When dimples finds out-my version!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok i am sitting here like a sad NUT so thought why not take inspiration from my IF buddies and write something..

..She walked clumsily towards the beach,her perfect tresses fell onto her face as the gentle breeze swept over her and the surrounding golden sands..it had been a full month after the party since she had seen him and even though she was meant to feel hate for him,her heart still secretly pined for his love..

She sat herself down and recalled how her life had changed the day she first set eyes on him-his perfect cute face and a smile which would melt anyones heart..she remembered her life then-a tear dropped down her cheek as she tried desperately to feel what she once was-the simple yet sweet Jasmeet Walia-a girl who wasnt afraid of the world, a girl who had now transformed into a lonely sad woman..

Meanwhile elsewhere another person also sat alone and miserable-he had discovered that the thing he was willing to change his life for was all a fake charade-he felt that a child would fill the gap that jassi had left but it was not to be..tears simmered in his eyes as his anger began to overtake him-how could he have not seen through mallikas lies!..he had a meeting with his friend Raghav later that evening,Raghav sounded rather depressed and had wished to talk to him about something..

As Armaan entered the club where he usually met his new friend he saw him sitting alone in a quiet corner..

Armaan: Raghav tum yahaan akele? Kya baat hai tum kuch pareshaan lagrahe ho?

Raghav: Armaan na jaane kyun mera dil aaj bohath ghabra raha hai-tum mere dost ho,haan main maantha hoon ke main tumhe bohath kam arse se jaantha hoon lekhin na jaane kyon aisa lagtha hai ke humaara koi puraana rishta hai..

Armaan:Haan raghav mujhe bhi aisa lagtha hai..dekho tum mujhe apni problem bathao shayad main tumhaari kuch madath kar sakoon..Mrs Oberoi tho teek hai na?..

Raghav:Armaan...jassi meri biwi nahin hai..

Armaan finds it difficult to comprehend what hes hearing..his hands begin to shake as the news sinks in..

Raghav unaware of his friends plight continues 'Humne sirf ek natak kiya tha mere papa ke liye..unhe cancer hai..

Armaan is still in total shock and is no longer able to listen,he gets up shakily..'Raghav mujhe ek bohath zaroori kaam yaad aagaya..mujhe jaana hoga..' with that he leaves,he drags his feet towards his car,finally he manages to smile,through his tears which are streaming down his face he mutters jassis name..He realises that the love that he thought he'd lost is still his,and he vows to get her back!😳..

Lolz u guyz-what do u think???😳😆

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sukh thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😉 😆 very good dear 😊 👏 👏 kaash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW Aishah ... WOW .. Too good .. If only .. It was true ... Kasssssssssh
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mun ko behlane ke liye plot achha hai 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hayee, kaash..kaash 👏😆 Good job Aish!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol....everyone LOVES saying that now don't they? lol...and i TOTALLY agree!! KAASH ye T_D_GK ko ehsaas hota ke pyar hai to aisa, warna kuch bhi nahin!...*sniff*...Go JandA!! Go Aishu!!! That was beautifully written hon! 👏👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow aishah tht was good! I wish this was true though!!!
bye
Hera
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow!! Aishah that was too good... We have so many talented members on this forum... wow!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was great...wy dont you continue? 😛
mystiknova thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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finally...alll da fanfics are back!!!!😆

dat was brilliant aishah...u n enigma have such creative minds.....kaash....kaash...TnD ka dimaag aisa hota....to JJKN ki aisi boori haalat nahin hoti!!!!!! their reputation is gone bad dat every scrip writer is dumping to do da show.

well...i'm glad to read all these awesome fanfics...its better than watchin da show!!!👏

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