Dear writer(I don't even bother to know ur name anymore),
Who ever u r ur creativity worked only till 150 episode kya? If u couldn't write the story u would have spared us by leaving. But no, firstly u gave us 3 months divorce track. Honestly speaking I had lot of expectations from it. Sidni fighting with each other, nokh-jokhs ,knowing their mistakes slowly, feeling for each other again falling for each other.facing hurdles again together . making simran and DD know their mistakesin between their sweet romance.
But what u gave?
A best bahu competition, a fake domestic violence, sam's kidnapping drama, rajveer dying, sam's marg 3months finished in one month. If u would have used this track properly , trp would have increased. But u rushed it as if u r going to show something new. And what u gave us papa patel track.
And see how wonderfully that worked, sidni were separate u would have focused on their love story. Sidni carving for each other. But no u need to show DD patels love story at that age. Honestly u felt that all people will be interested in seeing that aged love story?
U failed in it miserably and brought misha's track, which was a bit ok. But seriously u even remember that ur producer said that it's a light hearted story. Come on , who will kill a person like that(papa patel death) after successful completion of misha track, u asked urself what next?
Don't know from where the pregnancy track came. All came to know except groom that his bride is pregnant. I thought u will show sid tries to find what DD and roshni are hiding miserably and comes to know it confronts DD for doing it and some drama with rosh fainting . sid and DD panicking . sid taking care of roshni after marriage. What u gave bua dadi and nani maasi nonsense. SIDNI never enjoyed rosh's preganacy period. No proper scenes . after that from no where a baby jumped into patels house.
After that kidnapping, abortion and adoption track. All dint go well.
Then comes foxy shabnams track. Do u even know what u wrote? U urself made us admit that papa patel is good and u urself made him bad and just a pic is enough to believe that they r step sisters of roshni. Aayesha 6 yrs ,shabnam 22 yrs. 16 yrs gap between 2 children, I dint see any where! That too papa patel daughters with no proper justification.
DD and her daughter were the injured party over there. What was shanam's revenge. I accepted that u took that route for trps. Leave it.
Then comes Raghu track where ur over creativity again turned to creativity. But after that too u dint understand that fans are watching show for sidni. Shabnams band baja in one episode. Again ur over creativity damaged everything. Do u seriously have that confidence on child marriage track! Did it give trp? No. then again u brought shabnam a trp vamp to gain trp. Ok! Do u know what medical science is?
Are drugs available in india like that or the doctors give drugs like that for money. Seriously medical science screwed up! Ok leave jyoti tai track.
Do u even know after how much pleading we got honeymoon track. But ur stupid over creativity spoiled even that. Honey moon track spoiled!Did sid asked yash to marry sam or forced him by putting knife under his neck. After asking yash himself came forward to marry sam. If it hadn't worked was it sid's fault?. Did sam made him that pscyco that he dint even think that he is harming a 6 yrs kid for his revenge. Is he the same person to wanted to marry roshni after knowing what happened with patels?
Ridiculous!
Then comes DD's memory loss track, u got the chance to bring the charm of show back. But as always which track u handled properly that u will handle this? At the end worst mistake DD's death. I know archint as to undergo surgery are plastic surgery kar dete. But u killed DD without thinking abt title and what future track is
I still dint understand why roshni blamed sid for DD's death[see my foolishness iam expecting logic from u]
Then comes s2
A fresh start, showed rosh as an independent woman from an immatured child. Wonderful story u created to make roshni realized her mistake. But next ur over creativity took over ur mind. And another disaster cross marriage. An independent lady turned into abla nari, a doormat and the worst thing is sid helping her to unite with his new husband. If u had brought paal track before cross marg trps would have definitely increased.
After s2 started we waited patiently for 3 months for sidni reunion. U gave it as if nothing happened. Within 2 days aanya realized her mistake, sidni came to know they r not divorced. What a jet speed. Before anything we could understand what we got is the news of 20 yrs leap!
With in one week sidni consummation, roshni pregnant the next day after 3 days baby born the next day sidni dead. Seriously?
I want to ask u one thing, we know nia is gonna leave the show and will work till leap. Did she force u to complete the story within 10th august . or are u that much confident on ur new story.
You know what, even after showing this much utter nonsense crap how still trp never got less than 1.5 . bcoz all sane people felt the show and some mad and insane loyal viewers like us who were watching from start just bcoz of sidni are left waiting for having one glimpse of sidni throughout the episode. And see what we got at the end. "babaji ka tullu".
I don't even want a less trp show to have a writer like u. if u would have used ur resources and actors properly with a nice story then it would have got more trp than KKB. I bet on that.
s-3 foundation was laid on sidni's grave. Lets see how loyal fans accept it.
Hatsoff to ur show now. U can carry on for new fans and trp aunties.
Fan Fictions
