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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello, im back(again..) with the 4th installment of my story..hope u like it and dnt worry im sure my thoughts will come true in the actual story😉

Goa resort-Nandu and Jassi are in her room:

Jassi peers through the open window and is mesmerised by the beauty her eyes find difficult to absorb,to her annoyance her mind keeps drifting to thoughts of Armaan..'Kyun mera dil mujhe hamesha kamzor kar detha hai..'..'Nahin Jassi ab tumhe apne is dil ki awaz ko maarna hoga..Armaan Suri tumhaari barbaadi ab kareeb hai..'

Nandu:'Jassi?!..Tum sun bhi rahi ho ke nahin?!!..'

Jassi turns as she is brought back to reality..she smiles as she looks at the annoyed expression on Nandus face..

Jassi: 'Haan haan main sun rahi hoon!..Itna gussa kyun kar rahe ho..'

Nandu:'Jassi, tumhe kuch ajeeb nahin lagtha ke GM is deal se peeche hat gaya? Gm ke liye yeh deal tho bohath zaroori thi..'

Jassi: 'Hmmmm..soch tho main bhi yahi thi..lekin humme kya..hum tho yahi chaathe the na?..Ab Armaan Suri barbaad hojaye ga,aur GM ka naam aur nishaan mit jaaye ga..'

She turns her face away from her friend and is surprised to find her cheeks moist,she wipes away the tears defiantly..a disturbed expression fills her face as she wonders why..Why does she feel so sad for Armaan after all that he ahd done to her?, She had succeeded in her maqsad but yet her heart felt devoid of all happiness..WHY?..

Next morning-Goa beach near the resort:

Armaan walks alone and sadly towards the beach,he looks at the beach and remembers his Jassi-'Jassi hum bhi samunder aur kinaare jaisse the-hum laak koshish karthe rahe milne ke liye lekin kudrat ko kuch aur manzoor tha..'

'Mr Armaan Suri..'

Armaan turns as his heart beats fasten,hes faced by Jassi..'Kyun jassi?,kyun aaj bhi mera dil sirf tumhaare liye dhadaktha hai?..'

'Mr Suri..main aap se baath kar rahi hoon!..'

Armaan: 'Jassi..tum yahaan?..'

Before she can continue they are interrupted by a young woman -Maam,aap yeh kapra dekh lijiye-yeh fashion show ke liye teek hai na..i mean mujhe Nandu sir ne kahaan tha ke aap ko har faisle ke pehle consult karna padega..'

Jassi quiclky tells her to leave and she looks towards Armaan-her secret has been revealed-Armaan will now know that she is the head of Karishma..'Ab tho tum jaan hi chooke hoge ke main hi Karishma ki head hoon..kyun Armaan kaisa laga?..main hi tumhaari aur tumhaare pyaare GM ki barbaadi ka kaaran hoon..'

Armaans eyes brim with tears but he says nothing..'Kyun Mr Suri ab hogayi tumhaari bolthi bandh?..tumhaari khamoshi hi tumhaari bewafaai ka sab se bara sabhooth hai,,I HATE YOU ARMAAN SURI!', mujhe apne aap par gin aathi hai,ke maine tum jaisse insaan se kabhi pyaar kiya..'

With that she turns and walks off,leaving avery tearful Armaan behind..

'Jassi main tho sirf tumhaara sapna poora karna chaatha tha..maine hamesha tumhe apna ek hisa maana..lekin aaj mujhe ehsaas hogaya ke tum meri kabhi nahin ho sakthi..' with that realisation he turns to face the sea..

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aishah thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok some of u maybe a little confused as u might not have read the other parts-lolz there are 3 other parts-plz have a read-and 4give my rubbish skills 😉 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😃 cool... 👏
and do i need to tell you to continue? 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Rubbish?

Honey, the term befits the crap called JJKN best!

Awesome!

😭

My poor A...Gawd! When will the retard open her inner eyes?

Pray continue and please no installments and no more rona dhona pls! We need some romance, some happiness...to make up for what they are subjecting us to! 🤢

JandA Forever!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good going Aishah!


👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awwwwwwww tahnk u very much 4 the encouragement!!-lolz deeps dnt worry there will be happiness in mine!-and lots of regrets on jassis side! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! I'm glad u finally got time to continue!! Par plz yaar...humare dil ka bhi khayaal rakho...bechara Armu tho jeete jeeth marraha hai...plz usse khushiyaan dena...meri pyari si Aish! 😉...but that was a fabulous part!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 Well being called ishu-is better than being called aisah churi 😉 😆 ..lolz i thought my friends were bad wiv my nicknaming 😛 ..anyway abs i promise to give dimpu LOADS OF HAPPINESS!!-JUST 4U!!-and 4 my poor heart which can only dream and hope! 😉 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PS thank u my sweetus who have been bothering to read my story from the start!!-lolz im a amateur compared to mary(enigma) and even deeps!!-so thanks again to my lowely, small but sweet audience!! 🤗 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishah

😆 Well being called ishu-is better than being called aisah churi 😉 😆 ..lolz i thought my friends were bad wiv my nicknaming 😛 ..anyway abs i promise to give dimpu LOADS OF HAPPINESS!!-JUST 4U!!-and 4 my poor heart which can only dream and hope! 😉 ..



Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!&nbs p; As Amrish Puri says in Mr. India..."Mogambo...KHUSH hua!"😉😆😳

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