Is it Hate OR Love ~ ALL CHAPTERS TOGETHER IN THIS THREAD - Page 69

Originally posted by: lasyap3

My God!Read all your chapters in a go inspite of my exams😳

It was damn haawwt☺️

You are such an intense writer👍🏼

Kudos to you!!!

👏👏👏

This piece of writing deserves a Five-Star

⭐️

Haina.. see Bhavi di! I always say naa ki you are an mind blowing super duper writer.. ab dekho😃

Mind blowing😎

Lot's of Love to you

❤️

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Okay ... bhaaviii my dearest writer ... what can i say about this update ... tu hai hi acchi writer ... mujhe itna darr lag raha tha ki ye update mein tu karegi kya kar ke ... as it is , tune dara diya tha ... ki mind freezed hai ... pata nahi kya likhu ... blah blah blah !!! tu har baar yahi bolti hai ... aur ekdum jhakaasss update deti hai 😆 !!!

Tujhe pata hai ... in this update what is the most best thing I loved ... u will fall off the ground from ur chair laughing 😆 ... Jodha's twisting nose to jalal 🤣 ... you have written it so beautifully when jalal is trying to instigate jodha during the teerandazi 😆 ... I so so so so ... love this teda & naughty jalal of yours ... bhavviii this para

He smirked seeing her fuming passion to win... His eyes sparkled seeing fire in her eyes... Her fuming angry face after annoying her always a treat for him and when she back fires with her sharp words... he feels like he has won the entire Hindustan... He waited to see this flicker in her for a long time...

Jalal was gazing at her flushed pink face without a flash... his constant stare made her conscious... she slowly looked at him to verify her sixth sense of his stare... Seeing deep passion in his eyes she forgot her anger for a while... and heavily blushed with artificial rage...and twisted her nose at him and turned her face... This made him feel out of this world...

He came near her and said... Jodha begum... Humari aapse ek guzarish hai...

Jodha looked at him with fury she knew he is doing this to annoy her...Hum kya seva kar sakte hai aapki... and gave him big smile with her annoyed face...

Jodha begum... hum aapke mooh se ek labz sunne ke liye tadap rahe hai...

Jodha with artificial angry smirk... aapko lagta hai ki hum kahenge ki hum aapse prem karte hai to bhool jaiye...

Jalal with tedapan smirked... ha to aap humse kya karti hai Jodha begum...

Jodha in haste blurted: Shenshah, Hum aapse bahot GRINAH karte hai ...

Jalal gave her his victory smirk and asked her again...Kya kaha aapne phirse kahiya...

With angry look she said: GRINAH... and twisted her nose at him...

Jalal with mischievous gaze smirked and said Sukriya Jodha begum... Yeh GRINAH labz aapke mooh se kafi namkin lakta hai... Jodha looked at him with frowned face...🤣

This was my most favourite part ... this shows how much my jalal loves his jodha ... he wants her to be confident , fiery & cannot see fear & tears in her eyes , awwweee my jalal ❤️... in this chapter I just felt to crush jalal in my arms ... i so so so much want to hug him ...🤗 ... jodha is so lucky to have such a husband

now coming to teerandazi - jalal is sucha brat 😆 , khud toh expert hai hi ... but he didnt even give an inch of over confidence expression ... infact nobody had any idea of jalal being so good in archery ... everybody's jaw dropped seeing him like this .. esp the stupid rajvanshi kings , including rana pratap 😆 i was so overwhelmed to read jodha's expression & thoughts bhaaviii ... really no wonder you have written it so beautifully ... tujhe pata hai I could actually visualize the archery contest ... it takes a lott of brainstorming sessions to write & describe the contest ... marvelous job bhaaviii 👏👏👏btw tera sword fighting kitna hot tha na ... mujhe pehle laga shayab teerandazi bhi utna hi hot hoga ... ye jalal bhi na sabke saamne announce kiya archery ka ... gussa hi aay mujhe toh 😡,

& the last one where jalal was blindfolded & he hits the arrow where the payal makes its sound was just mindblowing ... i could visualize this as well you knw i was so happy that jalal won & more than happy becoz jodha was happy seeing jalal's victory

& next was rana pratap's taunting to jalal made me so angry 😡 ... thankgod jodha ke bhashan ka kuch toh asar hua jalal pe... nahi toh yuhi haar maan leta ... pagal kahinka 😡 !!

coming to surya -suku = bhavviii tu aur tera shaitaan dimag ...🤣 ... mujhe toh lagta hai tera ye teda jalal bilkul tere jaisa hi hai .. dushta😆 ... kya planning ki bande ne ... matlab a true politician , cum warrior ... this jalal is a complete package ... !!! loved the possessive surya .. the way he behaves in front of mirza 😆... aur ye mirza bhi kam nahi hai , bilkul apne bhaijaan pe gaya hai 🤣 ... uff bechari jodha ... do do shaitaano ko handle karna padta hai 😆

btw surya called suku on jodha's terrace 😡 ... doosra terrace nahi mila kya ... itna bada mehal hai ... fir bhi ja ja ke jodha ka hi terrace ... aur ye jalal 😡 ye apne kamre mein nahi bula sakta tha kya 😡 isko bhi same terrace hi mila ... mujhe toh itna gussa aaraha tha ... jee toh kar raha tha ki jalal aur surya dono ko ek ek mukka maru 😆 ...

aur phir jodha & jalal ka ☺️ ... haaye mein mar jaava ... mujhe toh padh padh ke sharam aarahi thi , andar hi andar laddu bhi phoot rahe the ☺️... the way jodha jumps seeing jalal ... the way she talks ... ufff ... this jodha is a surprise packet re bhavvviii how can my jalal resist her re ☺️!!!

jaise hi aage aage padhte gayi mujhe toh laga aaj toh zabardast dhamaka hoyega, jodha ke playroom mein ... lekin nahi ... surya ki entry aur sab Satyanaash mere armaano ka 🥺 ...!!! bhaavviii uss waqt mujhe na tujhe zor ka ek mukka maarne ko man kiya ... kyun re jo & ja ke romantic moment ko bhang kiya 😡 !!! ans me bhaaviii 😡

phir surya ka confession & jalal & jodha ka tussle ...🤣 omg jodha was being such a villian in that cute about-to-do-confession ...aur beech beech mein jalal ke taunts ... haaye rabba this was a blast of laughter riot for me bhaaavviii !!! & I love you for this ...🤗 as I have said earlier .. that ur chapters have everything ... every emotions , drama , romance , masti , comedy sab kuch complete entertainment package , just like my jalal ...isshhh ☺️!! & & finally both the couples kiss ...❤️🥳

In total I loved loved loved this update bhaavviii ...🥳 ... after a month of waiting ... we get such an amazing update ... good lord ...plz dont take much time to update the next chapter ...😡 warna tera bhurta bana dungi samjhi 😡 ... kitna wait karaya hai tune 😭 ... wait kar ke kar ke ..meri toh 2 kilo wajan kam ho gaya hai 😭 ...btw no precap 😲 ... kyun ??? 😭

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

varsha dii!! aapne toh kahaani likh daali🤣

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

haan.. agree with Aisha!🤣

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

haina??? baap re!!! dii aap ne kya likha hai!!!!

bhavini di ko bhi out ker diya🤣

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

VOHI to ab to Varsha ke liye ek post banake sab update request karo... We want story by Varsha ... use itni update request karungi... ki ek din me pure 150 page khatam🤣

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Hawww 😲 ... what is dis ... meri peeth peeche gossip 😲 ... mujhse story wori likhi nahi jaati hai 😭

I cannot write an essay forget story 😭