Jodha Begum is Back with a bang #FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Scene 1:Jodha in Aamer
Jodha is crying in her Room and suddenly Mainavati enters
Mainavati:Jodha!!!
Jodha hurriedly wipes her tears
Mainvati:Jodha, tum Roo kyun rhi ho
Jodha:Nahi to Masa hum kahan ro rhe hai?
Mainvati:Accha to humari Jodha itni badi ho gyi hai ki humse apne jazbaat chupane lagi hai
Jodha Hugs her and told her that she wants to return back to her sasural as she is feeling very Lonely here
Mainavati:(she is smiling) hum jaante the ki humari Jodha koi galat faisla nhi legi, hum...hum abhi shehnshah ko paigam bheejwaten hai ki tum Agra loat rhi ho
JODHA STOPS HER AND SAYS:
Nhi Masa, hum nhi chahte ki shehnshah ko humare aane ki bhanak tak lage (she wants to surprise him)

Scene 2 Hamida got a news that Jodha has returned to Agra
Hamida is very Happy, she goes to The Entry Door of the palace to receive Jodha (Note:Jalal is unaware abt that becoz he didn't wants to meet anyone coz of MAHAM )
Jodha:Ammijaan!!!
Hamida:Jodha !!!
( they both Hugs each other)
Hamida:hum tumse behad Naraz hai Jodha, tumne ek baar bhi humare baare me nhi socha, ki tumhari gaermojudgi me humara kya haal hoga??? Ek baar to humse apne dil ki baat kahi hoti
Jodha:(she starts crying) hume maaf kardijiye Ammijaan hum aage se aaisa kabhi nhi krenge
(Jodha Takes Hamida's Aashirwaad & she looks here and there as she is expecting Jalal to come there )
Hamida:kisse dhoond rhi ho Jodha😆
Jodha:Nhi kisi ko nhi Ammijaan
😳
(Hamida Asks Jodha to take rest in her Hojra)

Scene 3 Jalal is crying in his room & Hamida enters...
Hamida puts her hand on Jalal's shoulder
HAMIDA:Jalal !!!
JALAL:aisa kyun hota hai ammijaan ki jis shaks se hum mohabbat krne lagte hai vo shaks hame chhod kr chala Jaata hai ? Pehle Khan baba , Fir Abbajaan,fir Jodha begum or ab...😭
HAMIDA:Jodha? Jodha to yhi hai Jalal
JALAL:Yeh aap kya keh rhi hai ammijaan
HAMIDA:han Jalal,tum nhi jaante ??Jodha loat aayi hai
JALAL:kya??? Aap...aap sach keh rhi hain??
(Hamida nodded amd smiled)

JALAL TELLS HAMIDA THAT HE IS GOING TO MEET JODHA 😳 AND HE RUNS AWAY FROM HIS HOJARA😆

Scene 4
JODHA IS ABT TO LEAVE HER HOJARA BUT SHE STOPS AS JALAL HAS ALREADY ENTERED.
JODHA IS BLUSHING😳 & LOOKING DOWNWARDS

JALAL:JodhaBegum! Hum jaante the ki aap jarur aayengi 😳

JALAL HUGS HER PASSIONATELY AND JODHA WAS SURPRISED AT WHAT HE IS DOING BUT AFTER SOMETIME SHE ALSO HOLDED HIM TIGHTLY😳

BOTH OF THEM WIPED THEIR TEARS AND JALAL TAUNTS HER 😆
JALAL:aap to keh rhi thi ki aap nhi aayengi fir...?
JODHA:aapki taane marne ki aadat kabhi nhi jaegi haina???
Theek hai yadi aap nhi chahte ki hum yha rhe to hum yahan se chale jaate hai🥱
JALAL GRABS HER HAND ,PULL HER TOWARDS HIM
JALAL:(he puts his finger ho her lips) Shhh...aainda aaisa kabhi mat kahiyega Jodha Begum !! Aap nhi jaanti ki aapke bagaer humara ek-ek lamha ek-ek din ki tareh gujra hai😭

JODHA:hum to keval mazak kar rhe the shehnshah 😲

MEANWHILE ATGAH SAHAB HAS BEEN MURDERED BY ADHAM AND A BANDHI COMES THERE TO INFORM JALAL ABOUT THIS, JALAL GOT VERY ANGRY AND SHOUTS ADHAMMM...😡

This is the first FF written by me 😊
Hope u liked it😃
Pls do leave ur comments😊
PS:sorry for the Mistakes😎










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luvRTpari thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is amazing dear
continue writing
u r using right sense of writing expression and movement too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvRTpari

it is amazing dear

continue writing
u r using right sense of writing expression and movement too.

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u reminded me of the time when i wrote my first story on the forum...writing the last note fetched me few cmments but dear seriously believe me u r going to get many cmments 4 dis...its an amazing story...ur writing style is just the same way i write...i loved it totally...i hope u r ready wid the second chapter of this story cuz i m dying to read it...plsss update it soon...u r awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever

u reminded me of the time when i wrote my first story on the forum...writing the last note fetched me few cmments but dear seriously believe me u r going to get many cmments 4 dis...its an amazing story...ur writing style is just the same way i write...i loved it totally...i hope u r ready wid the second chapter of this story cuz i m dying to read it...plsss update it soon...u r awesome

Aww Thank you so much dear & I will try to update it soon😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikhag

Aww Thank you so much dear & I will try to update it soon😊😊


i will wait for it and guess what its my holidays starting from next week...shud i call u di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever


i will wait for it and guess what its my holidays starting from next week...shud i call u di

No u can call me Shikha only 😆 and congo for ur Vacations😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Plz plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome start👏👏😉
do continue soon
n pm me next tym u update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...

Plz plz continue😳

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