Above 18! (To Shiverz n BL) - Page 2

OMG!!!Wow!!! Devil I am speechless... Its brilliant...👏👏

I really enjoyed the scene in the cabin... I wish Tense and Dense (Ummm.. I love this nick names) could hire you to write the dialogues...

You will be a great competition to Raj Vasant..

awesome. U should approach T&D ASAP for a writer's position on JJKN

WOW, OMG that was so good, it felt like I was watching the scene instead of reading it. It was too good. Well done.👏

🤔 ahem...ummm....uh.....whew! I don't even know how to react...I am a combination of Peaches and Kshreya...Gosh, you would think this actually took place! 😛 Devil Drivers...can we submit this to Tense and Dense somehow???

i'm smiling.......smiling.....still smiling.................... ........can't seem to stop smiling.............ur tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good devil................................................j ust toooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

OMG!!! My fingers are weak as I'm typing this out! My cheeks and ears are hot! My heart is beating fast! I am a big goosep***le right now!!!! 😳😳

I'm in a fix now... the viewbie part of me says - "ahem ahem!! This was a bit sexual!" But the me part of me says - "A bit hot for me (though I'm well past the R-age) 😳, but I enjoyed it never the less!! 😳 The kiss scene was an eye-freezer!! 😉"

Originally posted by: Jassidevi

OMG!!!Wow!!! Devil I am speechless... Its brilliant...👏👏

I really enjoyed the scene in the cabin... I wish Tense and Dense (Ummm.. I love this nick names) could hire you to write the dialogues...

You will be a great competition to Raj Vasant..

Thanks buddy! 😉

eh...i am under 18..but about to turn 18..but i read it😳..shouldn't have😛 ..but you think i could have resisted..errr...it was very ..very...passionate! very good devil_drivers!👏👏👏

to tell you the truth i would not want to see the "over 18" scene on television...even if it wasn't censored..lol..i like the hug and all..but after that..errr..no way....😳🤔

**but still excellent!👏

ya, wen u say under 18 shouldnt read it, its so tempting to not. by that way, that was really bravo and im under 15 tee hee lol! wow, but that was just simply amazing. i loved it. u should have been a story wirter, maybe you should continue writing😃