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Posted: 9 years ago
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His entire life he heard his mother say, "Son, sometimes love just isn't enough. Destiny and circumstances must favor you too," whenever he asked about his absentee father.
He never understood that attitude. "You make your destiny," he insisted. "Your actions alone determine your circumstances," he decided.

He lived by these words. Strong and fearless.

Until love entered his life. And took it over. Rewrote his destiny.

Now he has nothing but love left to give. But is that enough to win him his happiness?

Or will circumstances defeat him? Will he be forced to pay the ultimate price only to finally understand the truth of his mother's words.

For the first time in forever, his nameless, faceless enemy seems bigger than him. His circumstances beyond his control. But can his love be different? Can his love be enough?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You've written it so well. <3
So true. And yes.. HIS love is going to be enough.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So well written Wish!

The man we knew, he always was so sure of what he wanted, he was so sure of himself and wanted to live life according to his own wishes.

The man I see now is broken inside. He can't quite get a grip over the fact that he was not himself for 3months, he was not independent, the love of his life got married off to someone else - his biggest fear came alive.

What makes me really sad for him is that he's unsure of himself and his love. That's so NOT him :( He knows he will do anything to protect and care for Vividha, that's in their second nature to do so but is confidence has somewhat shattered and it hurts to see him like that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wish 🤗
Lovely post. The man who was self made has fallen in love. Never wanted anything as much as he wanted vividha. He earned her love.

And in a blink everything seems lost. It's only 3 months but it has changed his world. His vividha is not his. That alone was enough to break him into pieces..

Now it's time he trusts his love. Defeats his insecurities once for all. Time to prove his love alone is enough!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: fusilli

You've written it so well. <3
So true. And yes.. HIS love is going to be enough.


Thank you :)

His love alone? Maybe. Maybe not.

But their love. Definitely.

Their love is gonna be enough to rewrite history. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Atharv always thought His love might not show courage and leave him just the way his father left his mother, even though he always feared that Vividha might be separated from him he alaways felt assured when Vividha stood by their love!
Now even though he knows that Vividha's courage never failed the situation & Circumstances around them did! He still does not know what transpired in those three months? He only knows that in the time that has passed and that he cannot remember is that Vividha got married to someone else and that was his worst fear come true!
The minute Ravish dissolved the marriage Atharv & Vividha came back to Ajmer and even if it was for just a few minutes everything must have felt like he had just woken up from a nightmare, weren't we all wondering why is Atharv acting so normal? He was acting normal because he was told that 3 months had passed and it had but he hadn't lived through those 3 months at least not as Atharv Sujatha. Finally Vividha told him and made him understand that those 3 months were 3 days to him and 3 years to her, he understood her and gave her the space she needed. but somebody was using his fears & insecurities to their advantage! Atharv would stop at nothing to be with his Vividha but the question on his mind is that what if it was Vividha who didn't want him? There was a time when he could just look into her eyes and tell what she felt for him even if she was screaming at the top of her voice and denying her love for him but the situation is reversed she is screaming at the top of her that she loves him but he is not able to read her like he used to before because his mind is clouded by his insecurities! His battle before was with Kailash Kashyap An enemy that he could see and undertand but right now he is faced with an unseen enemy that he cannot understand! Atharv is living his worst nightmare!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Reemz*

So well written Wish!

The man we knew, he always was so sure of what he wanted, he was so sure of himself and wanted to live life according to his own wishes.

The man I see now is broken inside. He can't quite get a grip over the fact that he was not himself for 3months, he was not independent, the love of his life got married off to someone else - his biggest fear came alive.

What makes me really sad for him is that he's unsure of himself and his love. That's so NOT him :( He knows he will do anything to protect and care for Vividha, that's in their second nature to do so but is confidence has somewhat shattered and it hurts to see him like that.



So true Reemz! Here CVs haven't kept him true to what he used to be. Atharv was such a confident person and moreso he was confident of Viv. I guess a lot of it may be to do with what happened with his mum, now is happening to him somewhat and he is so out to prove that he isn't like Ramakant that he can't see or think beyond this. He doesn't want to be like him so he do the opposite. Without even thinking that this is his Viv who can't love anyone else but him, he has convinced himself that he will show to be a 'greater' man than Ramakant.

In this he can't even see that there is only one person for Viv.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Wish.

A post on Atharv Sujata!

He must have really moved your heart yesterday, like he did mine.

A simply beautiful post.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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He will know in due time that ultimately it will be their love that will conquer all. He has already been through his sickness phase and was on his deathbed. It was love that made its ways through all those difficult situations. He will win this arguement from sujata this time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written post Wish :)

Atharv was born into the arms of a mother who was already going through a very tough time, fighting society as she did not have a man by her side to hold her hand. He was brought into the world facing those taunts and saw how strong headed his mother was, and that gave him strength to become her strength. He has never allowed anyone to put him down but he was afraid of loving. But nonetheless, he allowed his heart to love his Vividha and the promises she used to make to him, helped him feel secure. However, at times, those securities were trembled by KK, and that brought about various insecurities, including his want of not being like his father.

Even though, his Vividha has come back to him dishing out her marriage, he feels like she can be taken away from him at any given time, so he cannot find peace within himself.

Love was enough to heal his wounds, and love will be able to tackle whatever issues have cropped up because for him, she is his world and her alone can bring such an uplift to his life that he requires nothing else.
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