SS-Love Is Stronger Than Death(updt Part-5 page 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dear😊actualy tune cvs ki sari galtiya count krwa di😆luvd it...they shud visit forum hw much bttr writers present here😉plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-4


Jalal " yah khuda yeah maine kya kar diya? Maine itna bada gunah kaise kar diya. Maine phir se jodha begum ka yakin kho diya. Is baar to maine saari hadein par kar di kya nahi bola maine unhe.

Jalal" aap saab inhe wapis le jaye main baad main batata hoon ki inka kya karna haain. Jalal rushed to jodha hozara.

Moti sitting outside waiting for Jodha come out or call her to come inside.

Jalal saw moti bai sitting outside jodha hozra. He went to her and enquired"kya baat hain moti bahar kyon hain aap?

Moti " pranam shanshah. Woh hum jodha mera matlab hain jodha begum se milne aaye the parantu unhone kisi ko bhi andaar aane se mana kiya hain.

Jalal " hey khuda yeah maine kya kar diya". Jalal jodha ke hozre ke pass jata aur andaar jaise hi jaane lagta hain tabhi guard" Humein mauf kar de shenshah par begum sahiba ne mana kiya hain kisiko bhi andaar aane ke liye. Aap bole to main puch kar aaon.

Jalal" aap ja kar jodha begum se bole ki hum unse milna chahte hain".

Guard went to inside hozra" Begum sahiba shenshah aapse milna chahte hain".

Jodha" arre tumhari himmat kaisi hui shanshah e hind ko rokne ki. Koi baat nahi main khud unka swagat karti hoon.

Jodha apne hozre se bahar aati hain" Humein mauf karde shanshah insse bhul ho gayi inhe yaad nahi raha ki aap kaun hain " Shahnshah-e-Hind Jalaluddin Mohammad " .


upcoming update is very interesting will update very soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
superb updt
cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
part 2
nice...
oh ho these 2 evil people are going to Sujamal...
cont soon...
pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vow Annu Amazing!!! U have written Jalal's guilt superb!!!! loved all 4 chapters... res.. I will update my comment in detail soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update ⭐️⭐️⭐️
cant wait to read more 😃
update sooon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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How come i didnt come across this amazing story earlier?
It is really very superb... Excellent portrayal of Jalal's guilt and Jodha's pain...
Par excellence...
Waiting for the upcoming updates...
P.S: whenever u update a certain part,edit the title and mention the updated chapter number and the page number..it will be easier for the readers to read it,ok...
Good job...
Continue sooonish...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice... please continue super soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-5


Jalal" Jodha Begum hum aapse akele main kuch baat karna chahte hain kya hum andar aa sakte hain".

Jodha" Arrre meri itni himmat ki main aap ko rok saku " Shahnshah-e-Hind Jalaluddin Mohammad " ko itni mujh main himmat kaha. Waise bhi jaha aapke hojre main 5000(begum aur kanji) rehti hain waha meri kya aukat.

Jalal" Jodha Begum aisi baatein karke humein aur sharminda mat kariye".

Jodha "" Shahnshah-e-Hind Jalaluddin Mohammad ko yeah shobha nahi ki ek najeez se begum se is tarah ke baatein karein". Jaisa ki aapki khwahish thi ki main suraj niklanese pehle agra chod doon to main wahi kar rahi hoon. Aur main dil se aapka dhanyabad karti hoon kitni bhi aapne mujhe ijaat di par mujhe dukh is baat ka hain ki usse jyada aapne meri bejaati ki hain. Main aapne jeevan main kabhi nahi bhoolungi ki aapne kis tarah ke kathor vachan mujhe bole hain. Agar kisi rishtein bharosa nahi ho to us rishte ko aap jyada samay nahi bacha sakte.

Main manti hoon hoon ki kai baar meri taraf se bhi galtiya hui hain par har bar maine aapke kathor vachan sun kar chup chap rahi kyonki main janti thi ki aap hi mere aaj aur aane wala kal hain. Is sachai se main bhag nahi sakti parantu jo aapne aaj kaha who sunnne se pehle to mujhe maut aa jaani chaiye thi.

Jalal was listen carefully jodha words and not able to utter single word in front of her.

Jalal" Jodha Begum kya aap mujhe bolne ka mauka dengi".

Jodha "" Shahnshah-e-Hind Jalaluddin Mohammad" ab bolne aur suune ke liye kuch nahi raha. Jo aap mujhe bola uski to main kabhi kalpna bhi nahi kar sakti thi. Sach to kehte hain haram main saarein meri is mehal main meri koi aukat nahi hain. Jisse jab jo mann main aata hain mujhe bol ke chala jaata hain par kahi mujhe yakin tha ki jiski wajah se main yaha hoon "" Shahnshah-e-Hind Jalaluddin Mohammad" mujhe samjhte hain.

Meri ma sa ne ek baar mujh se kaha tha ki agar kisi bhi payni ke liye bahut khushi aur garv ki baat hoti hain agar uska pati uska saath hamesha deta hain. Aur kismet dekhiye mere pati ko mere chritra par hi yakin nahi hain. Par mujhe yeah saab ek sapna lagta hain kyonki sach bahut kadwa aur zehrila hota hain. Mujhe Benazir ki zehar se bacha liya par aapne jo kathor vachan bole uske zehar se main bach na saki...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome... loved Jodha's reply... each word portrayed how nhurt and heartbroken she is...
continuie sooonish...
thanks for the pm.

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