't know where they are going... They didn't know the direction, they

have no food no water


Na rastey ka pata tha na manzil ka... Jin Kay daster khuaan lazeez khano,

umda phaloan aur khushbu dar meethay thanday sharbaton sae Sajay

rehtay thae... Aaj UN ko 1 waqt ka khana aur dau ghoont pani bhi

mayasser nhi tha ...


The son of land ...the admired of world ... Was in his mother womb...

Hindustan was waiting for him for centuries ... ...


Jis wajood ka intezaar Hindustan ki zameen kayee zamano sae kar rhi thi ...

Woh dunya Mae aabhi paega Kay nahi ...kon janta tha saway us zaat e

bari taala kay


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The small group of soldiers was hiding behind a small hill... The tower

guard saw some people heading towards their land... There was always

fear of attack from neighboring kingdom on their small state so they remain

alert and prepare always for any sudden danger...now thay can see

some people from far distance. They can see horses and camels too.


" saniko saudhan ho jao ... "... " weh log nikat arahe hain"


Their sardar gave them instruction in low tone


" kia akarman karna hae sarkar?"


Asked one soldier while taking his position


" nahi phele ham jaa kar un say charcha karenge ... 2 sanik hamary

saath ayenge... yadhi way apne shastr nikalay tau akarmana karne

mae sankosh na karna "


...now he can see ... Three man on horses, some women and children on

3 camels and other were on foots...


Sardar hold his sword tightly, checked his dagger in his waist band and

jumped out from his hiding spot infront of them


"Ruk jao...!!!"


They all stopped at once


"kon ho tum log"


He asked loudly and fiercely... "


None of them answered him ...now he noticed they were in very bad

condition ... He became little bit relax and asked in normal tone while

looking a man whose horse was in front


" kon ho tum log??"


"Mustfir hain bhai ... Rasta bhatak gae hain ... "


The man replied tiredly... He was not looking afraid of him , rather they all

were looking relived . "


The Man in front had some thing different on his face ... His condition was

so bad ... But he was not looking poor man ...


" rasta bhool gae ho?."


He repeated while observing keenly all of them ...


He was confused ... All of them were in very bad condition, tired, hungry,

but they were not looking common people ... Specially this man ...he was

not a mere poor traveler"


"Parantu aap hae kon ... Aur Kaha jaa rahe thae"


Now he asked politely


"Ham ... !! kon hain..?? "


The man smirked sadly


"Ham woh hain Jinhe waqt ka Kafila pheeche chor kar Bohat Agay

nikla Gaya hae... "


Now he and and his friends came down from horses...


" dekho bhai agar tum ko maal o zar (wealth) chahiye tau hamaray

paas bhook pyaas Kay ilawa kuch nahi hae ..."


Now he was sure ... This man is not a common man ..


" ham daku nahi hain ..."


he said proudly


Ham sanik hain or manushe ka mukh dekha kar phechan lete hain"

...


" aap koi aam yatri nahi hain... Aap Kay mukh ka tej bata raha hae aap kisi raj pariwar sae hain"


He said surely..


After hearing this the man was avoiding his gaze ... Now he notice they

were not looking Hindu or Rajput ... ...


He started


oh god the women were wearing Mughal head gears on their heads ...


"Hey Bhagwan "


Now he realized


"Kahi aap ..."


He gulped


"Kahi aap Mughal samrat shahnsha humayu tau nahi ? "


He asked impatiently ...


Man smirked on himself


"Shahnsha kia aur samrat kia... 1 waqt tha jab zamana Hamain ...

Azeem u shan shahnsha babar e Azam ka khush naseeb beta ...

Mirza humayu kahti thi"


Now soldiers were joining their hands in sorry and respect


"Shama karain maha Bali ham nae aap ko phechana nahi samrat..."


Sardar was looking really very ashamed


Humayu put his hand on his shoulder


" nahi mere dost aisa na kaho ... Par yah tau Batao meherbaan tum

kon ho aur yah kon si riyasat hae"


Humayu asked hopefully


"Samrat yah umer kot hae ..."


After hearing this humayu didn't wait him to complete


"Umer kot... Hamare dost rana veel saal k riyasat umer kot...?? "


He asked with surety and excitement


" ji maha bali ... "


" rana ji aap Kay lye Bohat hi chintit hain ... Bhagwan nae UN ki sun li

..."


He told him happily


" samrat aap chaliye ham sanik bhej kar raj mehal suchna bhijwa dete

hain"


Then he ordered two of his soldiers to go fast and and inform rana

veer saal

the arrival of emperor and his family...

...

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Raja veer saal just can't believe Bhagwan listened his prayer... He was

really worried for his friend , mugal samrat shahansha humayu...


Whole umer kot raj mahal was in chaos ... King was him self going at

outskirts of city to receive his friend.. Maharani was preparing ladies sides

for Mughal queens .. In just couple of hours whole umer kot fort was ready

to receive royal guests ...


Finally mughal emperor humayu has reached umerkkot . Raja veel saal

was already there to receive his friend at the city gate...he has only his

brother , his army chief and his chief misiter with him with some royal

guards


... raja veer saal also brought palkis for mughal queens and other women...

...


Humayu and his family were all muddy, tired...unlike umer kot royals who

came to receive mughal monarchs... They were looking princes and nobels

from every inch...


But still raja veer saal, received humayu and his family with full respect of

emperor...


Humayu came down from horse... Camel drivers were making their

camels sit ... Humayu helped hamida bano to come down from camel

Then raja veer saal realized one of king wife is expecting


He instantly sent a rider back to palace to infom his rani to do special

arrangements for his fri3end new queen


Then head towards his friend with wide smile and joint hands humbly


His courtiers were following their king..


"tawa jo sawagat ahey samarat"


"yo asan je rajye jo bhagaya ahae aap eha padhray samrat !!... "



He said while slightly bowing his head ...


But humayu embrace his friend tightly


"Rana!!... hamaray aziz dost !!... ham khuda ka jinta bhi shukar karay

kam hae ... "


Humayu had tear in his eyes... He was thankful to his allah tht he send his

graciousness in this part of desert ...


"aisi mushkil ki ghadi mae khuda nae aisa farishta hamrai madar ko

bhaejha...jo ham mazhab bhi nahi ... Wallah hamary is alishan watan

hisdutan mae srf daryaon kay sangam hi nahi dilo kay sangam bhi

hua kartay hain rana..!!"


Humayu hugged again his friend... He was really very relieved especially

for hamida bano...


Raja veersaal courtiers also greeted mughal shahansha with due respect


Raja veer saal also greets the queens... bega begum already knew him...


She met many times umerkot royals in amer and in dehli..


"Samrat ... malika aliya or begmat jo wastay palki jo prabhand ahey"


Truly this was huge favor from rana ... he knew they had women with

them but he had no idea there are 3 expecting mothers are that poor

caravan ... more of this one of them carrying heir of mughal throne in her

womb


When they reached at raj mahal there were all music and shahnai but from

distance ...there was not a grand reception... strict orders by the

king tht no body should come near to emperor... ... emperor and his

queens were very tired and in worst possible condition after this horrible

journey... he knw the shaan honor of mughal monarchs ..he didn't want to

make them embraced..


Maharani of umerkot was ready to welcome mughal queens on the

entrance of royal house quarters...


WHEN QUEENS REACHED to royal quarters ...they exchange greetings

the maharani of umerkot did their arti and gave them water to drink...


They when hamida bano was drinking water ... she felt that she is drinking

some amrit... at the end she was feeling very fresh and sooth


She thought she will ask bega begum later about her feeling... At the

moment she just want to lay down ... her back was hearing and foots were

swelled... they cant decide what they want to do first, eat some thing, or

freshen up... But what so ever... Now they were in safe hands... btw

lovely people of umerkot..in the embrace of loyalty and friendship



ncely wriitten di!! now that m continuosly readinmg the chaptrs.. the scenes r flashing thru so clearly nd having scene that serial Akbar.. evrthng is so crystal clear😃

a great hlp frm the rana.. had the hlp not arrived,, i wondr wat wud hav happnd🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx. Nishu for liking ... Aka the great was documentary show on akbar ... Story of akbar is same but I m just elaborating the events with emotions and my own fictional touch ... Until now I already spent 400 $ on books on Akar, Mughal harem, mughal war fare , akbar and his mansabdar, Rajput cheiftains under under ... Zamindari system , argarian system, his conquest ... After some time my story will also follow our show tracks with akbar the great ... But for this long journey I want readers of course
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smile.sara

ch 6-- Amber politics

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Young army chief of Amer was resting in his room... he was very tired

...tomorrow raja ratan singh and his half brother kunwar karan singh were

going on hunt trip with their respective friends ...


Some months before all the friends of both brothers were friends of amber

princes...and now ratan singh friends were companions of the king, the

maharaj of amber. on the other hand karan singh friends were now only

friends of karan singh ..who was prince only by title ... he was not the son of

king any more


one of their mutal friend was an opportunist sumer singh ... his half younger

brother bhanu singh was childhood friend of Karan singh ... they were from

one of Nobel families of amber , and connected from amber court for

decades...


charul was sister of sumer singh and best childhood friend of ratan singh

sister rajkumari Rathna devi ...she was the most beautiful girl in amer atleast

in eyes of rathna's brothers ... yes u read right... Raja ratan singh and karan

singh both want to marry charul ... and sumer singh knew it very well ... he

was taking his each step very carefully ... making his ways very thoughtfully

now he was one of nearest companion of ratan singh...king made him his

sena pati with in a month of his coronation.


This was very convenient for sumer singh to marry his sister to king and

make his position in royal court strong for forever ... BUT ... that was not

enough for him ...he wants more ... But how ??


He was sitting in his room thinking same ...


When his wife nanda devi came in, but he didn't notice her... She asked him

but obviously he didn't have any thing to tell her so he brushed off her

concern lightly...but his wife had some thing to tell him... a gossip from raj

mehal...


nanda devi was telling him about shaguni bai bhawishyawani and raj mata

purva devi's bad mood ...sumer singh was not in mood of listening womanly

gossips but at the end of his wife story he was feeling so fresh and

charged ...



now he knew very well what he wants and how he will get it... he was very

excited for tomorrow hunt trip

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Early in the morning raja ratan Singh and kunwar Karan Singh departed from

amer to enjoy hunt in near by jungles... Sumer Singh was right beside king...

He was looking very worried and disturbed ... Ratan Singh was noticing his

friend mood since they met today ... ..


. Atlast ratan Singh asked Sumer Singh ...


"Sumer Singh Kay hua hae ... Aaj sawere se hi shant ho ... Swast tay

theek hae na thara..? "


Ratan Singh said mischievously

Sumer was already prepared

" Naahi maharaj ... Swast Tay bharriya hae ...PANN.."

". Pan kia..."

"Maharaj woh ... Thori chinta ka vishay hae ..."

"Hmm"

"Abhi bataoge yah baad Mae"

" Maharaj woh ekant ho tau acha hae,,, "

Ratan Singh didn't say any thing... Sumer Singh knew he played his card

well...

Ratan Singh will not wait too long ...

After reanching hunting site ... daas dasiyan made royal camps ... Atlast

ratan Singh dismissed his other friends ... Only Sumer Singh left...

"Haan ab bata... Kay baat hae"

Ratan Singh asked casually while drinking his wine... "

"maharaj aap kunwar Karan Singh ko apna utter adhikar I ghoshith

kar dain..."

Ratan Singh jumped up

"KAARAN???"

He was staring his friend dangerously

But Sumer Singh was all prepared...

" aap Kay kaka sa kunwar bharmal Singh"


"Kay bakwas karay hae bay"

Ratan Singh felt rug pulled under his feets..

" maharaj ..!! .. kunwar sa koi shdyant rach rahway hain... Isi Karan

manney lagae hai aap ...kunwar Karan Singh nay apna utter adhikari

gushat kar dain ..."

Sumer Singh told him about shaguni visit... He molded the situation that

bharmal staged that whole drama... Sent shaguni to raj mahal with

bhawashivani that raja of amber is becoming father soon ... Raja ratan Singh

mind was in chaos... He was very young didn't have courage to take any

bold step against his uncles ... But he doesn't trust on his half brother either

"PANN ..." ...

" PANN ... Manney Karan Singh par bhi vishvas nahi hae...?"

Ratan Singh looked at his friend inquiringly ... Sumer Singh heart was

dancing in his chest ... The conversation was heading according to his will

" nahi maharaj... Kunwar sa thara adhik sabmaan karat hain...

Aur choki baat tau aye hae maharaj ... Kunwar Karan Singh ko ham

sambhal sakay hae''

..."PANN...!!...

... kunwar bharmal sa sae saudhan rehna adhik atyavashyak (

important) hae..."

At the end of conversation... Sumer Singh , ratan Singh ko sheeshay Mae

utar chuka tha... He was succeeded to convince ratan Singh to declare

Karan Singh as his heir... Sumer Singh played his first card very smoothly

and successfully ... now its time of his next move but after ratan singh

move .. because now this is rattan Singh turn according to his game ...


nice one di👏

the rajputs lacked in unity n it shows.. they were so much into politics🥱

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nice one di👏

the rajputs lacked in unity n it shows.. they were so much into politics🥱


Thanx year Nishu... Agae Mughal will more after each other ... They are not only not united but also after their brother life ...
I just fictionalize the fact where before bharmal his young nephew ratan Singh was on Amber throne .. Main events are facts I m just fictionalizing the process ...

By the way why r u not replying me on FB ... I m waiting
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di i have deactivated my fb account.. told u thr.. chck ur inbox.. IF to chupte chupate..u know..😆
n thank u for keeping amber politics short.. it seems to b so dirty!!🤢 i hate politics..
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di i have deactivated my fb account.. told u thr.. chck ur inbox.. IF to chupte chupate..u know..😆

n thank u for keeping amber politics short.. it seems to b so dirty!!🤢 i hate politics..


Oh yah I forgot ... And I m keep sending jokes and hi hello with Chumbaks.😆
...
Amer politics are going to finish phir almost mughal chughall hi hae 😆

Amer Mae shanti Anya wali hae ... Yes Mahri jodha is one sweet soul in my story 😉
And mughlo Mae bhukam Is coming 😆
Edited by smile.sara - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smile.sara


Oh yah I forgot ... And I m keep sending jokes and hi hello with Chumbaks.😆
...
Amer politics are going to finish phir almost mughal chughall hi hae 😆

Amer Mae shanti Anya wali hae ... Yes Mahri jodha is one sweet soul in my story 😉
And mughlo Mae bhukam Is coming 😆



i am dying to see sweet jodha ye kraantkaari waali se jee bhar chuka hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mandyg



i am dying to see sweet jodha ye kraantkaari waali se jee bhar chuka hai😆


Sensor sir ji 😆... I want to say a lot but 🤬... Don't want infamous note here😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
SARA, finally u updated..😊..awesome..👏..waiting for JJ story..😊

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