Feb 9 Write Up:Ek Anokhi Kaali Raat Massi Ke Saath

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East Coast-Mid West Friends stay warm, safe in side the house 🤗🤗
new actual wrttten promo: Veer aur Ayesha ki dosti pe lagne vaala hai badnaami ka daag. 😃
Recap: VeSha for each other


VeSha in nasha, in their own world, out on the roads, lost,😳😳 ( do no kisi ko nazar nahi aaye chal kahi door nika jaaye type) far from the storm that will affect them later. Poor N pining for maassi, again starving ( one more time creative make him starv and we all go attack them 😡, looks like director as child used to starv all the time, so nikaalo apni khunaas @ N🤣). JJ happy plan is working. DD more determine to win her trophy aka N ka love ( are jaa, jyada bak bak mat kar) VeSHa finally see a ray of light as lodge?? ( or more darkness, we about to find in today's episode)😉

Part: 1 Adhoori Raat Lodge Main

The Lodge looks like is in red line area ( Tiger will sure wonder: kaise kahe hum pyaar ne humko konse konse lodge dhikaaye, press ne issue itne uchaale jo DD ko coma main hi pahuchaye)🤣. Drunken Tiger (DT) wants to make a call phone out of order ( betaam ji kismat kharaab ho toh sab kuch kharaab, or may be it is out of oreder ki kismat giving mauka to spend night wit your gal🤣) Lodge manager ( LM, BTW he is looking like monkey with his cap)) thinks he is naya naya aashik ( babba let him be na??? public aashik ban ne ka mauka kaha de rahi hai??😆) DT asks for two rooms ( oh DT, Arpita is so proud of you, nashe main bhi hosh hai, decently asking separate room for gal)👏, LM replies gissa pitta ever know answer, only one room available ( mumbai Police sleeping kya??? LM ka business running dhansoo), demands advance 500 rs,( teri toh, DT ko bankrupt samajha hai kya) DT gives him 1000, tells it's not fake, orders to give key ( Wow Hu tum ek kamre main band ho aur key bhi humaare hi pass ho), Maassi still zara sa jhoom lu main ( may be thinking Valentind day ke pahle hi night wit valentine) VeSha happy, LM wish to enjoy stay, gets thanks ( DT in heart ya ya abhi toh enjoy maadi, later we will deal with DD, anywyas vaise bhi uska permanent kaam tamaam karna hi hai )🤣
Jhhomte VeSha go to room, DT makes sure he closes the door ( haila, Me skip heart beat) DT smiles very cutely ( I thot saying, wow duniya vaalo se door, jallne vaalo se door, sirf main aur tum yaha tak ki N bhi nahi aur budhiya ka naam le ke do not spoil the night please🤣) DT sees A shivering, covers her with blanket, asks if she is fine, A says yes I'm fine ( OMG no no do not tell me ki ek kamre se ek blanket tak. dirty mind Arpita, stop. oops yeh snow bhi na kya kya thots laata hai😈) me relieved when A asked what happen to world it's revolving?? ( go study science, no wonder you did not know order of the planet)😆 DT agrees ki it's spining, he will stop ( bravo, DT you get all 4 nobel prizes for doing this, no scientist is able to do that till now)

DT asks spinning world to stop, A tells sir forget it, let's sleep, it will fine by it self ( great maasi, you brain cells still active with your innocence) A just passes out, our gentlman goes to sofa to sleep,as A is sleeping too.( I have never seen such a nice guy) A wakes up when hears some one knocking the door, (OMG, precap vaala night mare) Both are still high, DT asks he will check, you stay here, LM tells DT to run, DT confuse why?? ( rite, DT. when you are at not fault why run, stay where you are so cop can arrest you). LM tells what do you expect at such place?? Cop will raid. ( MAn, LM is very cool, not worried, may be running such business over 30 yrs.🤣) he agin ask DT to run. Cop starts taking people out of the rooms, DT goes, try to wake up A. Tells her, they need to leave, A ask where ( hahah police station my sweety), he drags her hand, comes out of the room, shocked to see cops, stands there ( abe run, r u waiting for cop to chase you, when u r on run) listen to arpita and runs wit A in other direaction. A keep asking where we going?? He tells we need to get out of here, let's go ( Hmmmm he is coming back to sens, well police toh acche achheo ko bring back to sens) they try to escape, when lady cop, catches A, DT shocked, cop tells her, hey gal, first you do such rong thing, then go on run, DT ka nasha fully gone, he goes back to cop says M'aam pleae

Part: 2 Ron Place Rong Time

DT tries to explain, nothing like you think, we are good people (in his heart, who hapeen to be rong place rong time), she yells, tell all @ police station (PS), another male cop comes, grab DT telling hey hero well you want, like t to have fun na I'll show you what fun is @ police station ( see maasi what I meant by, fun will be gun) VeSha drageed out side, A starts crying, requesting to let them go, they did not do anything, ( maasi cop toh chod bhi denge, budhiya ka soch). Cop shuts her up. DT tries to tell that they are gentleman, cops mock wow, that is why you come such nice place. ( DT sure dancing on sad version of aaj main ooper aasma neeche, aaj main aage jamaana hai peeche,)😭 Cop tells him tos stop nautanki, give your statement @ PS, maasi crying, requesting to let them go ( like telling them whole life I will never drink juice wit DT that tooo if minni gives🤣( good thing, nash gone). cops yells her stop doing drama, you should have thot this before coming to line ( youuuuu how dare you call my Cinderella, call gal) Price charming hurt, shaken hearing this goes on to say, you can not talk to her like this ( bravo, say this to u r mom too) Cop tells DT to stop making scene just keep quite and come to PS.
VeSha do a honour of riding in police vain. DT tries to cosole A @ Juhu PS. He tells her not to cry ( then what she should do??? congratulate you??), he tells all will be fine ( she in heart, mom ko nahi jaan te apni?? aur phir Me more worried about your repo??), he tells her to have faith in him ( air head DT is faith ne hi toh yaha laa ke khada kiya)please A do not cry ( in heart; how many time I've to tell you A u r tears just kill me❤️) DT tries to make Police inspector(PI) understand that they belong to good family, so please let them go, gets answer I know, all are from good family, but do bad things out of the house, so just shut up. DT tells fine, I know my rights too and I have right to make a call ( good one, haila Himani????? Tuesday ko hi??? A ke aansoo ka kamaal kya???) and you will respect the right, so can I make a call??? PI stands up in anger, does not say a word but let him make a call ( looks like he is kinda thinking ki DT may be big shot) PI orders his sub note name, addresses of all, put them behind the bars. Dumbo DT calls Mom ka BF, tells him all ( D*** it DT you have no friend in akhaa mumbai???? you do not know any lawyer??? Himani I take my words back😡)JJ happy, goes out of his bed room. DT tells I did not know what to do so called you ( Arpita can tell you what not do ever again is to make a call to JJ for anything, even if YUMDOOT taking you. he is worse than them). A is crying continuously, please do something fast and come soon to bail us out. JJ shows fake concern, tells him he will be there with his Pimp ( khattu), good you did not call MOM varana situation could be worse (in heart yaa, My plan would have spoiled) tells him not to worry. DT thanks him ( noooo kill him yaar) hangs up, console A, all will be okay, I have talked to DT ( that is why naothing will be rite, now you see what mess you end up with), soon we will be out of here, trust me all will be okay ( no maasi do not trust him for this, yes you will be out, but you know KK na)( but I did like DT ka concern about A, that really is good sign for future) Cop interrupts the convo, oreders not to talk much, gives details.

Back in MH jj manooing jashn plan worked, ( I tell you one way it is not, DT will say soon ILU to A, you will be so dead)JJ pinch himself to make sure it is not dream. same time start day dreaming about fullfillment of his dream. Talks to himself DT-A caught spending night togetherin cheap lodge. I'll not get second chance ( OMG, is he going to sale this as a headline????) Back to PS, DT behind the bars ( tere pyaar main dildaar jo hai mera haal chaal), A crying badly, gal tells her how much do you cry at least your guy is wit you,( A in heart yahi problem hai na, raj ddep ya subhash hota then I would have not cried, but now woh KK nahi chodegi) gal goes on my guy does not even recognize me ( coz u r guy is worried baout his married life and DT is thinking using this incidence to convince mom to marry wit A). Another gal tells A, my guy ran away, you shoud be happy, ki yours is trying to save you. Rite then realization hits A, she looks up to DT, but cop calls next yellow suit come here aka it's A's turn. DT looks on. A starts crying more, cop yells to come fast awwwwwww maassi🤗🤗

Part: 3 Baaki raat Juhu PS main

A walks slowly while looking to DT. Cop tells her you look new what is your name?? ( OMG, so she knows all about gals, Hmmm means snow ke kaaran PS main lodge vaalo ne hafta nahi daya, isliye raid🤣) She yells for her name, A tells, DT broken, looks to her sadly, she asked phone no, A looks up to DT, He signals her to say no,( D*** DT you still worried about your rapo, just accepting she stays in your house will save her all humiliation, now I have doubt if you r going to save her from KK's wreth or not) A tells she has shifted recently, so has no phone. Cop tells wow u r new in line, but know all about it, see what excuse you come up wit. ( maasi never makes excuse, she is always rite.) DT really is hurt seeing A crying and broken, getting insulted like this. ( I just hope ki only possible good that he says ILU to her on 15th, rosh counting starts now)

VeSHa spends night @ PS. ( phew. man proposes god aka Creative disposes, DDLJ ka kachra, no night in DT's suit🥱) Cops makes DT's morning good morning, by telling him he has bailed out ( well, Khattu got him in mess so he has to bail him out fine, but yeh JJ ka ghada paap ka kab bharega😆) JJ asks if he is okay, sees A gives stern look, good that A does not lower her eyes first but look straight to him👏( Yes maassi u r not at fault, he is🤗), then lowers down come to stand next to DT. JJ smiles at his success ( well JJ some time yeh chooti chooti success, badi badi musibat main daal deti hai)😆

DT is embarrass tells jj he has no idea how to thank him, JJ replies you want to thank me for this ( in heart, you should kill me rite here, I'm master mind behind all this is n't it khattu, why do you think we are bailing you out??? we need headline for tomorrow, I have no feeling for you😈) He plays same card that good know one knows and we sort this mess out ( in heart, now whole mumbai will know tomorrow as headline including your mom)Pimp nodes yeh mera boss is impossible aka baadshah ( DKB)
DKB softly humiliates A more by saying sorry, he was busy preparing bail papers, so he is late, but undersatnds how difficult for a sharif ladki to spend a night here. ( in hear I delibratly did not come, I wanted you two spend night here, woh picture neede for tomorrow news paper na🐷) but how did this happen Khattu gives him unbelievable look ( do I see khattu ki dead aatma getting back to life??? hell no😡) JJ waiting happily for answer, gets shock to hear DT replying, 👏👏so stops him ki we will talk on way home. let's go home. A folds her hand in appreciation😭 ( maasi sandal se peet. He does not deserve your thanks) JJ stops her, says let's go home. DT is shocked to dead seeing A like this.

Part: 4 On Guit Trip

Naalayak Avinash (NA) makes A feel more guilty ki N was waiting whole night for you ( in heart woh baat alag hai ki I maade him to do that, by not coming here😡) NA humiliates VeSha more when he keep on talking about, good that all sort here or else think about image, this all happen and I did not know ( in heart well I knew but did not want to say this😡) I thot you were with deligates, (DT is like hey dharti maa abhi good main lele🤢) NA pulls trump card of her GF, ki mom also thinks you are in hotel with deligates, so if she ask tells the same lie what I told her ( so I get my plan fully executed😡) VeSha steal a glance, he signals her to get in car, ( oooo both of them look so cute)DT opens door for A.( bas do one more thing support her when your mom yells)
Our Fantastic Four ( VeSHa, pimp, NA) reach MH. DT says he is sharminda about what ever happen last night( ammma ghonchu raam, kuch bhi toh nahi hua raat ko, 😉 ohh I know you are sorry ki kuch bhi nahi ho paaya varana A hum log abhi mandir main shaadi kar rahe hote🤣) A says she is going to see N. A leaves, KK telling she is going to see lawyer for trasferring the property. Sees DT asks where was he whole night, DT going to think 24 hrs what to answer aka screen freezes at his shocked face.😲😲

Tomorrow: Monika Scandel
NA telling KK that DT was stuck with police deligates 😉@ hotel,😆 boy trying to sale news paper to KK that has news tycon DT caught @ dingi lodge with his wife aka house keeper ( great, so Batchelor Clinton and Monika,) KK shocked to death. 😲(let the stroke hit you, goog luck)

Winner of the day: Congratulations
Forum member I do not remember who said ki JJ will sale this to news paper.
Please come forward to tell your name so I can add here.


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Thank you
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Arpita times😃


Some thing I would like to see Tiger saying to Maassi

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d6xqrLzZXK4[/YOUTUBE]


Enjoy
Arpita😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wat a confusng update sory i didnt gt a single word...
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Originally posted by: Barbie12

Wat a confusng update sory i didnt gt a single word...


I'm sorry too
wish I could help.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks arpita...O Veer dear was just delightful today!!! I really liked his antics of making the flooring stop moving...lol and his caringness towards Ayesha was too cute.
Poor girl Ayesha...how wretched....though she has gotten really good at crying (have we seen a show were she has not cried)...poor thing.
Now back to Veer....Arpita, Himina, Payal, Anj(were are you??) Kiran, Kanchi, Kuttu, Rosh, Tia(gzzeee your exams are long), pink, and all......How cute was he, but Gonushu mode is gng to make an appreance again abiding by JJ side again.
I bet JJ set the whole presswalia stun to ruin the family name....Arpita...hope for the best with DD getting a Stroke or Heart Attack
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Chukar hai aj ki watt se bach gaye About todays episode ..it was fine episode with veer looking adorable and ayesha with moonsoon rain eyes with thunder 😆
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arpita...you know what....Gonushu..he must have been reading our posts as to make a move and all....but i think he wasnt paying attention carefully....instead of walking quickly..he ran and missed some steps 😉.
These two days have been quiet interesting and soooo much fun!!!!! new promo tomorrow or Thursday?? what you think??
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Arpita- your update was excellent as usual and I loved it. Thanks again for taking the time everyday to do this for us.👏👏
Today's episode was good as we get to watch Veer be protective towards Ayesha. Alas- me fears a relapse of the unwanted track from tomorrow as the creeps are going to redouble efforts to humiliate Ayesha. The silver lining is that I think we'll see V come through for our damsel (once more) in distress.
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Originally posted by: kiran_rd

Chukar hai aj ki watt se bach gaye About todays episode ..it was fine episode with veer looking adorable and ayesha with moonsoon rain eyes with thunder 😆


haaa yeh rona dhona aur paas le aayega.
but mera din toh shuru hi kharaab hua. check the post immediate after my update
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haaa yeh rona dhona aur paas le aayega.
but mera din toh shuru hi kharaab hua. check the post immediate after my update

Oye its ohk yaar ...barey Barey shehron main aesi choti choti bateen hoti rehti hain 😉
Tiger Biscuits khao aur sab bhool jao 😆
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Arpita- your update was excellent as usual and I loved it. Thanks again for taking the time everyday to do this for us.👏👏

Today's episode was good as we get to watch Veer be protective towards Ayesha. Alas- me fears a relapse of the unwanted track from tomorrow as the creeps are going to redouble efforts to humiliate Ayesha. The silver lining is that I think we'll see V come through for our damsel (once more) in distress.


Shruti
TOm first half, JJ telling lie to mom, later JJ telling khattu, how he managed to give head lines via some one to papers.
A sees N. DD leaves, a bit consoling moment with VeSha,
we will see DD yelling on thursday or may be last minute tomorrow.
Friday, veer sees ayesha in bad state.
Monday towards the end finally he confesses his love to her.

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