RAAT AKELI HEIN OS

hii friends, U'v got it right, my first OS on IF, ther many excellent writers here, and i know m nothing compared to them, taking a step further as following the role models on our forum, I begin to write my first OS,
I humbly request all readers to be patient nd forgive if i have made any error during this OS, and to pm, if any part needed to be amend.
Thank you.


Raat Akeli hein OS Part 1


Its very cold outside... Jodha is about to slip due to a stone on the ground.. Jalal sees this and goes to help her... As he saves her, both roll together.. Jodha is beneath him.. Jalal is above her.. They both are tangled...
They try to get up.. But Jodha slips again... There's a tree near them.. Jalal holds jodha and while saving her.. Jo gets pushed towards tree... Both have an eye lock...
Their bodies are very close and attached.. Sometime later..they start walking.. They miss out a lake near them due to their eyelock (ahem).. and fall into the water...
They are fully drenched... When they are out of the lake.. Jalal carries Jodha in his arms.. Jodha is fainted as she wasn't well... Jalal takes her to a small hut nearby... He places her gently on the dry ground.. He starts rubbing her hand and feet out of fear... Soon Jodha opens her eyes and wakes up.. Both go near to a small firewood in the corner of the hut.. They take warmth from it .. Both have a sweet moment... Jalal feels a bit cold.. He goes nearer to Jodha.. Both laugh on how they fell in water...
Suddenly theres a thunder outside... Jodha holds onto Jalal... Jodha's lips are near Jalal's neck... Jalal doesnt have his jama on himself as he took it out coz it was wet... He just has a shawl around himself...Jodha realises Jalal's eyes are on her.. Jodha tries to stand but falls again.. This time on Jalal... Jalal's hands are on Jodha's back.. He realises her back is bare .. Jodha feels it.. She closes her eyes in anticipation... Jalal ties the dori of her blouse.. Jodha opens her eyes in shock and feels relieved...
Jalal's eyes are glued onto Jodha's... Jalal gets up.. He gives her his hand so that she can get up.. Jodha takes it and gets up.. Its all dark in the hut as the fire goes off ... Jalal goes and lights a fire again.. As Jodha's clothes are wet.. She sees some pieces of clothing.. She takes them and goes to change... While Jalal stands and waits outside...
Jodha comes out.. The clothes she's wearing are almost see-through... Moreover she doesnt have a palla.. Shes uncomfortable and feeling cold... Jalal lights up the fire... She sits on the other side of the fire opposite to Jalal... She constantly looks down.. Jalal keeps staring at her... He asks her, "Are you okay?"... She nods a yes.. Jalal sees that she's feeling cold.. He gets up from his place... Jodha wonders... Jalal goes near to her..takes off his shawl and sits beside her.. Jo closes her eyes... Jalal covers her with the shawl... He looks at her lovingly...
Jodha's heart beats faster.. She can sense him.. Both of them can hear their heartbeats... Jalal slowly caresses Jo's face.. Jodha's heartbearts start racing.. Jalal takes jo's one hand and puts it on his chest... She opens her eyes in shock.. She senses an injury on his chest..
(Flashback.. Jalal got a little bruise on his chest while saving Jodha)... Jodha speaks.. Ye kya hua Shahenshah... Jalal locks her lips with his finger with a ,'Shhh! '... But Jodha is still tensed... Jalal's eyes are on her eyes.. On her face... His right hand snakes around her waist... Slowly he makes her lie down... He comes over her... A big thunder outside 'Grrr'... Jodha's grip over Jalal tightens... Bg - Ishq hai Vo Ehsaas Ishq hai Vo Juzbaat... Badal de ye duniya.. Badal de ye haalat.. '...

NB: A very huge thanks to my update gang, for appreciating my work and giving me the courage to post it on IF, special thanks to one nd only PrincessNancy(nams my love).
update gang divas: lashy di, Azra, Radhika(pupcat), soumya(baubles), bhavni di, IFrutuja, aanchal, alina di, an adorable shreshtha di and none other than IF ki jaan, PrincessNancy.

i hope u'v all enjoyed and do leave a review..
thanks:)

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Originally posted by: PupCat

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Yuppie I am first to comment! !!

Great work my dear Pappui!

It's fantastic fabulous hot... muwwahh! !

I'm glad that I commented first on your first writing!

Keep writing more! Love you

arwww my golu, thank u soo much.
lyou'v always been a supporter right there for me.
Love u loadz * muah:* and all the best for ur exams..

Oh la la Your writing is dreamly beautiful and ensnaring dear 🤗🤗 The scene where the two fall in the river and comes out all wet wity Jallu carrying Jodhu in his arms ☺️☺️❤️ How wish it to happen in the show 😛😛 but they are already back to Agra Atleast I got to read it from yours darling 🤗🤗 and that weather with thunder is just a cherry on top of cake ☺️☺️ Dreamy and romantic update dear *-* *-* ^-^ ^-^ Update soon 😊😊

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

Oh la laYour writing is dreamly beautiful and ensnaring dear🤗🤗The scene where the two fall in the river and comes out all wet wity Jallu carrying Jodhu in his arms☺️☺️❤️How wish it to happen in the show😛😛but they are already back to AgraAtleast I got to read it from yours darling🤗🤗and that weather with thunder is just a cherry on top of cake☺️☺️Dreamy and romantic update dear *-* *-* ^-^ ^-^ Update soon😊😊

Thanks alot love, i nvr expected to get much of these comments aswell, i'll continue soon, sorry as i just started m very sloww thinking wat to type, but i'll continue soon, more of credits to princessnancy for her help nd support, she's a darling.
i'll try something more better for the 2nd part.

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Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

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Like button not working... Will try to do it again tonight...
Thanks Sana.. Will unres soon

P.s- thanks rads for promoting it in wa as well... Love.. ya

no worries buddy, anytime.
i hope u enjoyed it.
Rads :*, love u loadz, thanks for everything.