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akdha

@akdha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Wow Preet👏 i am liking it more and wanted more !! that slip part was so subtly explained, brilliant Preet. ur control in words are crystal clear👏 who collided with Jo, and who was watching them??

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Radz

@...Radhika...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

awesome! Kya combination hai Commerce with comp. science... Jodha ko bolo MBA kare baad me...
Awesome update👍🏼 Thanks for pm!!
And CONGO you are a rockerzz noww!!🥳

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hey! I read both the parts together and I loved it!

Can't wait to read further please update soon!

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

awsome update!!!

love to see more soon...😃

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Nishtha

@Nishtha

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

So finally Jalal made his entry...🥳 Lovely update dear please do continue soon...yeah Precap se kaam nahin chalega...🤗

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PoPo/PoPu

@TheItalianBride

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Will comment soon, but plz di, bhagwan ke liye next tym voh bright neon green colour se mat likhna 🤓

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hi entire chapter was awesome... U know Preet what I love about your writing... you put every scene in detail... I love the part you have mentioned about slip... it shows how Jodha's character is... the way she instruct masterji... She is very decent girl... and I was very surprise with she picked computer instead Math... her teacher is very dominating... she gave and took computer science... vow... I think her destiny is waiting for her their... Jodha bang with handsome dude... must be Jalal... can't wait for more... update soon

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Angel-

@Angel-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

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Preet

@rishbala3018

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
Very nice update continue soon& do pm dear tks

Thx dear 😊
Will do 😃

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Lovely update Preet...😃...You give a detailed writing (which I like)... I can literally visualize the goings on clearly...Be it teacher telling Jodha to take another subject with Commerce and why so OR the talk that Jodha has with her Masterji (tailor) and the reasons she thinks about the white uniform...I loved those parts...Finally she collides😆...Someone looking at her while she is least bothered.😉...Chalo next part I think Jallu and Jo ka ek frame mein saath hoga😉...Great going buddy...Update soon and do PM😃

PS: One request buddy, as far as possible avoid neon green...Padne mein difficulty hoti hai, especially when there are 4-5 lines to read😛

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago