Poem about Purab/MR2006's Reply

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Posted: 20 years ago
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I had written this poem earlier which described Purab's state of mind. However I never got around to posting it.

Also, poetry is not one of my best skills, so please do excuse me.

The Shadow

He watched from the darkness

His eyes glowing

Hopeful

That she would understand

The depth of his feelings

She was as bright as a firefly

Vivid, pure and full of life!

His heart was a rose

On the brink of blooming

Waiting for the light of her eyes

To shine down upon him

With love

The shadows whispered

But he ignored them

One night

Amidst the silver of the moonlight

She smiled shyly

At him

The rose bloomed

A bright, youthful red

Light filled the dark

Joy glowed golden

Within

The shadows whispered

But, he ignored them

She was there

But she wasn't

Her brightness seemed to fade

Near him

Her tears saddened him

For he could not understand

Why she shed them

The shadows hissed urgently

Scorching him

Yet he would not listen

One waxing past

The moon shone again

Dazzling and hopeful

She smiled once more

But not at him

The rose withered

Shedding bloody petals

The shadows whispered once more

And he listened

Willingly

Turning formless and dark

A shadow among shadows.

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MR2006, I love Purab just as much as you do. Please do not blend into the shadows. Please return to the forum.

Regards,

Mystica

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bhangra rulez thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😊Great poem!😊It's a great poem abot Purab!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏beautiful poem mysti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was absolutely beaustiful!!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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That was an awesome poem....keep up the good work.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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That was just beautiful mysti. I loved it! Fabulous.👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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really awesome poem bout purab!

-mika

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Whoa! That poem swept the carpet off from under my feet! It is a very beautiful, sensitive, emotional and thought-evoking poem. Mystica - that was simply brilliant! Superb!

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Hey Mystica..That was just mind-blowing!👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Mysti wonderful poem yaar 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Great poem Mystica...loved it!!👏👏👏

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