~*~||~Two Shots: Aadha Ishq~||~*~ Udated Pg-4 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice start dear.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Continue soon yaar... Update it na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
amazing os dear, loved it
please do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
'Kuch nehi'
'Nehi nehi humne be shakh kuch na kuch suna'
Jodha keep on saying no but all in vain Jalal had caught all her intentions. In excitment Jalal stood up Jodha in embarrassment turned away in that Jalal caught her hand and pushed her towards his body that he slipped...

SPLASH...!!!!!!!!!

Both in water Jodha above Jalal. Jodha looked in Jalal eyes and Jalal in Jodhas their eyes met. Jalal in a second read her eyes and understood her feelings. He got up and moved to his sorry their room.

Room...

Jodha was drying her hairs and had changed to simple but green. Jalal came a shawl wrapping around him.

'Jodha Begum' Jalal whispered in Jodha's
Jodha went and sat on the bed with a frown.And Jalal went sat on the sofa.

Jodha to herself 'Sari ke sari khush ki inhone dhajiyaan uda diin'

Jalal from the corner looking in Jodha's eyes having an eye talk
'Kya hua Jodha..??'
'Pyaar'
'Kiss se...???'
'Sharifuddin se...'
'Kya'
'Arre aap bhi na hume aapne pati parmeshwar se, humare parbhu, humare humsafaar'
'Ya Allah, itnee saare logon se'
'Arre hume aapse pyaar hua hai'
He stood in shock and shouted 'Kya'
'Haan' she even shouted.

She turned away from Jalal and stood near the window pain.

Jalal comes near Jodha and sings

He keeps his head on her shoulder and keeps his hand on her waist.

Batiyaan tore naina
Hum se joh na karte
Haaye Ram kasam jeete jee mar jaate

Jodha hits him on his head and sings

Arey aise kaise o ji
Yun hi tum mar jaate ho
Tum jo naa hote hum kyun duniya mein aate

Jalal take her on the sofa and gives shoulder pushes

Ki teri meri ik zindagi

Jodha keeps his head onn his cheast

Ha sang teri preet lagi
Ho pal pal badhegi

Jalal stands and and takes Jodha in arms and gives her rounds singing

Haan maine bhi yeh Rab se waada kiya haaye
Saanson ne baandhi hai dor piya
Tohre liye humra dhadke jiya

Jalal keeps Jodha on the bed. He takes of her jewelry. Ones up the dori of her dress. Jodha
interrupts between and says 'Kya aap humse hamesha itna hi pyaar karenge'

Jalal 'Ek bar aapna chehra hum bhol sakte hai par tumko kabhi bhi nehi...'

Next Morning:

Both wrapped in white bed sheets. Typical movie wala scene.

Jodha stared Jalal his hairs were on his forehead . She sided away them.

'Shahensha' Jodha whisperer in Jalals ears

No reply

'Shensha' Jodha once again

A childish smile appears on Jalal face

'Aap uth gaye hum jaante hain. Chaliye uth jaiye'

'Nehi'

'Kyun'

Jalal sits up and makes Jodha sit in his lap.

'Kya kare hum uth kar sabha mein jaine fir begumon ki ladaiyaan. Bas hum ab tumhare sath humari puuri zindagi yun hi bi tana chahte hain.' saying this the cuddled Jodha's face and lied down once again...

...

...

Saat janam ke saathi
Hum hai diya tum baati
Ho roshan basera hai ghar tera-mera
Humre chaand ko takne
Taare bhi nikle hain
Haye nazar na lagey tujhko baahon mein ghera

Oh chal hat jao ji
Nazdeek aao ji
Hum toh ji haarey ji
Haan maine bhi yeh Rab se waada kiya haaye
Saanson ne baandhi hai dor piya
Tohre liye humra dhadke jiya
Reh reh ke dil mera tham sa gaya
Chhu ke mujhe tune jab yeh kahaa
Goriya main tere sang zindagi bitaaunga
Rab se yeh maine hai... waada kiya...


COMPLETED...
Edited by Arya75 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
awsome dear...beautiful and romantic yaar...but tooo short yaar...
plz continue it soon... and plz mention it when u update it next...

update next soon plz and with longer one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Monday Tuesday kab ka chala Gaya!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Amazing update Yaar! Want a longer one next time! Excited now!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
WOWWW AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...BEAUTIFUL...
SONG MADE IT MORE NICE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

WOWWW AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...BEAUTIFUL...

SONG MADE IT MORE NICE...


Only thing I liked in Dabaang...😆

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