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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thats brilliant! Well done!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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well done! I am glad that the love of Armaan and Jassi has brought u too
us to share your beautiful poems! 👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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congratulations!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks All...Its a nice feeling to get drenched while appreciation showers...

The anthology is published by voicesnet.com, and I am copypasting a select portion of that email...

'Recently you participated in the VoicesNet Anthology International Poetry Competition and it is an honor to inform you that your poem, "IT WOULDN'T HAVE HURT ME THUS", was selected for publication. Congratulations.

Please return the enclosed Permission Slip right away to certify your Selected status so that your poem will be guaranteed to appear in the next VoicesNet Anthology Book series.

When your Permission Slip is received, your poem will then become eligible for possible selection as a Special Recognition or Top 3 poem.

The top 3 poets receive cash, prizes and other honors. A Free competition book and $100 goes to the winner, $50 and a free book goes to the 2nd place poet and $25 and a free book goes to the 3rd place poet.

Remember, there is no cost to you to have your selected poem published in the Anthology.

VoicesNet.com is not a vanity press. Every poem that is received is not selected. We receive and have declined thousands of poems since we started judging in January of 2002. We have received and judged over 55,000 poems since we started our contests.

The VoicesNet Anthology International Poetry Competition books for this quarter go to press on 6/1/2005. This is also the date that the Special Recognition poems and the Top 3 Poems will be announced publicly for the first time on the website. The VoicesNet Anthology contest book orders will then be mailed out internationally by 9/1/2005.

As the author of a selected poem, your permission to publish is required.'

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Posted: 20 years ago
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WOW!!!!! congratulations, alien_visitor!!!! 👏 You really deserve it! 👍🏼
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow!! ....tht's GREAT!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
by the way can some1 guide me to those poems.....and congrats alien.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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On request here is the first poem from Armaan to Jassi

Souring high over wilderness

Dancing among stars and shines,

Never did I see the wind

Blowing that speck of dust on me...

But just a speck, it wasn't...

Never did I feel that

The dust was a tiny seed of Love...

She started to grow like a wine,

A journey from my toenails,

She grew and grew and grew

Slowly towards my tresses anew...

Gripping my heart in her tender hands

Clouding my mind in sweet essence...

Entwining, engulfing, enriching.

Now, not a single cell in me is left

Where she isn't the nucleus...

All my smiles, all my laughs

And all the tears

Unshed, at the back of my eyes

Are just hers, only hers...

In rain or shine,

In sickness in health,

Even after death do us apart,

For ever and some more

I am hers, only hers,

My Destiny...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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The second one from Jassi to Armaan which is selected for publication...

It couldn't have burnt be thus

It wouldn't have burnt me thus

If you had swooped like a vulture

Rather perching like a sparrow...

If you had stung like a poison ivy

Rather shining like the morning glory...

If you had torn like the hounding foes

Rather singing friendly tunes...

It wouldn't have burnt me thus...

Yet still in this inky dark

I could spot a dawn, a spark...

When the sky lightens with

The Rising of the Phoenix

I will up and fly again

From the depths of my own ashes...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow!! wonderful poems alien_visitor!! congrats & good luck!👍🏼

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