Os: Sach, realisation..*Updated*Part3 pg3

An os on the current track I hope you all like it!!

Jodha in the room, confined by the orders of Jalal. The plot is after the conversation and last episode... I have taken in mind the spoilers I wish to be right!!


Jalal had just moved out of his jodha begum's harem a little satisfied but still burning with a desire to punish her... Give her pain... Crush her ego... kill her with tears of pain...

But somewhere deep in his heart he knew... A part of him knew that Jodha can't be wrong...
He didn't want to accept...
Hence tried to hurt Jodha even more...

He was so lost in thoughts that couldn't realise the happenings around him... he wasn't quite far away... from her harem...

It was only when he saw his ammi jaan rush with hakim sahib he was pulled back in present...
The curiosity burning in him couldn't help him hold back from asking what happened...

Jalal- Kya takleef hai aami jaan? Hakim sahib yaha?

Ammi jaan- Haan. Jodha ki tabyat kuch thik nahi hai... Wo behosh hogayi hai!!

Jalal- Kya? Hum to aabhi unse Mille the... Tab tak to Sab kheriyat tha!

It then struck him... Natak!! It was jodha's natak...

The anger boiled in him...

When ammi jaan and hakim were abt to enter where jodha was... He screamed... In fierce voice... Enough for one to oblige to whatever he has to say

Jalal- koi nahi jayega unke paas...

Ammi jaan- Lakin jalal se Sahi nahi hai... Jodha bekasur hai!!
Jalal- hum kuch nahi Sunna chahate...

Ammi jaan- nahi!!! Hum tumse kuch nahi Sunna chahate! Jodha ko hamari zaroorat hai...

Jalal- nahi!

Ammi jaan- Tum nahi Jante Jalal ki is gusse mein Tum galat kar rahe ho.. Tumhe jab sach Pata chalega To bahut dukh hoga...

Jalal- humme sach Pata hai... Or ye hummara hulum hai...!!!

The voice could not be opposed...
Ammi jaan unwillingly left praying to Allah for her jodha!


In jalal's room-

He just could not sleep...
He didn't know why...
What he heard about Jodha's condition kept flashing on his head..

He could not stop himself from going to her harem...


When he was about to enter he saw someone inside already...


the guards were not there...

he could only hear some one talk but who... and what talk??... he didnt know...

to know he walked forward with slow steady quiet steps...


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part 2 updated!!!

scene continues...

Jalal was shocked would be an understatement...

He saw Feroza Begum with her dasi...

There that lady stood laughing...
This is what shocked him to the core...

FB(Feroza Begum)- dekha kaise Bechari phas gayi...
Aayi thi badi shehensha ko nachane wali...
Ab Dekho Bechari jhoote ilsamo ke beech passi hai or thode waqt me Marne bhi wali hai...

Dasi- par agar sach bahar aagaya to...

Fb - nahi aayega jab tak shehensha us par vishvas nahi karte... Jo kabhi nahi hoga!!!
Bechari... Khana bhi nahi khaya... Tabyat bhi khrab kar li...

Chalo Mujhe Kya mein to Bach gayi nahi... Agar mein hai ban saki maa to kissi ko nahi banne doongi... Cholo yaha se...


Jalal was uprooted... His eyes were red he didn't know what to do...

Ye to trailer tha picture abhi baakiii hai!!!

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plz jaldi update karo...eagerly waiting to know what happens.

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THANKS...AWESOME..WELL DONE...GREAT JOB...I HOPE THEIR IS MORE

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Gr8... Nice written...
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plz jaldi update karo...eagerly waiting to know what happens.
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ab ye dekhna hain jalal jodha se maafi kaise mangta hain

hey!
it was awesome
can't wait more