so i m back...😃finally found something to write...😆
dekh first of all...mind-blowing...fantastic...awesome jaise tuch word use karke...🤢
i wont underestimate this update...🤔
just want to say one thing that you left me dumbfounded with this piece of work my dear...👏
i wont go into details because i m still not able to find the correct words to praise your remarkable scenes...😕
just writing whatever is coming to my mind right now...🤓
the bestest quality of your writing that dint go unnoticed by me in this one also...is that...👏
how frequently you change the mood of the scene...⭐️
i almost feel like i m on any roller costar ride whenever i go through your update...😆😆😆
next time i will surely use a seat belt...in case something happens...😆😳
i mean...who knows that after a super seductive.😳..sexy ☺️and passionate scene....we will get to hear the song baabul tere aangan ki...😲.what a swift change of emotions yaar...😲👏
i mean pehle tu room temprature badha deti hai hot scene se...😆
then achanak rula deti hai with an excellent emotional family scene...😭
so unpredictable you are😡
i was literally sweating reading that play room wali mini SR...
mera to sirf padhke hi breathing fast ho gayi thi...😳
i mean i m just guessing...ke ab isse bada taufa kya degi jo jalal ko..😆
one thing i m dam sure about...ke i m so much emotionally involve in this story...😳
ho sakta hai tujhe sun ke hansi aaye but its true...😕
pata nahi kaise but mujhe pehle hi pata chal jata hai tere akdha ab kya karege...😆
like when jalal once indirectly hurt jo in DWK (the most painful moment)..and after that jo'd eyes got all silent...😭
mujhe pata nahi kyu lag raha tha that now she will distance herself from him...😭
and see she did that...😭
that was the scariest update i have ever read..still cant forget the impact that i had on me...😭
maine teri saari updates 10 baar padhi hogi...whenever you take much time in update...😭
but that one...sirf ek baar uske baad meri himmat hi nahi hui...🥱😭
and in last one...i knew she was going to trust on him...😃
and in this one too...the moment kanika came into frame...i mumbled aaj iske daant gaye.😆..gardan jalal ke haatho me hone wali hai iski,,,,😆
and see...bang on...i laughed out loud reading that line,...do daath bahar...hehehhh...🤣
and then when an angry and frustrated jalal going inside the room...and sees them hugging...
sach kahu to ek pal ke liye mai dar gayi thi...😲
not because i thought that he will get angry on jo...but because of his already upset mood...😒
then i stopped reading and closed my eyes and thought...😕
what if he doesn't get angry on her.😳..i mean he can't...after what has happened in the morning and how jo trusted him in such an extreme and much more worst condition than this...😃
then i thought may be he will just make her understand about her limits and what if anyone else see her like this but will not mistrust her...😳
and see...another bang on...i was so happy when he repeated the same lines...🥳
mai bol rahi hu...😆
bada solid wala hearty connection ho gaya hai teri ff se mera...😃😉
i love u bhavu.😳..ur story..😉.ur akdha...just everything about this ff "IS IT HATE OR LOVE"👏...I literally feel like crying out loud thinking about its coming to its end...it is going to be very dufficult for me...😭
but nevertheless...har cheez ko end hona hota hai kabhi na kbhi...😭
i have ur version of akdha so much on my mind ke samajh me nahi aata unke bina kaise reh paugi...😭😭
may god give me the strength ..😕😭.love u lots...🤗
and about this update...mujhe nahi pata mai kya likhu yaar...❓
mujhe pata hai maine pata nahi kya bakwaas kari hai uper..😕.but its all my silly eccentric love for ur story..😆😳
mere dimag me jo aaya maine likh dala...😆
will try for a better review if i find something appropriate to appraise ur talent...😆😳😉
waiting for the next...but mujhe pata hai its not easy to update fast...😭
so take ur time...but kya tu mujhe pm karke baaki do challanges and jo ke gift ke baare me bata sakti hai...😳
mai mari ja rahi hu janne ke liye...😭
tab tak teri purani updates padhke kaam chalaugi...😉
but try to update soon for ur bechari dost and badi waali pankhi...😆😭
Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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