Written update 3rd February-Fiction

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Friends,
This is how I want things to unfold on Monday --hope you all enjoy it and yes its a Maha episode.

Benazir is in her room thinking how she can kill Jalal before the Nikah, Zakira says I have seen Shehanshah alone in his Jharoooka looking towards sky this is the best time to do your job and get it out of Agra along with Abu Mali. Benazir with cunning smile says then be it!!

She gets up to go towards Jalal khwaabgah...on the other hand Jodha thinks..I have to be awake all night and have sit out in open to protect Shehanshah from that vishkanya as Saiffudin ji said she will try and kill him before the nikah... without waiting an another minute she gets up to leave to protect her love.

Suddenly Jodha looks and finds Benazir heading towards Jalal as well..she stops her in between and ask..What are you doing here at this time? Go back to your room..to which Benazir replies oh you are not the only begum now, and I am not mere kaneez anymore...Jodha stops her in middle but today my audha is still higher than so go back...furious Benazir did not want to prolong this conversation more and leaves...in between all this an oblivious Jalal looks down and find Jodha standing there...he murmurs..let me find out the reason of Jodha begum's presence at this time .

Jalal to Jodha: What are you doing here at this time?
Jodha: This is a garden and I want to walk in the night..she did not want to tell him the reason and be the reason of his fury again..
Jalal: i have never seen you walking at this time of hour and you are not walking just standing
Jodha: Shehanshah..I am not at peace so came out to look for few answers..
Jalal: mockingly.. try and find the answers within Begum...try and find why you are so jealous of Benzair when you have no feelings for me whatsoever..
Jodha: Shehanshah..I know Benazir is a VishKanya and I will prove it , I am too secure to be jealous of some kaneez and vishkanya..
Jalal.Jodha...Khammosh woh humari hone wali begum hain aur woh humse mohabbat karti hain nafrat nahi..
Jodha...just looked at Shehanshah and left from there...

In the morning...Jalal goes to his jharooka and finds Jodha still standing there...sleepless but determined..tired but satisfied..sad but happy that his suhaag is safe..

Jalal shouts...what are you doing here this is an important day for me and I don't want to spoil it I don't want to look at you so please leave..a heartbroken Jodha with tears in her eyes leaves from there..

In midst of all this emotional turmoil the scheming is going on between Adham Khan and Benazir...Dont worry Benazir you feed the sewaiyan to Jalal my men will kill Atgah Khan and will take over the situation...

Everybody is getting ready for their big day.. Maha and Ruqu takes out their best dress for the evening after all..their biggest enemy is going to lose her status and she will be a Begum-e-khaas again and Maha will have a final say on every decision Jalal takes henceforth..like it was before Jodha came into the scene..

Jodha with heavy heart...gets ready Moti ask her to bring smile on her face..how can I smile..Shehanshah life is in danger.

Everybody...gathers as Maaulvi ji asked to do a last rasam before the nikah..Benazir and Jalal walks in together while Jodha helplessly see Shehanshah in the grip of his tormentor..

Maulavi ji says Benazir eat this sewaiyan and give the left over to Shehanshah..Jodha suddenly comes into the present and jumps...nahin...mujhe dijiye...

Jalal: yeah kya behudagi hai..
Jodha: Aap mere aur dekhna nahin chate par main apne pati ki hatya hote nahin dekh sakti..kadachit aaj ke baad mere aankha na khule...main apse vida leti hun...and drinks the entire bowl of sewayian..

The place comes to standstill...nobody could imagine that Jodha can go this far to save her Shehanshah...she feels dizzy and falls in Jalal's arms...Jalal still in shock looks at her..while she closes her eyes...those eyes whom he always wanted to be with him until eternity..

Swords are drawn from all the side...while Jalal still looking at his begum and seeing her losing her breath in his arms.." Zehanaseeb..tujhe chaon betahash zehanseeb song is playing in the background...he is shouting Hakim Sahab..but in all this chaos and in the sounds of sword fight his words his screams are lost ...a heartless emperor has transformed into a Prince charming for his begum..he gathers his courage to save his life..and leaves from there leaving the chaos the unanswered questions... the mystery behind him...while..Maha and Hamida begum follow suit...

He puts Jodha on the bed and asks Hakim Sahab to start the cure asap..he has some business to finish...Hamida begum can see a wounded tiger who is out to kill everyone...for hurting him where it hurts the most " his non existence heart which appeared out of nowhere and urging him to burn the world"

The fight was still on in the area...when suddenly they hear a roar of a Tiger from an emperor ..and they get into the shock...

Freeze...

PS: If you all liked it will write the next episode tomorrow 😊 Thanks for reading

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hame aapka yeh hunar pasandh aaya Nishtha👏bass akdha ek ho jaaye... ekta maiyya sunnlo hamari pukar..sunnn rahi ho na tum... kuch keh rahe hai hum😛😆

I was just fed up of Hisss -ben track uff god it should happen the way you have written and followed by jodha being rushth 😆

Nishtha aage likho na please😳😆 Look as per your WU it mahaepisode... its my right to ask for long WU😆bolo bolo bolo bolte q nahi😉 aage kya hua...

Very well written Nishtha dear🤗🤗


P.S: I was the first to comment🥳yeayyy
Edited by roshaeldsouza91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you I shall wait for your comments..I have never written anything like this..but JA compelled me so did it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woh kya kehte hai... apke muh mein ghee shakar...
if this came true i would absolutely love it and will never ever criticize ekta i swear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

woh kya kehte hai... apke muh mein ghee shakar...

if this came true i would absolutely love it and will never ever criticize ekta i swear



I wish pair but we know Ekaterinburg don't we 😆 Thanks for reading😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i liked it thanxx write the next part two pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

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Hame aapka yeh hunar pasandh aaya Nishtha👏bass akdha ek ho jaaye... ekta maiyya sunnlo hamari pukar..sunnn rahi ho na tum... kuch keh rahe hai hum😛😆

I was just fed up of Hisss -ben track uff god it should happen the way you have written and followed by jodha being rushth 😆

Nishtha aage likho na please😳😆 Look as per your WU it mahaepisode... its my right to ask for long WU😆bolo bolo bolo bolte q nahi😉 aage kya hua...

Very well written Nishtha dear🤗🤗


P.S: I was the first to comment🥳yeayyy

Thank you for such lovely comments and welcoming me...its been ages since I posted in any forum,..so thank you its nice to know people welcome you...🤗🤗 Thanks againa nd will surely write part 2...yeah thought of writing it little more long..phir laga maybe you all will not like it...so stopped 😆 thanks again...May I know your name please 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: taslim

i liked it thanxx write the next part two pls

Thank you so much...🤗 I have seen you are very active and love JA so loved to have your comments
@ ShinySherya...thank you for commenting 🤗 and yes reading😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishtha

Thank you for such lovely comments and welcoming me...its been ages since I posted in any forum,..so thank you its nice to know people welcome you...🤗🤗 Thanks againa nd will surely write part 2...yeah thought of writing it little more long..phir laga maybe you all will not like it...so stopped 😆 thanks again...May I know your name please 🤗


🤗My Name is Selvi😳 i like your name nishtha😊
😲😲aww bery bery bery bad😲 why didnt you post long one..😆ok hamne aapko muaaf kia..😉that means you will have to write looong one soon😛

its beautifully written and you very well deserved such welcome...
please dont stop writing😉😆

Mujhe part 2 chahiye jaldi start writing😆
😆kidding share it when you get time..😉

and please dont stop commenting and posting here...🤗we would love to have you here😳... and am sure you would love us too..😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow well written Nishtha 👍🏼

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