AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1101

Originally posted by: hely
HATS OFF to your writing ⭐️ I liked the chap to bits!! Awesome Awesome Awesome! 😳😳 beautifully written😳
Your concept and writing are growing better n better everyday ! 👏👏 I so much love this story😳😳 the way u described jo's emotion was fab..jalal is devil...animal...very disgusting he hurted jodha badly😭 ...n now he expects he will fill her world with happiness...no never he dont desrves jo's hate...toh love to boht door h.. richo is safe..finally..plz update soon di🤗

thanks sweety for those beautiful words...

well...do gali jalal ko...aaj main jallu ke khilaf sunne ke mood me hoon

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1102

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91
Gosh pp.. am sorry for being so latye.. but am very busy these days.. never get time for replying.. but i make sure to read your work.. and you are amazing...
i am clueless.. should i hate him or should i pity😔
i know...mujhe pata hai padti hai...bas comment nehi karti hai😆

god you wrote it amazingly... all of their emotionas feelings everything were captured perfectly..
i know how difficult it would have been for you to pen it down.. such heartwrenching part..
yap...had a tough time writing it...

god i read the part 3 .. thrice.. felt like crying for jo...i pray no girl has to go through such thing..

you did a remarkable work by writing it so superbly..

i dont want jo to forgive him so easily... he should understand what he did was not at all unforgivable..itna desire.. itna stubborness😭
haan...jodha shlld teach this jalal a good lesson😡

am just waiting for the next updates...

all hail PP ..all hail PP👏
chup kar😆

i am so bad... am feeling like hitting Jallu but not able to hate him fully... its all because of the way you wrote... ..😳 mar\vellous

Our magic queen writer PP..lots of love..🤗
bas bhi kar yaar😆

Please update soon.. cant wait...

how will she try to run away from him now... ?
and how did she meet HB...? so many things.. gosh am curious

zara sabr to kar mere yaar...🤣

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1103

Originally posted by: SsnehHa
ohh once again u rockd ,superb.. I had goosebumps when I read your each and every sentences. (specially jalal ki love😉) again an awesome chapter from you..evn i got scared ki abb kya karega, abb kya hoga..
its really first tym i cant hate jallu,felt bad for him😭,, bt in odr hand feeling pity 4 condition f jo..its really pathetic😭

well i guessd d kidnapper guy must be sanjoy
jodha nahi mili na usse aisa badla lee raha hai
achhe tapakna usse di😡

itna achha laga chappy ke do bar comment kar dia😆

waise tere is pyaar pe PP ka dil kurban🤗

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1104

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1105

Originally posted by: aviaanya
Wow, I was apprehensive when I was first reading this story and realized how Jalal fell for Jodha. I was intrigued and Digusted at the same time but you are a talented story teller. What a wonderfully written chapter. The details and depth of Jalal's feelings. You are a wonderful writer. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 👏

hey...talking to you for first time...am glad you liked it so much...

hope I can keep entertaining you...

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1106

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1107

hey priyanka... I am speechless... U R wonderful writer... publish your book I will be the first one to buy... Seriously every time I read new chapter U surprise me with your easy expression of each emotions... I was really worried for this chapter... and also curious at the same time , I knew U will write it beautifully... U have done it... Most difficult ugly part of the story you have written in your simple wording. Yaar sach me SPEECHLESS... I felt every emotion of both them.

No doubt I hate your control freak kamina... harami... whatever... fu***king bas***d Jalal... I felt both of his emotions through your wonderful writing... his strong desire make her his... and his vulnerability ... fear of loosing her... he didn't wanted hurt her...

Only I part I didn't like when he did it twice... I thought he did this to make her his... He thought this is how she will comply to be with him... but then why again? Once was enough... but he couldn't control himself and did it again... that is pathetic... that was lust...

I am really looking forward to read this story further... how she will develop love for this rapist... I am very sure U will really do great... and also it's been 5 years... they have kid... so may be... Waiting curiously..😃.👏👏👏