Akdha ss: Lovestory part 4B and 5 COMPLETED 20 oct 24 pg - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice loved it pls send me the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tahni Babs...
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As I didn't fulfill my promise.. I will give u guyz three updates on Sunday.. It's going to be pretty long.. Hold on guyz.. U will see a huge twist
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

PRECAP:
JALAL JODHA HUG..

Awww
Awesome precap...😉
Par update KidhR hai...?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all 4 prts in a go
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

As I didn't fulfill my promise.. I will give u guyz three updates on Sunday.. It's going to be pretty long.. Hold on guyz.. U will see a huge twist


dear plz do fulfil ur promise... will be eagerly waiting for ur update...

plz ha pakka update karna...😃
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Lovestory
Chapter 4B
Jodha sat on Sukanya's bed. All the scenes flashed in front of her. She was never going to let Jalal touch her! Then why did she continue kissing him. Why did she like it? She felt so guilty.. But his lips were so nice to taste. Stop it Jodha, she thought, you have lost your mind.
Just then Mainavati entered the room. "Shehensha ne humare paas shikayat ki ki aap aachanak waha se a agayi. yeh kya hay Jodha?Jalal ke paas jao.Jodha frowned. "Yeh Jalal bh na! Maasa ko shikayat kardi!" Jodha left the room and went to her room. There she found Jalal looking at her,smirking. " Aab to aapko Yaha sona parega Jodha. Humare paas. Humare saath. Aur ho sakta hai ki wo Jo kuch der pehle huya phirse ho jaye." Jodha was shocked. " Aap ko lajya Nahi aate? Wo ek bhul Tha." Jalal "Bohot pyaare sa bhul. Aapko to Bohot Maza Araha Tha Jodha. Isilye to ghuste chale Gaye. Manna parega Jodha! Aapke hoot Mei kuch jadu hai. Hum baar baar pukarti hai."
Jodha was blushing a bit. How did he know that she liked it? Jodha "Hum.. Hum.. Chodiye" Jalal " to humne aapko pakda Tha." N he winked. Jodha started blushing. This behavior of his drives her crazy." Aapko humesha mazak kyu soch Tha hai? Humme sone dijiye. Bohot nind Arahi hai." Jodha lay down beside Jalal. She was soon fast asleep. Jalal slept while seeing her face. Suddenly in the middle of the night Jalal heard some noises. He got up and found Jodha murmuring in her sleep. " Humare saath yeh maat kijiye Shehensha. Kyu Shehensha? Maar kijiye aisay." Jalal was deeply shocked. Jodha still couldn't get out of the thing Jalal had done to her. Now he understood how deeply he had hurt Jodha. " Jodha Jodha uthiye." Jodha woke up and hugged him tightly. She was drenched in sweat. Jalal comforted her. "Jodha Begum aap thik hai." Jodha" hum thik kaise ho sakte hai jab aap Yaha ho. Aapne humare zindagi baarbad kar diya. Chinta Karneka dhong maat kijiye." Jalal was hurt.

Guyz sorry for using up Hindi speeches. But I had to as I could not imagine AkDha speaking in English. My Hindi is not that good.. As I could not give the update on Monday I decided to give another update to make it up to you guyz..


Chapter 5
Hello guyz! There is a little, slight lemonade in the post below. Si bacche log.. I will give a sign when it starts. Enjoy!


Jodha woke up and found herself all alone in the bed. Jalal was gone. Where was he? Where did he go so early in the morning. Jodha got up from her bed and went to freshen herself up. She then did her morning prayers. Suddenly Moti came and said " Jodha!Jodha!" " kya hua Moti?? Itni pareshaan kyu ho?" "Vi Jodha, Shehensha.." Jodha in a worried tone " Shehensha ko kya hua? Wo thik to hai na? Kahi unho ne kuch kiya toh Nahi?" " Jodha wo Shehensha ki chot aaiye hai. Wo Rajaji ke saath Nashta karrahe the aur kisine akar unko chura mar diya."Jodha was shocked. Without saying another word she ran to her husband. She saw the Hakims treating Jalal. He lay on the bed unconscious. Tears trickled down her eyes. She sat beside Jalal. The Hakim said that they were losing him. After a lot of medicines given to Jalal, he slowly started to improve. The Hakims said that they had to wait until he wakes up. "Shehensha aapko kuch Nahi hoga. Hum hai na. Hume maaf kar dijiye. Hume aapke saath aisay bevhaar Nahi karna Chahiye Tha. Aapko Aana parega Shehensha.Humne aapko maaf kar diya Shehensha. Sacch Mei. Aap Hosh Mei aaiye. Hum apke saath Agra chale jayenge. Dekhiye na aapki Jodha Yaha hai aapke paas. HUM AAPSE MOHABBAT KARTE HAI." Jalal's fingers moved. He slowly started opening his eyes. "Jodha aap to kyu rahi hai?" he slowly said. "Shehensha aap Yaha Rukiye hum Hakim Sahab ko bula kar aate hai." Jalal held her wrist. "Hume Jhodkar maat jayiye Jodha." "Hum abhi aate hai Shehensha." Jodha brought the Hakim with her. "Shehensha Mei thodi sudhaar hai. Unhe aab Aram ki zaroorath hai." Jalal and Jodha were left all alone in the room. Jodha broke in front of Jalal "Shehensha, aapko pata hai ki hum kitne darr Gaye the?" Jalal smiled. "Aap ko Itne fikar Kabse hai humara Jodha?" "Fikar?? Aur Nahi hai?? Aap humare pati hai. Suhaag hai humare." Jalal "Sirf isilye?" "Ha. Aab aap so jaiye. Zyada baate maat kijiye." Jalal smiled.Jodha moved towards the door." Shehensha humne aapko maaf kiya." Then she went away. Jalal was surprised. Jodha forgave him?? He was so happy.

Days passed and Jalal started to recover. Jodha again started to feel for him, love him. She saw the changed man in Jalal. She wanted to trust him again. She could see the love in Jalal's eyes.

Jalal just finished his dinner and was on his way back to the room. In the way, suddenly someone pulled him BT his hand and took him in a corner. "Jodha yeh aap kya karrahi hai?" "Shehensha Hume aapse kuch kehna hai. Mohabbat hai.. Hume aapse." Jalal was astonished. Where did this come from? Was he dreaming? Jodha then kissed his cheeks and ran away from there. This shocked Jalal more. Jodha was totally in Jalal's usual naughty mood. "Rukiye Jodha Begum. Kaha JA rahe hai aap?" Jalal ran behind her, but he lost her. "Kaha tak bhage gi aap? Aap ko to Aana hi hoga mere paas." Jalal went to the room. He went into the bathroom and was surprised. "Aap????" Jodha was in the bathtub. She was covered with the rose petals. " Yaad hai Shehensha, aapne ek din humse kaha ki ek din hum chayenge ki aap humare saath Goshal Khane Mei ho.. Lijiye wo din a agaya." Jalal's mouth dropped. He dreamed about this day. "Mu band kijiye Shehensha, makhi ghus jayegi." Jalal smirked "oho Jodha Begum! Aaj kaal to aap humare jaise bate karrehe hai." Jodha winked at Jalal. "Jodha Hume aur kamzor maat kijiye. Guhd ko sambhal Nahi payenge. Aap khatam kijiye. Hum bahar aapke intezaar karrehe hai.

LEMONADE AHEAD-
Jodha got out of the washroom. Jalal just kept staring at her. Her face was glowing. She was wearing a simple blue lehenga. Jalal " Jodha begum aap to ek Hoor Pari ke tarha lagra hi hai.." Jodha suddenly rushed towards Jalal and hugged him tightly. " aap Hume vada kijiye aap humare saath Dhoka Nahi karenge. Hum apke bina reh Nahi sakte. Agar aap aisay phirse kiya to hum Maar jayenge."Jalal put his hand over her mouth "Aap kabhi bhi Marne ki maat karengi. Hum apse Beinteha Mohabbat karte hai. Aap ke bina hum adhore hai Jodha. Hum vada karte hai ki hum Kabhie bhi Apko Dhoka Nahi denge." He kissed her hand and All the time Jodha was blushing. Slowly Jalal moved his lips closer to hers.

"Hum tere bin aab reh Nahi sakte. Tere bina kya vajud mera.."

Jodha moved away from there. Jalal held her wrist and pulled her to his chest. He cupped her face and kissed her eyes forehead and cheeks. Jodha closed her eyes.

"Tujse Juda agar hi jayenge to Khud se to ho jayenge Juda.."

Jalal's lips moved closer to Jodha's. Then they met. All the sensations awoke in both their body. Jalal took Jodha in his arms and gently made her lay down on the bed. Soon their souls became one.

"Kyu ki Tum hi ho. Aab Tum hi ho. Zindagi Aab Tum hi ho. Chayen bhi, mera darde bhi. Meri aashiqui aab Tum hi ho..."


Morning came by, and both of them found themselves hugging each other. Jodha was blushing. They both got ready. Jalal to Bharmaal and Mainavati "Aab Hume ijazat dijiye.Bohot din hogaye Hume Yaha aaye huye. Hum aur Jodha aaj hi Agra JA rahe hai." Bharmaal and Mainavati both were happy. They have this blessings to them. "Chale Jodha.." "Chaliye Shehensha." They both held their hands tightly and rode off to Agra.


This is not the ending. It was just the beginning of a sweet LOVESTORY...


Hope you Guyz liked my SS!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Tahniat this was amazing!!!👏👏👏 I love the way you write Jalal's and Jodha's interactions and btw... Jodha teasing Jalal towards the end was a nice touch!!👏👏👏 She was so sexy 😛😛😛

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