AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 1- 6

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Superb chapter Pri di!!!! Absolutely loved the Jalal-Rico convo..they are so alike! They seem to have already developed a liking for each other with their first meet and first convo!😛😎

I'm not good with cars and their names..leave alone recognising them..so I won't venture there at all..😆😆

Loved it that Jalal has found a new friend in Rico..😳

I'm so so looking forward to more of their interactions in the coming chapters..plus a Jalal-Jo meet sometime!

Update karo jaldiii...waiting...😆🤗

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kritika

@Kritianya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#782

fabulous
cant wait for the next 1

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

villains are HOT😳

Par...Fir main in hot villainon ki buraai nahi dekh pati 😆

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Such a cute chapter... I was completely lost in Rico's word and his cars... Vow Ricco answered really smartly... little ricco surprised Jalal... His ask another question to verify.. if he really knows the answer... LOVE this chapter so much... Jalal realized his situation... Hope vo Ricco ko jaldi se car gift kare... I love how Ricco left impression on Jalal... He is still thinking about him... Can't wait for next chapter and YEH CHAPTER LONG THA??????????????? I FELT ABHI TO START HUA AUR KHATAM BHI HO GAYA... I want more... Please update fast...👏 Superb!!!!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#785

I am sick of this like button... I will try again tomorrow... with my desktop... laptop se work nahi kar raha...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#786

part 5
awesome dear...
excellent...
lovely...
Rico is so cute and brilliant...
and Jalal is so amused...
Jalal doesnt remember Rico at all?
they met in the party right?
cont soon dear...

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: mdeshpande
Brilliant story !!
Shock was the first emotion that i felt while reading.
why????😲😲

Jo is a single mother, which is OK but seems that she was raped and that too by Jalal !! Felt proud of her as despite her trying circumstances she remains strong for Salim !! 👏 Who is this 'ammijaan'? HB??
yap its HB dear😃

Jalal comes across as rude and angry man and what he does for pleasure,somehow made his impression as 'despicable' to me. What "accident"?? made him impotent?? this fact has made me hate him less, sympathize him.
thank god...warna jalal ki toh

but hopefully he will repent and be good to Rico and Jo.
lets see what he does...😳

Must say Btw that this nickname "Rico" threw me off for a while. 😆
why so????😲😲

Looking forward to their meeting!!
Thank God Ruk is NOT Jalal's wife! MA and Adham hai , Shareefudin "shareef" hai?? doubt it! Good Jalal had Abdul !!
i love abdul...i miss him in JA😃

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: PupCat
Awesome update di...
Aww how cute... rico i just luv him...
Shayad jo ja mil jaye

aww my love🤗

i love rico too...

btw tu kab post karegi OS???😳

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: hely
comments se pehle karti hu prnaam...😳
next time thoda long update yaar...😆🤣
aur thoda saa jaldi b...😆😆
nehi deti ja...😡😆

wowwiiee luvly update..loved whole part...😉
i must say u r an amazing writter👏👏
aww...meri lovely sis🤗

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru
superb update...
Rico is sooo cute...
i love him...
eagerly waiting for jalal and jodha's confrontation...
continue soon...

thanks sweetu...

will try to update soon...but forgive me if i failed to