AKDHA FF ' Fifty shades of Jalal ' Thread one Ch 1-6 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 1 Teaser :-

"Miss Singh." He extends a long-fingered hand to me once I'm upright. "I'm Jalaluddin Mohammad. Are you all right? Would you like to sit?" he says looking at me , oh I must be looking like a number one idiot in the world at the moment ..

So young - and attractive, very attractive. He's tall, dressed in a fine gray suit, white shirt, and black tie with unruly dark copper colored hair and intense, bright gray eyes that regard me shrewdly. It takes a moment for me to find my voiceI wasn't sure what to say "Um...actually " I mutter , In a daze, I place my hand in his and we shake. As our fingers touch, I feel an odd exhilarating shiver run through me. I withdraw my hand hastily, embarrassed. Must be static. I blink rapidly, my eyelids matching my heart rate.

When I pluck up the courage to look at him, he's watching me, one hand relaxed in his lap and the other cupping his chin and trailing his long index finger across his lips. I think he's trying to suppress a smile.

I hope this was enough to shake you all Up 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
☺️..omg mast teaser hai yaar ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ambrosia-

☺️..omg mast teaser hai yaar ..

kitna mast 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nahe dungi 😆😈
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jab update degi tab bataungi😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser.. CONtinue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Mehak hi jaldi se update de dijiega!!!
Waiting dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ambrosia-

jab update degi tab bataungi😆

mei toh nahe de rahe update 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
'Oh Mom please , let us celebrate today then its our college from tomorrow please na' Jodha innocently begged her mother . 'But Jodha , it would be late' remarked her mother 'Arey aunty , you don't worry na .. we all will be back by 10 pakka' says Moti trying to recon her best friend's mom 'Yeah aunty , we promise , now please say a Yes please please' Suku too joined her best pals .

'Okay baba .. Go, but i want you at home by 10 , is that clear?' she says looking strictly at her beautiful daughter . 'OMG !! Thank you so much mama' Jodha jumped excitedly and hugged her mother , while her best pals looked at each other , smiled at their victory ..

As soon as Jodha broke the hug , the three of them looked at each other and jumped together shouting 'Yes...partyyy' and make a trio bear hug ..

'Okay in case anything happens tell me the club name' asked the mother worriedly 'Mom its Cielo' said Jodha , and then the three of them left for their car down ..

'Hey man ! ' punched maan right on his best friend's right arm 'Yo' the man greeted 'Finally you both dumbos are here haan' Jalal grinned . 'Oh yeah, we are' replied Maan and Abdul together and then bursted out laughing together too ..

'Chalo guys , or else we would be late ... And tomorrow is college na , first day' he reminded his dumbo friends... 'Oh yeah yeah' boringly they agreed with him ...

Then the three of them sat in Jalal's car , Maan sat at the back and Abdul accompanied him in the seat beside driver's seat while Jalal sat at the driver's seat , because he was going to drive ...

'OMG!!Aren't we all excited?' murmured Suku , while Jodha opened her car's door with the key and Moti and Jodha jumped in . 'Oh yeah now come on in' called Jodha 'Yeah yeah , i'm coming' says Suku jumping in back seat .. 'So, girls .. lets gooo' Jodha shouted as she switched her car to life ...


Edited by ---Mehak--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

superb teaser.. contiue soon...

Thank you so much Rani 🤗
I'm glad you liked it 😳

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