Akdha ff: Destiny CH 15 updated (Thread Closed)

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onaisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Wow dii! Great job 👏 😃

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

awesome update...
jalala possessive n jealous...
loved it...

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Mrs.KimJongin

@Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

awesome chapter darling ... Update plxxx 😆

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swetha

@sw123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

wow nice update 👍🏼

update soon

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Superbbb!!!!👏👏 Mindblowing Update Tahni My darling 🤗 Uff ye Jodha n jalal..Nafrat paas aane na de..pyar dur jaane na de😳 Wonderful lovely chap! ⭐️⭐️ Hayye..both lost in thoughts of each other.. Kiss ki yadein..😛😳 Lovely! The way Jalal pulled Jodha by waist in front of everyone.. Oh god Superb! I was turned ON😛😆 Lol..Just loved dat bit! So he's so protective n possessive hun...awsm! He's jealous hun..Deal cancel kardi ! Overall, I loved the chap to bits 😳 Now the precap..uff honeymoon to thiland Btw, the way you write is so cool and perfect!⭐️👏😳 Love it😳! Its got the modern touch writing.😃😳.love ur writing babes! Keep going..u r my cool queen!😛😳

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Great job Tahni!! Mast chapter tha...loved Jalal's possessiveness for Jo!!😳 Update soon!!🤗

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mandy001

@mandy001

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

amazing update... uff jalal z so posessive nd deal hi cancel kr di. wow yr fantastic.

nd nd nd u knw ydy i ws missing ds ff. acrually m reading three ffs on modern era. i ws like whr z dt ff whr ds ds nd ds hpnd nd tdy i thought i vl searched it bt when i came i got ur pm ...i ws like omg mil gyi ff...oops nt only ff bt also update.

dil se yaad kiya..

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

I just loved this chapter, taani. I especially loved when jalal got so protective of her when she came in office. it was so funny to c that he made jodha PA and when surya came he is like she is my wife. so cute and possessive. plzzz update soon. can't wait for precap, tani. thx for pm.

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Mishika

@Mishika123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

It was an awesome chapter ! 👍🏼
Loved possessive Jalal ! 😊
N precap was awesome ! Aww honeymoon to thailand ! It would be fun to read it ! Hope we'll get some more romantic scenes in the next chappie ! ☺️
Please update sooonnn !!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

😃Tani!!! My dear you are awesome👏👏👏!!!!!!!!! Superb writer...😃😃 I just love the way you write every situation with details and their emotions... HIii my Jallu Jalal... UFF... JODHA WAS ALSO LOST IN THOUGHTS...AND SMIRK ON HER FACE shows...kuch kuch hota hai...

After a big kiss 😳😳😳damaka complete silence...why this two are so egoistic... I am really loving the this story going... My sexy Jo and her dress... he stare at her and say Oh I didn't like this color ... how typical... oblivious he loved it and couldn't help but staring at her...

Office staff latoo on Jodha ... and Jalal is so Jealous I really love that part... he is so possessive about her... he gave her PA work😡 and Surya... and Jallu part too good... Jalal itna jal raha tha ki uski kan me se bhi dua nikal raha tha😆... Vow he gave up on business deal just because he saw him staring at jo...U are too good.

entire chapter mesmerized me while reading⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

hooney moon... tani jaldi update kar re baba...

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago