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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: swatiluthra
Awesome ch dear. Par give long update yaar. 😆
If I m not wrong then that girl in veil is jodha 😉
Can't wait to c jalal reaction when he ll come to know that the girl was jodha

ok thanks very much😃😃

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

First of all Sorry for late update😳😳

please accept these roses ..😃

So here the Chapter - 3 😉😉

do post comments for aisha plz😳😳

CHAPTER 3

EVERYONE IS WAITING FOR THE LADY TO COME IN...
JALAL TAKES ANOTHER SIP OF HIS WINE...
JUST THEN A BEAUTIFUL SOUND IS HEARD...SOMEONE'S PAYAL...THE SOUND HAS ALREADY MESMERIZED EVERY1 IN THE COURT!
THE LADY WALKS IN EVERY1 IS STUNNED LOOKING AT HER...JALAL TOO IS GAPPING AT HER!
SHE WALKS IN NO NE CAN SEE HER FACE BUT EVERYONE KNOWS THAT SHE IS GORGEOUS...
SHE GIVES HER SALAAM TO THE SHEHENSHAH...AND EVERY1 ELSE PRESENT IN THE COURT...
SHE HAS HER FACE COVERED WITH GHUNGHAT... BUT HER BODY WAS JUST MELTING GOLD!!
HER CURVES HER BACK...HER LONG HAIR!!!

(SORRY GUYS COULDNT GET A GHUNGHAT!!)

But you can try this one

SHEHENSHAH ASKS HER: TOH AAP MANTI HAI KI AAP BENAZIR SE ZYADA ACCHA NACHTI HAI???
SHE NODS SAYING YES
JALAL: THEEK HAI...AAPKA NACH PESH KIYA JAYE!

SHE SITS DOWN!
SHE STARTS SINGING...
Laakh Is Dil Ko Humne Samjhaya
Dil Yahan Phir Bhi Humko Leaaya

Salaam,Salaam
EVERY1 IS JUST LOOKING AT HER...SHE STARTS

Tumhari Mehfil Mein Aa Gaye Hai 2
To Kyun Na Hum Yeh Bhi Kam Kar Le
Salam Karne Ki Arzoo Hai 2
Idhar Jo Dekho Salaam Karle

EVERY1 SAYS WAAH!!!!
SHE CONTINUES DANCING!!!
JALAL IS STUNNED LOOKING AT HER...HE GETS UP FROM HIS SEAT AND CLIBS DOWN THREE STAIRS...EVERY1 WONDERS WHAT JALAL IS DOING...MAHAM ANGA SAYS TO JALAL TO WAIT THE SHOW IS STILL ON,, BUT HE JUST WALKS AND THEN GOES DOWN TO THE STAGE WHERE SHE IS DANCING AND SITS ON THE FLOOR THERE...THE LADY IS FREAKED BUT SHE CONTINUES,

Yeh Dil Hai Jo Aagaya Hai Tumper
Woh Agar Na Sach Yeh Hai Bandapervar

Jise Bhi Hum Dekhle Palatkar 2
Usi Ko Appna Gulaam Kar Le
Salam Karne Ki Arzoo Hai 2
Idhar Jo Dekho Salaam Karle

EVERY1 IS JUST PRAISING HER...JUST THN JALAL SAYS STOP...EVERY1 IS QUIET...HE SAYS ENOUGH...RUKAIYYA .SALIMA .HAMIDA ARE WONDERING WHAT JALAL IS UPTO!!
HE SAYS TAKLIYA!!
EVERY1 LEAVES THE COURT...RUKAIYYA TRIES T TALK TO JALAL BUT REALIZES THAT HE IS LEAST BOTHERED WHO IS AROUND HE IS JUST STARING AT THE LADY...
THE LADY IS SCARED...SHE STANDS UP...AND WATCHES EVERY1 LEAVING THE COURT THROUGH HER GOLDEN GHUNGHAT...
AFTER EVERY1 LEAVES JALAL SAYS TO HER...NOW U WILL DANCE FOR ME...ONLY ME!
AND HE STARTS WALKING TOWARDS HER...SHE IS SCARED...SHE STARTS TAKING BACK STEPS... SHE FINALLY REACHES WALL..AND JALAL SAYS I WANT TO SEE YOUR FACE FIRST...
SHE WATCHES HIM THROUGH HER NET GOLDEN GHUNGHAT...SHE THINKS
AB HUM SHEHENSHAH SE KAISE BACHE!!!!! UNHE KAISA LAGEGA KI UNKI JODA BEGUM DIWAN-E-KHAAS MEIN NACH RAHI THI!!!
AND SHE WATCHES JALAL'S HAND REACHING HER FACE...

NEXT CHAPTER: JALAL HOLDS THE LADY'S HAND FROM THE BACK AND SAYS AAP KAHA JAA RAHI HAI

Mujhe 25 comments chaiye aur 10 likes nahi to no update jaldi😎 plz pm this ff to your buddies also😉😉😉

With Love ❤️

Mrs. Tokas

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 11 years ago

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

i've updated plz read and post your comments...😉😉😉

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: SARA4444
amazing update..👏

thank you so much 😳😳sara di plz pm this ff to your buddies also😳

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: PupCat
Awesome!!

thanks very much😳

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

interesting update but felt short dear...

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Ye toh bahaut hi chota chapter tha 😭 ... padhna shuru hi kiya tha ki khatam ho gaya ...😭 ... next wala thoda lamba dena plzzz ... btw i loved the update really nice ... so that lady is none other than our jodha ... woow ... jalal toh gaya ... 😆 ... i loved the update ... next update mein zyada time mat lagao plz 😳

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
interesting update but felt short dear...

i'll update 4 chapter soon😳

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Ye toh bahaut hi chota chapter tha 😭 ... padhna shuru hi kiya tha ki khatam ho gaya ...😭 ... next wala thoda lamba dena plzzz ... btw i loved the update really nice ... so that lady is none other than our jodha ... woow ... jalal toh gaya ... 😆 ... i loved the update ... next update mein zyada time mat lagao plz 😳

ok ok i'll update soon ...😉😉