new Parijat OS :KMYMHJBKG .. plz plz check it

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Hai everyone😊 I'm here with a new OS.It's a Parijat OS.I hope you guys will like it.It's a simple one.I adapted it from another story.And pls dnt throw stones at me if it's bore😆..It just tells about a love story and that too a very small story.Here it is...

OS : Koi mujhko yu mila hai , Jaise Banjaare ko ghar

The city of Mumbai.TR college of Engineering and technology.The students are on a big strike. 2 weeks before a student, "Raksha" suicided there.As she was from a very poor family she couldn't remit the high fees of the college.She was studying in the last year and college management didn't allow her to write the exam.So she committed suicide.All the other students were really angry with the management and all went for a protest.At the front of the protest there stood him.His eyes had fire in it,heart as strong as a stone and his intentions were as smooth as a solid.He was the leader of the students.He is at the front of all protests and strikes.Extra ordinarily smart,suave,charismatic and handsome.

He entered the stage.The students chanted his name,"Rajat tokas...".He raises his hands and all were silent.He says,"Dear friends,this is not Raksha's personal problem it's our problem.It's the problem of each and every poor student.They have also the right to get quality education like all of us.Knowledge is something that can be acquired from anywhere and from anyone.Getting education is everyone's basic right.But today powerful rich brats are making education a prpoperty to sell.It's not fair to increase the fees as they like.It's unfair.All have the right to study.The management should take the responsibility of a poor girl's death.They should be arrested for torturing her mentally.The Government has also turned back from the issue .We should protest we should fight for justice."She was also with the students hearing his speech.Always she had an interest towards him.His attitude,his style,behaviour she liked it all...

All the students raised their voice.They conducted a march through Delhi.Police was expecting an attack soon.They were infront of the educational officer's office.Suddenly Rajat's phone rang.He couldn't hear the voice so he moved from there.The Police charged on the students.

She was scared.Her friends all were gone.All were running here and there.She came infront of a water cannon and the police opened it.She became very scared and closed her eyes.For 2 min she stood like that and opened her eyes.there she saw him standing infront of her facing her.The water was hitting hard behind him.He was all wet,and also she.He moved forward and she moved backward.He was lost in her.She was too.

(song "banjaare ko ghar" from the hindi movie ek villain)

jise zindagi doond rahi thi

kya hai vo makaam mera hai

yahan chain se bas ruk jaun

kyun dil ye muje kheta hai

jazbaat naye se mile hai

jane kya asar ye hua hai

ik aas mili phir mujko

jo kubool kisine kiya hai

hhaan...

kisi shayari ki ghazal

jo de rooh ko sukoon ke pal

koi mujko yun mila hai

jaise banjaare ko ghar


Her friend Rohan comes suddenly and takes her from there.She turns back.He was still looking at her.

After sometimes in the college.It was raining heavily.She was standing with Rohan and talking and Rajat comes there with his friend.Rohan asks her,"Can I call him for you??".She stops Rohan and says,"No..Pls..I can't face.."Rohan smiles and he suddenly calls,"Rajat...".Rajat turns back.

He comes there.He looked at her.Rohan says,"Actually Rajat my friend Paridhi..and Pari..Rajat..Rohan introduces them to each other."Hai.."says Rajat a with a little shy.Pari also says hai.

Rohan tells,"I'll be back 5 mins" he smiles teasingly and he leaves them alone.

Rajat and pari didn't know what to tell.They had a lot of things to say but both remained silent as both were feeling shy.Rajat shakes his head and rubs his hair.

He puts his hands in his pockets and says,"Pari...4th year Architecture right?? I've seen you many times"...he gaves a naughty smile.

She was a little surprised to hear that.Did he really noticed her?.She says,"I've also seen you,"Har protests mein sabse aage".They both smiles.

"Parii you know Hindi??You're from Kerala right??".She smiles and says,"Yes I know Hindi but little little.Actually all my friends speaks to me in Hindi and I reply in English".

Both talks for sometimes.Suddenly Rajat's friend calls him,"Rajat...we're getting late.."Rajat says,"I'm coming one min".

He says to Pari,"I have to go now."Pari nods.He walks but turns back and says,"Can I call you at the hostel at night??".Pari says,"but...girls say you never call anybody"

Rajat smiles and says,"I never had to".And he leaves.

It was night.The boys Hostel.Maan was Rajat's best friend.He was raging his juniors.And he askes them to dance as a bar dancer.

Rajat says,"Maan..stop it yaar..leave him...".Maan says,"Offfooo Rajat pls we've also been raged by our dear seniors right??Raging is the basic right of a senior".Now pls keep calm and watch the dance dude".

And all the boys started dancing .Rajat smiles.he sees Rohan and sits besides him.

Rajat slowly asks,"Hmm.. Pari is from Kerala right??".Rohan smiles and says,"Yeah.Actually her Mom and Dad were killed..shot dead..She belongs from a military family.Her father is a Marathi and he married her mother who is from Kerala.So she's a mixed cultured.".Rajat felt bad hearing her story.He calls her.She was waiting for his call when the bell rang she swiftly picked the phone.

Rajat says,"Hey..I thought you would have slept.."

Pari :"Actually I don't sleep much,I sleep late"

Rajat :Oh...so what's up??

Parii :Nthng all my frnds are out due to the strike

Rajat : Do you wanna go?

Parii : I'd love to but how?

Rajat : We can ride on my bike..

Their conversation continued for the whole night!!.They had become very close unknowingly.the next day he came to the hostel with his bike.there she stood waiting for him.She sat behind him.And they moved.They were really happy with each other.

Days moved on they were becoming so so close to each other.

One day Parii was walking through the corridor with her friend.Rajat was coming opposite.Pari's friend was looking at a book and walking.When they both came face to face Rajat held Pari's hand and pulled her.Pari was confused.He brought her to a place where no one was there.

He held her cheeks and says softly,"I think I'm in love with you.."She looks at him with shocked eyes.He comes closer and kisses her lips.They had a liplock.Suddenly she separates him and leaves from there.

After 2 days Rajat was in a students meeting but his mind was filled with Pari's thoughts.

He was looking out through the window and suddenly sees her but she leaves there.Again she comes to the window and asks him to come out.He comes out.

She took a heavy breath and says,"Rajat..I...I love you too.A special smile came on his face he took a deep breathe and says,"Thank god..I was too tensed.. I thought that you didn't like what I did...He smiles and says," I'll kill you Parii..for making me so tensed but before that your looks will kill me..Both smiles and hugs each other.

So how was it??😊I'm so sorry if it's stupid😭.Actually my mind is not working that much nowadays😕...If you guys want then I'll continue it or if you guys think that it is gud this much then I'll stop here.😊

Pls pls do comment and give your reviews😳.And dnt 4get to hit the likes.I've written something after 2 or 3 months so pls...😆pls..comment and ya so for all kinds os mistakes...😳


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aisha.....11110 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res will read nd comment😆
unres
supurp
continue soon
nd yess!!!!!!!!!
best song for the best situation👏
plzzz continue
Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arre di
I just read it... bahut achha tha... and raksha's story was heart touching..
Loved the way how you described the situation... nd song was cherry on top!
Mind Blowing... !👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Arre di

I just read it... bahut achha tha... and raksha's story was heart touching..
Loved the way how you described the situation... nd song was cherry on top!
Mind Blowing... !👏

thanku v much
this was just a random thought which came to my mind ... im happy that u enjoyed it .. take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanku u v much dear 4 ur valuable comment 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely super duper wala update thaaa
thanksss 4 D PM frend
update sonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indhulovesparii

thanku v much

this was just a random thought which came to my mind ... im happy that u enjoyed it .. take care

Not only enjoyed... but enjoyed it to core!!!
👏 👏
And... We shud say thank u to u...!! You gave us such a master piece nd yahan to aap hi hume thank you keh rahe ho??😉😃
👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful lovely os
welcome back dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifully written😳... neki or puch puch😆.. update it soon... will wait...😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very swwet n lovely os!!
superb yaar!
lighthearted n cute!!

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