Akdha ss: Lovestory part 4B and 5 COMPLETED 20 oct 24 pg - Page 11

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

u promise u'll update tonite,and a long chapter plz.

I'm writing it..

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

I'm writing it..

Chapter 4
Jodha's cheek flushed the color red when she realized what had happened. Jalal had seen her in the bathtub! Oh God!
On the other hand Jalal could not help but smile. Jodha's reaction was so surprising. He wanted this to happen one more time. He was lost in his though when Jodha entered the room. She instantly started blushing in embarrassment as he saw Jalal. Jodha cleared her throat to bring Jalal out of his dream world.
Jalal: Jodha can I ask u something ?
Jodha: you are going to ask it even if I say no.
Jalal: Jodha did you like me watching you in the bathtub? I mean by ur expression I thought u enjoyed it!
Jodha mouth was wide open: ur still talking like a shameless.
Jalal with a smirk: what did I do? U were the shameless one who forgot to unlock the door. Forgot? Or maybe u did it intentionally so that I could see u in the bathtub unclothed. Bare body.
Jodha was so shocked. Every time Jalal surprises her with his remarks. Jodha just ignored him and was drying up her hair. Jalal hated this silence. He hated it when Jodha ignored him. Jalal got up from his place and went up to Jodha. " U know Jodha u look so beautiful when u r angry. Those deep brown eyes. Thos lips.." Jodha "Don't even think about spending the night with me. I will never ever allow u to touch me." "When did I say I want to touch u? Did I ever mention about spending the night with u? until unless u want to. I mean I understand a woman's desire. I mean I have no problem..."
Jodha " now ur crossing ur line! I am going to sleep with Sukanya today. Good night!" Jodha was about to pass Jalal when she slipped. She fell on Jalal. They both crashed into the bed. Jodha above Jalal and that's when their lips met. Their lips touched each other. Jodha felt a spark. She couldn't stop. She wanted to but she just couldn't. Jalal on the other hand was enjoying it. The taste of her sweet lips made him almost feel drunk. It was like a drug. Suddenly Jodha realized what she was doing and she pulled their kiss apart. There was an awkward silence... Jalal tried to cool down the atmosphere "Jodha Begum u have become so fat that I couldn't even catch u."

Jodha just got up from her place And left the room.



This update is for Aanchal and Ssreshtta.. I'll update the part B tomorrow.

👏hai maar daala👏
awesome update😳😳😳

Wow this was amazing!! 👏👏👏Yaar an AkhDa kiss?!? I nearly faint from happiness!!... I love how Jalal calls her fat in an attempt to rile her up and make light of the situation. Even he can't deny though, that Jodha affects him... This was such a wonderful update Tahniat🤗... I love you for this!!❤️ I love your Jalal, he's so naughty... Too sexy!!!😳😳😳 P.s. Three updates in one day?? You are a hero!!!👏👏👏.. Thanks for the pm and keep up the great work!!

loved it. now waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: Az3003

Wow this was amazing!! 👏👏👏Yaar an AkhDa kiss?!? I nearly faint from happiness!!... I love how Jalal calls her fat in an attempt to rile her up and make light of the situation. Even he can't deny though, that Jodha affects him... This was such a wonderful update Tahniat🤗... I love you for this!!❤️I love your Jalal, he's so naughty... Too sexy!!!😳😳😳

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P.s. Three updates in one day?? You are a hero!!!👏👏👏.. Thanks for the pm and keep up the great work!!

Azi u r sooo nice.. Thank u sooo much! My Jalal ❤️

U had to give out three updates.. Hadn't update in a while..

Awsome update dear..
Luvd it. ❤️

OMG - a kiss between Akdha and I love how Jalal is making jodha talk by instigating her. U r on a roll, gurl. 3 updates of different stories in a day. You are so creative and ur mind works so quickly. Thanks for updating this. can't wait for next update tom. thanks for pm.

sorry. double post by mistake