New OS:Incomplete without you

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys I'm back with another OS.Like the first one hope you guys will like this also.This OS will be updated as parts.I'm writing the first part.Please do comment and sorry for mistakes.


Jodha was sitting in her room.She was trying the new jewelleries and clothes her husband sent.
Jodha(curiously):Mothi...Am I looking special??????
Mothi:You always look beautiful Jodha
Jodha:But Am I looking extra ordinary today???
Mothi:What can I say Jodha if you'll ask such questionss,you always look beautiful still now you're looking pretty
Jodha:Do you think that...(Jodha hesitates to complete the sentence)
Mothi:That...?What Jodha...?(Mothi smiles).Don't worry I'm sure he'll become mad seeing you.
Jodha:Mothi how can you read my mind???
Mothi:I'm not only your baandhi but also your friend.
Jodha:I know...Mothi...woh...
Mothi:I know Jodha you want shahenshah to see you right?????Then do one thing Ammijaan gave me a box and a letter to give to shahenshah.you go and give him.
Jodha:Hum...?????(she turns back and smiles)No I won't.Why should I?.I don't wanna see him
Mothi:Ok...Jodha,your wish,I'll go and give this.
(Mothi was about to leave,Jodha calls her)
Jodha:Mothi..Hmmm..Ammijaan was asking for you.
Mothi:Ammijaan was asking for me? but why?
Jodha:I don't know,I forgot to tell you.You do one thing,you go and meet her I'll give this to shahenshah.
Mothi:Okk
Jodha takes the box and goes away.Mothi smiles."Jodha atleast don't show this drama to your friend..."
And Mothi also leaves.
Jalal was practicing with his sword.Though he was practicing his mind was filled with Jodha's thoughts.Jodha stands behind him silently.Jalal immediately recognises Jodha's presence as it always pleased him.
Jalal:Yes,Beegum Jodha.Anything special?
Jodha:Ammijaan gave this box and letter.
Jalal turned back.For a while he was out of the world.Was it his Hindu beegum or a goddess?
Jodha:Shahenshah????
Jalal came back to his mind.
Jalal:Ha yes,Jodha beegum... why did you brought this?You could have sent this through any servants.Or you brought this so that you can see me?.Jalal smirks
Jodha:Don't ever think like that.I don't have any interest in seeing your face.Ammijaan wanted me to give this
Jalal:Ok,Jodha beegum keep it there.Thankyou for bringing it here.You can leave now
Jodha:I can leave???Whyy???
Jalal(smirking):Jodha beegum do you have anything to say?.I have a feeling that you wanna say something.
Jodha(angrily):I don't wanna say anything but I feel that you wanna say something.
Jalal:No no Jodha Beegum I don't have anything to say.
Jodha:Seriously???You don't have anything???
Jalal:Yes Jodha beegum I'm damn sure...Are you sure??
Jodha:Yes I'm okay. I'm going
Jalal:You must go
Jodha turns back and walks
Jodha(herself):"He won't ever change.He is a demon...Not a demon but he's very mean...
Jalal:Jodha beegum...
Jodha stops walking
Jodha:Now what is it?
Jalal:You're looking beautiful
Jodha smiles.And she walks away.
Jalal opens the box and reads the letter which his ammijjaan sent.He smiles reading the letter.He looks at the box .
Jalal:Jodha beegum what can I do ?situations makes us face each other again and again.

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Ruqaiyya:Jalal..Beegum Jodha wanna take care of this bird,You shot this bird with much passion...
Jalal takes the bird from Ruqaiyya
Jalal:Here you go Beegum Jodha go and bandage the bird
Jodha was surprised to see Jalal supporting her before Ruqaiyya
Ruqaiyya:But Jalal???
Jalal:Ruqaiyya Jodha beegum has stopped me from doing a sin why should I kill an innoscent bird?let it fly free.
Jodha turns back she holds the birds softly.
Jodha:Shukriya(Thank you)

That's it in this part.Hope you guys liked it.I'll continue soon.Do post your reviews.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ausome dear... Loved it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey.. amazing story cont soon n pm me if possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice and liked how jodha kept asking him to get compliment.
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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asusual typical jodha , smirking jalal!!!!
hahaha.. would love to see this in on screenn!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really amazing,the conversation between jodha nd jalal was superb,plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb Start👍🏼
LOved it..!
Plz continue sOon...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice👍🏼
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS..👏 i wnt CV's to take idaes fr this forum for upcoming tracks😉
btw Jalal ws illetrate..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so cute...it also suits the stage of relationship they are in...😳

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