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Posted: 19 years ago
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Valentines day is tomorow and sinc ei have school, ill have to post it now! If you have additional entries, please PM lashy to add it immediately! im sorry girls😭

Anyways to vote, its the top 2 entries you love such as:

i vote for entry a and b

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Entry 1:

priyaaa and desi_pryde

Hey, we can be besharam too..

under the light of the moon

i stand by your side

as we stare out at the lagoon

and let time pass by.

i turn around to face you

and you lift your eyes to me

as the water and trees stood still,

your eyes are all i see.

i hold your hands to bring you close,

to let you hear my heart beat.

i tell you i love you most,

and no other (wo)man i will seek.

as i brush my hand throught your hair,

you close your eyes in bliss.

i got in too close for me to bare,

and gave you our first kiss..


Entry 2:

Entry 3:

sanam ab to aa ja..gale lag ja, bahut intezaar karvaya, mein to dress, jewellery, shoes sab leke taiyar hun . bas tera intezaar hai.

teri yaad mein ek kavita likhi hai:-

"sagar ki gahrayion jaisi teri aankhen,
aasman ki duriyon jaisi teri aankhen,
dhoond raha hun mein apne ko,
doob chuka hun mein inmein,
sagar ki gahrayion jaisi teri aankhen"

sagar mein jaise aati hain lahrein,
le jati hain wapis sare raaz chupa ke,
teri aankon mein hai vaise hi raaz chupe,
chori chori le gayi mera dil chura ke"

sagar ki gahrayion jaisi teri aankhen...."

Entry 4:

moondust and ~taheera~

PMs get carried away,
writing what i would just say,
if we were to meet;
Face to Face...
Tiki is what they call ya,
Taheera is your real na-,
Tai is what i call ya,

You are a friend,
with no end-,
One in a million,

Yes a friend out of Zillions,
You have a great sense of style,
That would drive any celebrity wild,
To have a stylist like Tai;
Would be an honour insight,

Thats why we have this day,
To celebrate our friendship,
The day i found an
International Friend,
By the name of Tai.

Entry 5:

Entry From the royal couple; His Highness Prince Mike (Mikagurl23@IF.com) Zerikkaiseiiya Nigella Endormphiavilla of the ancient Nianembro Dynasty and his dream Tomato peasant girl (Deepa_iyer@IF.com):

TRIUMPHANT LOWE
You golden oaf called the sun
Aren't you with your mischief done?
Dare you not at our expense, have fun
For your life run,
Else we will shoot you down with our gun!
Why rise you so early?
Why are you with your sleep so miserly?
See not you how we value our privacy so dearly?
Away and make your appearance yearly
O, the sky's a darling red hue
The roses are shining with dew
Hail! Here comes my beau
Naughty sun, take your cue and away with you!

Lover,
You are as tall as a magnificent tower
And as strong as a lawn mower
Kindly go in to that bower
And take shelter under its cover
While I take a shower
Sovereign mistress
Life without you is a distress
Be my bed and I'll be your mattress
Sweet prince; mighty shouldered one,
Kindly hold. I'll be in a moment done.
Ah, beloved; my shining moon,
You are to me Almighty's boon
Horry up! Make it soon
It already is
noon
!
Lover, our love no season knows nor clime
It is above all. It is sublime.
Indeed, precious pearl
Come, let me your hairs twirl
Honey, not so fast!
Wait! Let Cynthia its silvery shadows cast
Hear not you the clock chime 'Ding dong ding?'
Come, with me a love song sing!
Willingly, O glorious flower
To please you, I'll do everything in my power

Let's then, shall we, sing the victory of our love?
Undoubtedly, divine dove
Let's today take a vow
(Lalalalala)
'Till death do us part'
You will forever remain in my heart!
(Lalalalala)
Enough of singing!
I feel like binging
Here comes the food cart
Be a dear and get me a tart?
Later, let's eat!
Feel my heart rapidly beat
Every beat bears your name
You are my glory. You are my fame
Valentine, you are my paradise
I say this thrice
Now, let's go around that tempting rill
And climb the mighty hill!
No! That place is enchanted
By a green vicious demon is it haunted!
Pah! Lover, what a rumor stale!
It's only a tale
Why then at its very mention, your face turns pale?
Enough! Let's go back to the bower
And take shelter under its cover
For your smiles and love, I long
Let's now complete our song
Fume not, my soul!
You make me feel whole

What am I without you? Just a hole!
Sweet, you are my life's melody divine
For your love I pine
I am yours and you are mine!
Lover,
Let's then go back to the bower
And take shelter under its cover
For your smiles and love, I long
Let's now complete our song
Cherished flower; you are gentle, you are wild
You are a riddle, you are a child
My pride; will you be my charming bride?
Yes oh yes, my bright lad!
I will in my wedding gown be clad.
And you will on your face wear smiles glad!
Angels and seraphs will stand in attendance
And this Punic world will smile in acceptance
Yes sweet prince, that day I await with bated breath
After that, I'll say yes even to death!
Foolish love, know you not our love no season knows nor clime?

It is above all. It is sublime.

Physical boundaries it knows not
Now can I no longer wait. Let's tie the knot!
Hear hear! O prince of my senses, you are my life's melody divine
For your love I pine
I am yours and you are mine!
Our love no season knows nor clime
It is above all. It is sublime.
Let's go back to the bower
And take shelter under its cover
For your smiles and love, I long
Let's now complete our song
One moment, Cherry!
(Reader, while me and Cherry
Make merry,
Think of us, pray for our love,
Pray that I may always remain Cherry's dove
Now, go, sleep tight
Let your life too be filled with love; cozy and bright!)
Come prince, let's then in to the bower let's go
You are my life's melody divine
For your love I pine
I am yours and you are mine!
Our love no season knows nor clime
It is above all. It is sublime...

Entry 6:

Hai Minna, jab se tera yey patar pada, dil itne zor zor se dhak dhak kar riya hai, by Gawd, ki maine ek sher likh dala re:

O meri pyari Minna re

Tunne dil ki jo chedi veena re

Yey dil tujh pe hua fida re.

Roj saikil pe tujhe ghumaon re

Tu roj mujhe parathe khila re

Tu dil ki meri rani re

Teri ma ko banaon mein nani re.

Entry 7:

sukh and reetsk:

Sukh:
Aaina dekh ke bole yeh sanwarne wale
Ab to be-maut marenge mere marne wale
Asha:
Dekhke tumko hosh mein aana bhool gaye
Yaad rahe tum aur zamaana bhool gaye
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm (humming*)
Sukh jab saamne tum
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm
Sukh
Jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm -2
Sukh
Chaaha tha yeh kahenge
Socha tha socha tha woh kahenge
Aaye woh saamne to, kuchh bhi na keh sake
Bas dekha kiye unhein ham
Sukh
Dekh kar tujhko yakeen hota hai -2
Koi itna bhi haseen hota hai
Dekh paate hain kahan ham tumko dil kahin hosh kahin hota hai
Sukh jab saamne tum
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm
Sukh
Ho jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

Chorus: hm mm mm mm mm mm, hm mm mm mm mm
Sukh: ha haa haa haa, ho
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm -2
Sukh .Aa kar chale na jaana, aise nahin sataana
De kar hansi labon ko, aankhon ko mar rulaana
Dena na beqaraari dil ka karaar ban ke
Yaadon mein kho na jaana tum intezaar ban ke, intezar ban ke

Sukh
Bhool kar tumko na jee payenge -2
Saath tum hogi jahan jayenge
Ham koi waqt nahin hain hamdam
Jab bulaaoge chale aayenge
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm -2
sukh: jab saamne tum
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm
Sukh
Haa haa jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Chorus: hm mm, hm mm mm mm -5...


Entry 8:
Tumse meine pyaar kiya,

Yeh dil se aaj izhaar kiya,

Tumhari thodi si yeh dil lagi,

Mere dil ko aag laga gayi,

Wada karo yeh saath na chutega,

Drrkamra aur Sharila ka yeh pyaar na kabhi tootega.

Entry 9:

I wake up and he's on my mind.
Another subject, I can't find.
I used to think it was just a bluff.
But now I realize, I'm in love.

I see him and can't help but smile.
Think of him for miles and miles.
Weak in the knees when he comes through.
You know his eyes see right through you.

I don't care what people say.
I want to be with him all day.
Seeing him I can't get enough.
And you can see that I'm in love.


Entry 10:

JK_5 and a4j4ever

"O Romeo, Romeo! wherefore art thou Romeo?"

anyone knows where my romeo is?


JK_5 wherefore art thou?

my heart aches for ya..
my eyes pain for ya...
my brow sweats for ya..
my tears drain for ya..
but where are ya???

Entry 11:

anjubala and sidlum:

sanam ab to aa ja..gale lag ja, bahut intezaar karvaya, mein to dress, jewellery, shoes sab leke taiyar hun . bas tera intezaar hai.

teri yaad mein ek kavita likhi hai:-

"sagar ki gahrayion jaisi teri aankhen,
aasman ki duriyon jaisi teri aankhen,
dhoond raha hun mein apne ko,
doob chuka hun mein inmein,
sagar ki gahrayion jaisi teri aankhen"

sagar mein jaise aati hain lahrein,
le jati hain wapis sare raaz chupa ke,
teri aankon mein hai vaise hi raaz chupe,
chori chori le gayi mera dil chura ke"

sagar ki gahrayion jaisi teri aankhen...."

Entry 12:

by minnie and sowmyaa

Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.

You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.

My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.

Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.

Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.

Oh I can't wait honey to love you, to embrace you, to hold you and to.....love you!



The words "I miss you" can not display
The depths of how I care.

The words "I want you" do not betray
The extent of what I dare.

The words "I need you" can not convey
The extent of my prayer.

The words "I love you" do not portray
The heights of my err.

Edited by mikagurl23 - 19 years ago

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moondust thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
👏 Mikey you've worked sooooooooooooo hard! ..hats of to you! 👏
Deepa_iyer thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: moondust

👏 Mikey you've worked sooooooooooooo hard! ..hats of to you! 👏 👏 👏

👏

True Moni!

awwww Lover, I am so proud of you! You rock!👏

I loweeeeee you!😳

Best of luck everyone!

😃

Edited by Deepa_iyer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Deepa_iyer

True Moni!

awwww Lover, I am so proud of you! You rock!👏

I loweeeeee you!😳

Best of luck everyone!

😃

Awwwwwww😛😛...Dweepa aur Mikey hameesha khush rao!😳😳..true love 4eva!❤️..the Niannenboo Dynasty luvvas!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: moondust

👏 Mikey you've worked sooooooooooooo hard! ..hats of to you! 👏

so true ....👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
yes great job mika.. hip hip hoooray 👏

anyways i vote for entry 1 = ]

btw entries 8 and 9 were well written as well.. great job to all the participants. woo hooo

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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
i also vote for 1...others were also very good
Jia thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
ahh finally read through em! 😆

i vote for 5 and 12.

really good job everyone!! 👏

~kp

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