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April30: Sridhar and Sunayana thrown out of the ancestral house.

The three goddess laxmi, saraswati and holy mother discuss what has bahiravnath done and holy mother assures them its all part of the test to justify Shridhar 's faith, shiv and Parvati discuss the same.

Bhairavnath's lead disciple, lets call him M (for the sake of giving the man a name) after much threatening and destruction return to him happily. However Bhairavnath is not happy that he could not kill Shridhar and his wife. The man asks for forgiveness and vows to kill them and bring their blood to B to appease his anger.

Shridhar returns home, he laone have accomplished the aarti and the priest ask him to take care.

As soon as he reaches home, he greet his bortehr with JAI MATA KI

This sparks the fuming brother, along comes his wife too. With much grief , anguish and anger they narrate everything to them and bhabiji doe not forget to add spices to the narration too.

Brother warns Shridhar either he has to leave the chanting of holy mothers name or he has to leave the home.

S: I can leave my life but cannot leave the holy mothers name.

So he resolves to leave. His brother and his wife are not willing to give hima cent. Sunayana supports them saying the house, the money all below to them and its better they leave, that is what will save their beloved munna. However bhabiji hands them over the idol of goddess.

With only the idol of goddess and a burning lamp they roam on the street in the dark of night. The priest offers them to stay at his house but Sunayana disagrees. She says no self respectful amn should stay at his father in law's house. The priest suggests them to go to the purva griha, which the village community built and is a part of the joint property o the village.

Shridhar and Sunayana go there. It's dark, dirty, and full of cobwebs. They place the idol at a high place and the lamp. Shridhar happily thinks it's the best: this way they can only concentrate to do the puja and nothing else. However Sunayana is a little low and she is crying. Shridhar, who was crying earlier is quite contented and he starts to sweep the floor on which they will sleep. Sunayan stopd him for doing so and tehn Shridhar leaves to try and arrange for some food.

Sunayana clears the palce and takes out some old clothes to sleep on. When she goes to the store, she finds all earthen containers empty and full of dirty water.

Sunayana grieves that she is such an unfortunate lady that she does not have anything to offer her husband to eat and devi ma to offer .

In the meantime, arrives M with his gang of boys. They find the house is empty except for Sunayana and so they plan to destroy the house.

They aim a burning arrow at the house.

Lightening strikes and there is sound of thunders. The arrow approaches the house.

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thanks so much for the wonderful update
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thanks so much for the wonderful update

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